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Ho ho ho, Merry Christmas!

Have you been good boys and girls? Here's a stocking-filler for you on this festive Xmas morning!

I hope you all have a great holiday!

Best wishes,

Santa-Tefler

Comments

Hugo

Thanks Tef!

Bryan

Thank you!

Jeff P

Merry Christmas Tefler!

Muledrvr

Woo hoo 1st this time lol

Knucklehead

Merry Christmas Tef! And thank you.

Grolan Knight

Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year

Cignal

Thanks Tefle, Best Holidays to you and your family.

Shree_Pratham

We really appreciate it. Merry christmas to you and your family. Please sleep , I think its quite late now in UK.

Nchalada

Merry Christmas indeed!

Taco1085

Thank you sir and Merry Christmas to you and your family

Jon

Thank you Tefler! Merry Christmas everyone!

Mjk154

Thank you

Evan

Thank you, Tefler! Now enjoy the rest of the Holiday Season with your family! :-)

Moon Dragon

Woo hoo! And just when I was wondering what Santa was gonna bring me this year. Merry Christmas to you and yours, Tef. Hope it's a great one.

Philip Hannum

What a lovely way to end the day. Thanks TEFLER!!!

Guy House

Thanks Tefler. Merry Christmas and a happy new year to you and yours.

Jeffrey Chadourne

Thank you Santa!! I hope you and yours have a Merry Christmas!!

Steve

Thank you, Merry Christmas!

Matt

Thank you kindly Tef. All the best to you and yours. Hurrah and huzzah!

Tony

Thank You and Merry Xmas

Unctadsk

You brute. At this hour... Merry Christmas.

Marauder

Nice, thank you and have a merry christmas!

Evan

Brokulrun’s fleet -> Brokurlun’s fleet

Howard

Thank you and Happy Holidays all!

TF4EVA

I must have been a good boy. Thank you Santa Tef...... All the best to you and yours Tef and again a big thanks

a Norman knight

WooHoo! Merry Christmas Tefler and Happy New Year!

Big Dude

Merry Christmas Tefler and Family. Oh yeah, Merry Christmas to all 3000+ Tefler fans!

BluDraygn

Dayum... a chapter from me, Annabelle Hawthorne and Tefler all in one day! Our readers are having a helluva Christmas Eve! Merry Christmas to you and yours Tef : )

Forester

The ending made me chuckle. Merry Christmas everyone!

Bp Hlpt

Thanks, Tef!. Merry Christmas!

andrew finlayson

The ending WAS funny, but also a hell of a cliffhanger. I wonder if Dana is going to be able to weaponise this somehow?

Evan

Irillith disable weapon and flight control -> Irillith disabled weapon and flight control

LoC

Merry Xmas!

Simorthelast

Merry Christmas Tef! and a Merry Christmas to everybody on Patreon!

Evan

Do you grow wearing of having skin? -> Do you grow weary of having skin?

Evan

leaned so much.” -> learned so much.”

Evan

waiting until I give you want you really want...” -> waiting until I give you what you really want...”

Evan

Tashana’s widely stretch lips -> Tashana’s widely stretched lips

Evan

Tefler, this was a very good chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and as the others, I found the ending to be... intriguing...

Kensyi

Fucking hell, that I think was an amazing ending to the chapter, so loved this chapter, laughed so many times

Taco1085

OMG what an ending. that is amazing.... black to white and now Dana will be able to figure out how to replicate it so it will enhance their chance to defeat the other Progenitors.

Mick Peaper

Happy Christmas Tefler, thanks

J B

Merry Christmas back to you & yours, Tefler. Imagine, Santa Tef putting a bed on the naughty list!

Mudbutt McMerkin

Merry Christmas and best in the new year. Love the present.

Heinz Molck

Merry Christmas to you and your family - and THANKS for your effort!

recurve33

Merri Xmas! joyous noise! thank you Santa!

ringill

What a splendid Christmas present to wake up to and, bearing in mind it was posted at 2.41, it means you didn't have to go to bed before no.1 son was up to check his Christmas swag! I did spot a merry festive normal/telepathic speech mismatch: *Take care of your fleet and protect those women under your command,* Edraele urged her. “And I promise it won’t be the last. Do you remember John’s promise to you?* A very Happy Christmas to Teflers old and young.

Poniatowski

Merry Christmas Tefler, and all the readers here

Horny Rhino

Tefler, I've said it once before, and I'll say it again... You're An Absolute Genious And I Wish I Could Write Half As Good As You!!!

Mike

Merry Xmas

Robinson Cruzoe

Wow.. Can t be thankfull enough for all this work you do. Quick question. Do you have in mind or found any references for that rune hexagone table. I d love to see how much alike we could be about that. By the way.. 1 + 6 + 12 + 18 + 24 = 61 not 51... Thanks

Norbert Borer

Thanks Tefler. There are 61 runes in a precise geometric shape (not 51). I wish you and your family a Merry Christmas.

John

Perfect Christmas present. Thanks Tef, Have a good one everyone

Servo1969

Oh, dear. I'm getting "attachment not found." Is this happening for anyone else?

thomas

Wwwooooooo, thank you

Kinky-Kong-Keith

Oh boy, I'm growing more and more concerned about Alyssa every chapter, looks like its up to Helene to keep the group from sinking deeper into the Abyss, and that ending with the twins, easily one of the best scenes in this story with them! And that ending too! Wait, was it just the bed that turned white or the whole ship? Btw, what are Rahn and Jessica up to? Seems to have been ample opportunity for them to show up out of nowhere. Perhaps when Gahl'kalgor comes after John? Damn I'm stoked!

Robert Todd

Thanks so much for the wonderful story. Jades my favorite character and I love when you write the "shoot 'em up" chapters!

Brandon Yarberry

So much foreshadowing... A lot of it is making me nervous. Bravo.

Dave Barrack

Gah! I didn't realize the combined 127 had a whole other section added to the end.

Bob Clarke

Lovely Chrimbo pressie TY Tef. Must admit, as thrilling as it's been, I'll be happy to see the back of this Kirrix arc for a while... must've started around the time of the Terra invasion back at 100.

recurve33

Hmm, if Jack and Mateo are scheduled to be on the "Lion Taxi" to the core,...is poor Mateo gonna be on Emily's shit list permanently? I would be a little put out if I were left behind *pout*

Pat White

Thank you Tef. I hope you and your family have a very Merry Christmas.

James St. Clair

Great chapter! Thanks for releasing it in its completed form. Merry Christmas!

Being Free!

Tefler, I really liked the humor, toward the end of the chapter. Well done!

Lee Sherman

Best xmas present ever! Thank you Tefler!

a Norman knight

Tefler, great chapter! I found some suggested edits for Chapter 128, and some may have been mentioned by others already; however, they are as follows: Page 16: She (Her) lips curved up in to a smile.; Page 43: They walked over to a full(-)length mirror near her closet; Page 48: Irillith disable(d) weapon and flight control up there on the Command Deck, as well as down on the Combat Bridge.; Page 51: “The Trankarans are very brave, but that would (be) terrifying even for them.”; Page 59: “Do you grow wear(in)y of having skin?; Page 61: Unlike the billions of Galkirans he ruled over with an iron fi(r)st,; Page 64: I’m closer to you and the girls the(a)n I ever was to anyone in Neptra village.”; Page 67: Helen(e) suddenly looked unsure of herself.; Page 69: “My perfect Maliri princesses... just waiting until I give you (what) want you really want...”; Page 71: Irillith leaned forward to kiss Tashana’s widely stretch(ed) lips,; As always, if you disagree, I completely understand. Good luck with Chapter 129. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

steve angel

Thank you Tef for the wonderful Christmas gift!!! I love your writing, and this story. Have a happy holiday season with your family. The new one is probably not into it much yet. But I am sure he has added much joy to your holiday. Thanks for your continued work! Black to white, I guess love conquers all. Should be interesting when the black ships start deteriorating around them!

Jim lynch

Thanks for the gift buddy and what a lovely gift it was. A reflective chapter to reinforce the love 💗 they share I enjoy these type of chapters especially after a battle even a short battle like the last one. We get a new enemy too another full of himself prick soon to wish he stayed at home. I wonder if John starts a trophy case too lol I can’t see it myself.

Roy Ogden

OMG I can't believe we have to wait till next year for the next chapter. Merry Christmas everybody

Lawrence Hyde

From the "Did Not See That Coming" file: What an absolute stroke of genius to make Helene's ability to share emotions the key to defeating the black armor! Can't wait to see how that plays out. And I stand by my (much, much) earlier suggestion that love will be the key to developing the Crystal Allysium version of the black armor.

Marie E Ward

I loved that! Merry Christmas! and belated congratulations on your little Tefler.

Kensyi

Reread 119, holy shit Sarinia plans way. A head that conniving bitch

Kurt Robertson

Did anyone else catch that our favorite blondes new method of navigation creates gravity waves capable of destroying entire fleets?

Thanatos95

I long figured the black metal was evil, possibly forged with psychic power made from thrall sacrifices given the talk about a "soul forge". What happened at the end of this chapter seems to reinforce that idea, and now they can counter solid hate with Helene's weaponized love. The progenitors wont see that coming.

MJHSharkbait365

Sure hope John is upgrading Lilyana. The Malari could use military strategy genius on the front lines. Would be a waste of a load just to grow long hair.

A Human

Thanks for the Christmas gift Tefler. This one was a fun read. I think my favorite part was the Nymphs playing king of the raptor. Their personalities are really getting developed. They need to get boosted defensive shifting quick because of their psychic energy potential. John has to get to Brimor to save Cephna too. It was good seeing Lilyana finally getting rewarded, and hilarious how Joh's matriarchs keep pimping his stud services to women for favors. Excited to have the Maliri fleets outfitted with the new white love metal, there's a lot of work to do on Genthalas. Could we maybe get a peek in on the Drakaar and their pod mothers next chapter. John should send them in to deal with the Kirrix while he focuses on the big stuff. Have a great rest of your holidays and see you next year.

Alex Wright

What canone say. The lad has done it again! Seasons greeting to all

Darrell Van Ember

Drakaar...hmmm...maybe send them fishing! Give them an idea what it feels like to be eaten alive!

Phatsuo

The best ending yet! I was laughing so hard.

Kinky-Kong-Keith

Just reread the chapter, with Alyssa pushing John more towards genocidal tendencies and black and white morality, and Helene trying to pull him away from those temptations, does anyone think this could end up leading to an argument between Alyssa and Helene that will get ugly?

john

Will Dana review the shuttle internal sensor logs and develop a love/ sex/ orgy weapon that destroys black metal?

prsstarid

I wonder how Gahl'kalgor found out Baen'thelas name? I'm assuming it was from Xar'aziuth.

prsstarid

I bet Dana will figure out a way to make the Wormhole Generator not make them sick to use it like it current does the Thralls. No mention if it does the same to Progenitors or not.

Shep

Excellent chapter as always, but I wanted to re-read from the start and just wanted to ask, I know chapters 2 to 57 are on the storiesonline site, but thought the rest were here. And I can't find chapters 99, 100 & 104 - are there links to these here or should I just get those from storiesonline as well?

Who Me

storiesonline has all the chapters from 1 through 125. Chapters 126, 127 & 128 are on Patreon only.

Mudbutt McMerkin

Those poor buggers out on the outer rim are about to get hammered again......Since Arcadia is somewhere just beyond the rim in Kirrix space and since Arcadia is the planet that Gahl’ was sent to I’m assuming this general area is where he’s building his warp gate. Gonna be hell on the tourist trade.

Mudbutt McMerkin

Random thoughts coalescing.......I wonder why the girls haven’t twigged to the idea of an un-hackable command network using Ashanath. Put a couple of Ashanath on every ship and viola.....everyone knows what to do without any detectable signals.....

Don's Projects

How does Patreon.com work for someone just wanting to find a good place to write, post drawings and designs, maybe a video now and then, mostly for myself, friends and other cheapskates?

Sparky's Wife!!!

Okay I'm sorry if someone else said something about this already but i found a oops in the story line .. but in chapter 94 Tef writes... The House Valaden Fleet Commander gave him a warm smile, her aquamarine eyes twinkling as she played self-consciously with her long white hair. “It’s wonderful to see you again, Protector.” “It’s great to see you too, Lilyana, the longer hair really suits you,,” he said kindly, this being the first time they’d spoken since topping her up a second time on Genthalas .,” now in chapter 128 The third woman he’d only met once before, when Lilyana had been with a score of House Valaden senior officers, who were added to Edraele’s network of wards with Jade’s tentacular assistance. The Fleet Commander fidgeted with her short white hair and he could immediately see how eager she was to see him again. and Alyssa slipped her arms around the Maliri Fleet Commander and hugged her from behind. “Because John has a very big cock and he doesn’t want to hurt you.” As she kissed Lilyana on the nape of her neck, she gently caressed her trim stomach. “You’ve only had a small taste of him so far, but he needs to fill up that lovely tummy with his cum.” don't get me wrong I love the scene but she can't get topped up twice for a second time.

Rat

Liquidate > liquefy (or liquify, if you are so inclined). Also, if you care: starmap > star map; warfleet > war fleet; powerbase > power base; flightstick > flight stick; sling-shot > slingshot; roleplaying > role-playing; asscheek > ass cheek; bedframe > bed frame... you probably don't. Thanks anyway :-)

Kensyi

Also in 120 Faye thinks about telling John what she saw on the INTERNAL cameras

Jammus1

What a great chapter!!!

Oldwood

I know that I am a bit late but , Happy Holidays everyone .

Jammus1

Kensyi...Please remind us. What did she see? Why are you bringing this up? I don’t follow.

rich ed

Why have they not yet discussed/examined Larn's staff?

John Jameson

expanding rings in factors of six -> expanding rings in multiples of six. (Presuming this is meant to show how math-savvy Alyssa is - the factors of six are 1,2,3,6.)

prsstarid

I wonder what Maria's present is going to be? It is being purchase so it will be nothing that Dana made like a armored car with all the bells and whistles. You know like a battleship grade force field, Auto-Tracking Reaper Cannons, a Stealth Generator, A Null Gravity Gyroscope and an ultra quiet overpowered engine that has no speed limiters so she can our run a star fighter or the Jericho Police.

Jammus1

Yeah Paul! Seriously.

Jammus1

And I hate to say it again, but seeing a glimpse of what will likely be the secret weapon that defeats the other progenitors feel like Tef moving closer to wrapping up the story. I don’t want it to end!

Dan Ferguson

Excellent chapter and the ending--interesting, they broke the bed!! Something hidden in this message??? All I can say is more, more , more. It was a very interesting Christmas present.

thomas rodrian

Do we have a date for the next installment yet?

Dean R White

I just had a thought. Will Gahl be able to find John easily due to the tracking device Larn put on the Invictus? Rahn was able to locate the Invictus after they left Arcadia, so unless John and crew find and disable it, or Rahn catches up with him and tells him about it, they are going to lead Gahl straight to the Maliri. Is it possible that the tracking device is what Faye saw?

Kensyi

Mad Jonah, what's happening with him?

Ralf

Gahl’s trophy room has all the past progenitors he’s defeated. But I thought, very rarely do Progenitors ever fight each other in battle face to face, as Rag explained to john. Am i missing something or do you think maybe Gahl is extra sadistic and looks for the battle face to face unlike most progenitors and “their rules of war”?

prsstarid

Perhaps when the sword becomes fully operational, it will John be a better sword fighter. The other thing would have to start training with either Rahn or Luna.

Newnotsure

Is there a 2nd part to this chapter

Evan

Best Wishes to Tefler, his family, and to all my fellow TSM-fanatics for a Happy, Healthy & Prosperous New Year! Looking back over the past year, we've seen a lot of changes occurring for John & the crew, and even more for Tefler and his family! May both journeys continue in an equally or greater positive light!

ClarasBestFriend

Just being hopeful, any chance of anything being released today?

Kensyi

Back in chapter 20 Alyssa states she hopes to never face the Kirrix again...... Sorry hunny that is your biggest opponent so far lol.

Kinky-Kong-Keith

This is just occurred to me, but John is pretty much taking up Mael'nerak's mantle. All but taking guardianship over Mael's creations (Terrans, Ashanath, & Trankarans), taken his place as king of the Maliri, is wearing his clothes now, and is even banging Mael's descendants (all of them!). Everything that was Mael's is now his, and yet, John is the son of Rahn'hagon. The man Mael blew himself up trying to kill. Is the irony of this whole situation lost on John and crew?

Craig Robbins

I really enjoy this story. Thanks

Golden-one

When's the next chapter coming out? Out feels like a decade since the last one. Happy New Year Teff. Hope you have a great one.

Big Dude

Will Alyssa utilize the Larn staff against Gahl's matriarch? If Gahl 's matriarch dies will he lose his minions' power feed? WIll Tefler remember the staff in the upcoming battle? SInce John power's up his sward with eldritch power, won't the sword be more baaaaaaaad azzz with the cat girls being more powerful now? With John being exposed to that level of power now his mind can handle it because he will be in the normal realm instead of the spirit realm. Why hasn't Rahn and Jessica made a paragraph or two appearance? At least a sentence or two more between Jessica and Rahn on how fast his FTL speeds are now as she should be wide awake again. Will 25 shaped metal survive a progenitor blast now? To add to the list of dangling participle arcs #31) What about Tony and the girls from Karron and the black metal object? #32) What about the black metal object in Ashanath space? #33) What about the Maliri/Terran trading zone? #34) What about the Maliri males moving from the edge systems?

Who Me

Will Alyssa use her "hyper bow wave" to plow through the Brimorian fleets? She said if a bow wave met another ship in hyper-warp it would be very bad for the other ship.

Big Dude

Happy New Year everyone.

Big Dude

Will Alyssa use the hyper bow wave on thrall ships?

Arrowglass

Mael, Rahn and Larn enjoyed freedom from Xar aziuth while under the Shroud! What kind of influence, if any, will Xar have over John when he finally leaves the cover of the Shroud to go after Larn's Thrall Fleet?

citymorgue2 CM2

So we have 2 interesting colour changes. Dana making the ship a different colour for a while, which some suggestions that it's a white version of the black metal. Then theres Helene making white cracks through the black metal, like antimatter. If so, Can they weaponize it?

Kensyi

Any status updates?

wclark57

Trying to calculate when Rhan's worm-hole generator will be charged relative to the timeline in 128. By my guess it would have been somewhere around the 4 to 5 hours they were with the disabled Kirrix fleet, or shortly after they left it. Any better ideas?

Lawrence Hyde

I'm sure this has been mentioned by someone, but I don't recall it, so I'll throw this out: John has now essentially committed to doing exactly what Rahn'Hagon programmed John's guide to prepare John to do: exterminate all the other Progenitors. The confrontation between John and his guide may wind up being something of an anticlimax.

Kensyi

I'm wondering when John will create Gaia class planets in Trankaran space and also recreate a planet for Nsskrit

Coin of Gold

Correct me if I'm wrong, but can't Dana now instantly kill anyone, including a progenitor? She's able to create small (and large) black holes, and has been demonstrated to be able to do so without direct line of sight to where she's making one (when she stopped the Kirrix ships, she can't actually see through the hull of the Invictus). Thus Dana should be able to create a black hole one the other side of a shield barrier, specifically directly in an enemy Progenitor's head, which would instantly kill him. Furthermore Dana's powers seem to be outside the normal Progenitor abilities. John certainly believes so, and either Larn or his Matriarch (I can't recall which) saw the destruction Dana caused with a black hold in the barracks on Larn's ship. Whomever it was (I believe it was Larn), they were unaware of any type of weapon that could produce that type of damage, indicating that it's not just John lacking information, but that Dana's powers seem to be truly new for modern Progenitors. Side note: Is there a collected Wiki for TSM? There's enough information in these books to need one.

Taco1085

if you are a patreon member they have a timeline of the story on discord that breaks down all the important facts for a quick reference. I use this all the time to research information. You can join discord by following this link: Permanent Invite to the TSM Discord https://discord.gg/ByA4Xv5