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*** EDITED - FINAL VERSION ***

Hey everyone!

I've completed the chapter and added the final scenes to the previous post, but I thought I'd  post it fresh here to avoid confusion. (You haven't been charged for this post).

It was an interesting challenge to incorporate the patron choice for Tamolith's fate into this chapter. There were a wide range of opinions on the subject, so I hope I ended up satisfying most people! 

I'll get stuck into chapter 135 now and the long-awaited confrontation with John's Guide. The plan is to have it completed before the end of the month and I'll give you a status update when I'm half-way through.

Cheers

Tefler

Comments

Hugo

Thanks Tef you made my day!

Rogue

Thanks Tef

Ryan Shannon

Always great news to hear. Looking forward to how the new narrative threads work out. Thanks for all your work Tefler!

Navekiller059

Can’t wait till the big confrontation with the guide. Keep up the good work

Russ White

Happy Birthday to me, happy birthday to me, new chapter from Tefler, Happy Birthday to me...

Evan

Thank you, Tefler! Best to you and your family, and I hope that your father is doing as well as he possibly can.

Aurora Musis Amica

While Rachel's curiosity outburst over John was a bit surprising, having Tamolith join as a dragoness isn't out of character for the crew. This is the group who have systematically created links with the galactic powers. Edraele, Niskera, Lynette (and threatening to replace the admiralty with secret Lionesses), and now Tamolith are connected. The Ashanath are fully on board and would never seek to go against John. Only the Enshunu, Brimorians, and Drakkar are not under John's lordship at this time. (Drakkar are somewhat placated, Enshunu are finding Achonin tech, and the Brimorians are due for a reckoning) All that... and the readers appreciate 1. Sexy dragon girls (Okay, we love the harem aspect and the idea of a new unique girl is great!) and 2. Redemption (Many times the story veers into a very black/white morality because of how many of the Lionesses, Alyssa and Sakura mostly, have understood the universe to be. So for John to put his hand out with undue mercy is... cool. It's an underutilized concept in a universe so filled to the brim with magnitudes of cruelty and constant war. But when it does show up it does have important ramifications.

Rhys

Ouch, I my faux spidey sense is telling me a certain Matriarch is going to cause no end of trouble...... I hope the Malari Matriarchs will be OK...............

James Hârn

Betrixa was amazingly hot in her segment... she has wonderfully dirty pillow talk.

John Jameson

The one lesson of this story is that if you are going to be a sociopathic leader of a galactic civilization, you should better be female.

Grimlakin

Mmmm. Fuck yesss.. Been looking forward to this.

Nonconformist

Naaah, still don't like the Tamolith storyline in this chapter. That said over the years this story has been written I have read more than one comment that Tefler ( in order to be a better writer-- Bull Shit!! ) needs to kill off a main character. If he ever decides to do that Tamolith would be my vote.

Brandon Yarberry

I think he pulled off the recruitment in a very well done manner. Tamolith wasn’t going to reform on her own, and John wouldn’t have been able to abandon the Kintark people to such a fate. And it lets him be helpful, merciful, and compassionate all in one.

zingowner

"How many Brimorians got passed you?" past?

eclipse

I thought Tamoliths children all dying was very sad (but obviously there was no other way to achieve the desired outcome) am reeeeeally hoping that nothing happens to Kali that would be as bad as Faye... (yes still remember her... maintain the rage...)

Thanatos95

killing the kids, harsh. Bringing Tamolith into the fold will be interesting. I picture her become something like Alexstraza from warcraft in her humanoid form.

James Mayer

Does this mean John will end up making a Brimorian Queen

Mr Smith

Dana couldn’t help laughing at that. “Yeah, amazing what three square meals will do for a girl...” Chapter 115, as they say on Cinemasins "Roll credits" 😁

Dan Ferguson

That last submittal was great, good battle scene and the depiction of Tamoliths grief and then her agreement to join John's harem. Should make for intresting possibilies as the war with the projenators loom ahead. Keep up the great work and the very long story thaat will never end, I hope!

IanBio

I am puzzled as to why John and Rachel are so sure he can impregnate Tamolith. So far we know he is fertile with all the Thrall races and with the Progenitor constructs of the Rockmen and (I may be wrong) the Nymphs. The Kintark are a naturally evolved race. It is far from obvious that John will be able to impregnate them. It would be rather less likely than his being able to impregnate fish (Terran ones, not the Brimorians).

Mjk154

THANK YOU tefler hopes and prayers for your dad's health

David

Wont lie i was expecting john to use his giant form to get head from tamolith. But then again her teeth are probably an issue

Yemi Odejoke

These are thoughts to the upcoming chapters....... I think Edrael will be so furious at Sarinia that she is going to reject her as Matriarch. She will eventually trust her upon Alyssa who will in turn reject her because of the undiscovered Psychic bloodline created by Maenarech. The only probable solution is Irillith who is more powerful as a parallel Psychic: I think this newly Psychic power is creating organic hatred among enemies. Mael was able to use it to reduce the armies of Renagon because they are in Millions. This particular power is directly opposite to Helene and after Kali saga, John will have no choice but to banish Sarinia to the Invictus under the watch of Irillith.

Yemi Odejoke

The Baeloran family posses this hatred psychy and that is why Edreal has been finding it difficult to control Sarinia's mother

Yemi Odejoke

It was a weapon and John was able to repress it as a progenitor but how they are going to deal with Sarinia on the invictus is what I don't know

Yemi Odejoke

Please don't ask me that Edreal can not reject a thrall. Remember John gave them the Will

Yemi Odejoke

This will be the first time Edreal will be exercising that Will

Yemi Odejoke

Also, Alyssa will be the one to discover this Psychic manace. You know she likes to probe

Yemi Odejoke

My mind tells me we will be witnessing an enemy on the invictus since Irillith and unfortunately Shinatobe. Alyssa is not a thrall race and also a converted Kaftanerian. So she is capable of kicking her a**. Sarinia is valuable for upcoming war against other Progens

Yemi Odejoke

Honestly, I really don't know Sarinia's goal. I agree with Edreal for been suspicious. Is she picking that resonance of Psychic power? What will Sarinia gain by reaching out to Kali after Edreal's warning against manipulation? Maybe her powers will be awaken after she sets eyes on John and mistakenly see Alyssa and Edreal as rivals rightly predicted by Edreal in the past chapter. Only Tefla can answer to these questions. Well done Tefla, you are a master of intrigue. I doff my hat.

Yemi Odejoke

Lol. Sarinia sound to me like a character from horror movie. Anywhere she enter becomes gory and bloodletting.

Yemi Odejoke

The Terran girls are protected Psychically by Alyssa. The Valaden Queen, her Twin daughters and the white haired Maliri are psychically immune. The Nymphs are batteries and nothing can touch them. Anyone outside these groups are dead if she wills.

John Gregory

On a completely separate note... just read a post on Facebook about the name for Terry Prachett fans. Where Dr Who fans are called Whovians and J.K.Rowlins fans are called muggles; what would the name for a Tefler fan be? Might I suggest Teflons? 😁

BigWooSon

TSM CORRECTIONS Chapter 134 Feeling a sense of dread, Libtegh had to ask, “What are you/your orders?” Zorlin could guess what that/they were planning and shook his head

Dai Stiho

After a solid 3 weeks of binging the story on Literotica, I was starting to go into withdrawals before finding you here. Chapters 131-134 have been like a nice little hit of sugar before having to go keto for a bit. Thanks for a great story! Keep going!

John Jameson

More Elon Musk-like, so I would suggest: Teflerati

Mr Smith

I don't want to come off as being rude after this last chapter just was posted I have a bad case of Veruca Salt coming on because I want the next chapter now. But in all honesty I don't want to rush Tefler. Also hope your dad's getting better.

Rhys

Hope your father is doing OK Tefler, I wish I could do more than just wish him good luck!

Ovorious

I wonder if the real strength that John has is not that he is bread to be a propagator killer, rather he is doing something that seems to be an anathema to the rest of them and that is he has many different matriarch’s from different species. It seems like all the propagators we have seen have only used one species to dominate then build a soul forge. I wonder how much of a bigger player a Tamolith is going to be, (next matriarch?) Thanks for the updated chapter! hope you and your family are doing well in these weird times!

BigWooSon

Most posts concerning the new team member is her appearance?? I’m more interested in has John just made dragon males extinct like male Nymphs? If things follow procedures, She & John’s offsprings? Females - Dragons Males - Progenators

Greeps

Going to be interesting to see her transformation...but will the kintark serve a female looking Tamolith. It's seems until now they only follow the strongest and largest dragonkind.

Mr Smith

Could Alyssa be a Kyth’faren and not a Progenitor. although that may be splitting here since I think the progenitors are just evil Kyth’faren if I understand the backstory of the evil demigod.

Ovorious

I think she is a female Kyth'faren though I kind of wonder if John is just a male version of the Kyth'faren not a Progenitor; they seem to be just influenced by Xar'aziuth who they sell their souls too.

Mr Smith

I wonder if the next chapter will cover the execution of Tom.

Steve Chatterton

I have a question about Ailita and the timeline of the story. When all of the girls were accounted for just before the battle of Kinta there was no mention of Ailita. It seems like it has been more than 14 hours since Ailita's rescue from Arjun Khatri. Is she still taking a nap?

Ovorious

It will be intresting, though I also wonder where Mace is right now? and if they will bring in that with the whole Brimorian cleanup which May or may not happen with the race to the warpgate

rich ed

Or Rill hacks the fish boys data and finds out that a Tfed officer was framed

Brian Woods

So, finally getting time to sit down and repost my comment that seems to have disappeared when I attempted to edit it, here goes: First of all, well done Tefler. Combining the end of 133 with this chapter made the flow of battle much easier to follow and built up excellent levels of tension that moved the fight nicely from end to end; good show! Knowing what was to come, that last bit of interaction between Tamolith and her brood, Zulkayr especially, really tugged at the heartstrings hardcore. I might have thought you would throw in a psychic echo or two detailing the final stand, but perhaps the execution would have been too over the top to detail. Onto my main point of slight disappointment, it seems we can clearly see the end of my speculations: while the recruitment of the Dragoness was quite respectably done, the details have laid my thoughts and hopes to rest. For Jade to have produced enough excess material to fill Tamolith’s stomach, because she herself cannot create John’s male spend, it makes sense that she would shapeshift the extra stuff out of her own powers. This likely indicates that, much like the Hulk when he grows bigger and stronger by pulling energy from an alternate dimension where he stores the gamma radiation, so too Jade and probably John draw material from the Astral Realm to increase their mass. Ergo, the body that is formed is not a true genetic representation of themselves, but rather an Astral copy, rendering it not real for biological purposes. Therefore, even an increase in size for John’s stuff will not increase overall potency, as the extra mass is not actually his: rather, while it might affect someone of a larger size in similar fashion to a smaller girl, the smaller girl would need to consume everything to achieve the normal effect. Unfortunate, as this shelves my ideas on rapid recruitment, but c’est la vie! This would have been overpowering, so I can understand the reluctance to indulge. As a final note, it seems Sarinia, as others have mentioned, is in the process of signing her own death certificate. By further involving Kali in her schemes to appeal to Baen’thelas, she risks even more ire from his wrath. Though, I won’t lie, there is a part of me looking forward to Edraele flexing her psychic muscles to fend off what might be a coup de’tat against her status as Maliri Queen. Looking forward to the coming chapters!

Mr Smith

I think that Kali is going to be kidnapped by Sarinia. So that she can set up Edraele to die but trying that on a telepath and telekinetic is very foolish. We have not seen this version of Edraele being as mad as Alyssa. I wonder how much effort it takes to clean little blue girl chunks out of the carpet.

Mr Smith

Edraele has already had many years of practice with her telepathy and her telekinesis. Ril had only a nodding acquaintance with her pyrokinesis and only after a few weeks of training is phenomenally powerful. I think somebody is about to get a mindwipe.

Mr Smith

Just checking. How's your dad doing Tefler? Hope his treatments are going well.

Mr Smith

Okay I'm starting to think I'm a little bit obsessed with this story. Last night i dreamed about matriarch volleyball. Sarinia as the ball.

Mr Smith

To quote the grey's "Glorious globes and spheres".

wolverine006

On a technical note, when John activated external lighting that wouldn't necessarily give away his position. Active night vision devices have built-in IR emitters, so unless the species in question can see in the IR spectrum, he would still be concealed.

Greeps

I also wonder...if tamolith does turn "human" at least human sizes wouldn't the create mating problems with the enhance males Rachel said she could engineer...and would her new children be like her or as her original children...maybe after the change she will forgo the idea of children with her own kind and rather went johns children as all his other girls do.

Mr Smith

Did any of her predecessors daughters / consorts survive the Brimorian onslaught?

divovido

To summarize jade feeding tamolith john's cum and tamolith getting a belly bulge and the talk about tamolith shape shifting and talk about tamolith having child with john: *insert meme* I'm disgusted but Go on.

Mr Smith

Chapter 131 was just posted on SOL. So there is some movement on the Tefler front.

B S

it will be interesting to see if Tamolith can shed enuff mass through the change process to become thrall sized or if something else will occurr.........

Big Dude

It seems my comment about how Alyssa grew to become a matriarch was obliterated from Patreon too. Really Sad!

Tefler

I find Patreon seems to take umbrage with repeatedly editing a post. I think the best way of adding a lengthy well-reasoned comment is to type it into notepad first, then just copy/paste it into Patreon. I did look through all my recent notification emails, but I'm afraid I couldn't find the text for your comment.

Martin Edmonds

You and Sir Winston give me a reason to wake up everyday. Love this story and love re-reading it many a time

Big Dude

I hope to read this afternoon he's sent the first half of the epic mind battle to his editors.

JoyofCal

Mr. Tefler we don't know how the system automatically shorten our messages with selected things only. I don't know if this message will come to display. Result -we have stopped writing views and criticism both good and bad. Njoy.

Mr Smith

Sadly Tefler lives in Britain I believe and his time zone is vastly different than anyone living in North America, Hawaii or Australia for that matter. So if the editors go through extremely quickly it will most likely not be posted for another day or so.

Mist

Awesome chapter, but damn you and cliffhangers lol. Thanks again for another chapter looking forward to the rest.

Mr Smith

It's coming it's coming it's coming (rocking back & forth in darkened corner)

Big Dude

There hasn't been the five day warning. I hope we don't get a half a chapter this time.

Big Dude

Telfer, are you going to have someone re-render your master space picture with a white Invictus being 250 meters (metres for some folk) longer?

Big Dude

My original comment about Alyssa being a matriarch and responding to previous comments was something like this: John Blake was abandoned by his mother Jessica. Due to this abandonment, John was instilled with human values from his restauranteur grandparents. John didn't know about his progenitor heritage, but knew he was somewhat different because of his pointy ears and his quad. he also knew women responded to him strangely when his spunk was drunk. He was a warrior among warriors. He was appalled by the civilian slaughter of Buckingham's predecessor on that planet. While at Karran Alyssa Marant stowed away onto John's ship to escape Karran. When John explained to Alyssa he wanted her as a girlfriend he mentioned that his spunk caused women to enter a funk. She wasn't being groomed to be a matriarch by John. That happened behind the scenes as he didn't know or understand his heritage until Bad Edraele released PJ. So in short order Alyssa becoming what she is I think is because of Edraele, not something John originally came up with. He had no interaction with Rahn, only knew of Mael'Nerak and progenitors later on. My four farthings.

Big Dude

It's much shorter than the original thought I had.

Mr Smith

So I've noticed that my comments that are posted in the patron app are not shown on the patron website and vice versa. Very odd.

Roger

Maybe this will make it easier for John to restore the Vulkat

divovido

time for F5?

Mr Smith

I have a spare keyboard already and set for the F5 Marathon.

John Jameson

I would be happy with a partial chapter release which is not some last minute thing. I dislike how the patreon dynamic drives the creative process.

Grandizer

I have an eye appointment tomorrow where they will dilate my eyes, so I am probably the only person hoping the next chapter does not come out tomorrow. :D

Xaero

Hi Tefler, do you have any thoughts on making this series as a separate non-sexual version also? I know the 3 meals and all that stuff is central to the plot but just wondering if it can be tweaked. I am on my second reading from the start and I find the larger story so much engrossing that I skip the sexual content alltogether. Its just that the larger story arc is so much fun... different worlds, species, politics, betrayal so on so forth.. all this feels like an amalgamation of video game mass effect and the expanse series.

eclipse

It's interesting that you say this... I have been wondering this for a long time... mainly because I believe that by it being an X rated novel Tefler is missing out on a huge market that would love this story... Seems a difficult ask though as the core of the storyline is intrinsically tied...

B S

There is a big market for erotic fiction....an even better market for erotic Sci-fi...

Ivan Palinkaš

You know I was hoping to read new chapter on the beach here in Rovinj but f.. it. Just can't wait to see how end with his guide.

Rhys

Hope your father is doing OK.

Aurora Musis Amica

Ground Control to Author Tef Ground Control to Author Tef We want TSM 'cause it really is the best Ground Control to Author Tef Commencing countdown, month's almost gone. Check with your editors and may God's love be with you. This is Ground Control to Author Tef You've really wrote the best And the fanboys want to know when we'll get there Now it's time to post the chapter if you dare This is Author Tef to Ground Control I'm writing thirty k That's not as easy as you might say And the world looks very different today For here I am, sitting in the Invictus Far above the world You all might be blue But I still have writing to do Though I'm past 20,000 words I'll need more time to write And with all thats happening it'll have to be alright Tell Mrs. Tef I love her very much She knows Ground Control to Author Tef F5 is dead, there's something wrong Can you hear me, Author Tef? Can you hear me, Author Tef? Can you hear me, Author Tef? Can you- For here I am, sitting in the Invictus Far above the world You all might be blue But I still have writing to do

Mr Smith

Sits at his desk with three extra keyboards practicing his F5 taps. Tongue tap check, elbow tap check, nose tap check, followed by the ever more important keg tap. 😁

Newnotsure

Lol dam I am just drinking more rum tonight SO I can sleep lol

Tony

Waiting is the hardest part

John Jameson

I'm not sure Tefler appreciates how much he is doing a valuable service to us during this crisis by providing such wonderful intrigue, writing and entertainment. While the situation in the UK (where Tefler lives) is somewhat stable at the moment, there are many uncertainties there, and still more in other places. I am sure that following this fascinating space opera is a wonderful escape for many people, including myself.

alan johnson

hey Tef, you really need to see this

Heinz Molck

15 hours - and running....

Metheus108

I think the chat here is just FUBAR now. I liked a post, then added more comments only to find I had liked a different post. Saw something similar when I added more comments. Then I refreshed everything and it did it again. Not that it matters, I am here for Tefler writing and that is spot on after John put the bugs in their place ;)

John Jameson

I think Irilith mistook (?) Patreon for a hostile agent, hacked its systems and turned it on itself.

Evan

The good news is that I'm expecting a post from Tefler sometime in the next 589 minutes. The not so good news is that I don't know what kind of post it will be, but I wish him and his family the best, and I hope that all is going as well as it possibly can for them.

Mr Smith

That's only one court ruling, it could always be overturned or dismissed or even altered.

AlyxHaestrom

I've been rereading and I don't know how I missed it the first time that Tom Walker has the same eyes as Dana!

Guy House

23:40 31/7 in the UK. Morning coffee at GMT +8 waiting for 135. F5 F5 F5 F5

Nick White

Please you all are slaves to the f5 key , and need to learn patience. It's sad you beg and plead and refresh . Breathe deep go for a walk and chill out . Ok it's been 32 seconds where is my damn chapter my finger tip is sore

John Jameson

Sadly, communication is not Tefler's forte. I suspect that the best to expect is a post at 2:30-3am BST (1-1.5 hours from now) with perhaps a partial chapter.

Paladin

I think he has till midnight Pacific Standard Time (PST). Patreon is based in San Francisco USA. For those that miss the BST meaning, it stands for British Summer Time. The British equivalent of daylight savings time here in the states.

Oldwood

i do hope all is well with Tefler , i will gladly pony up even if it is after the arbitrary deadline . family is the most important thing , not a clock .

Anon Anonymous (edited)

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2026-09-07 11:00 I hear patreon is having some legal issues with banning people. Might want to check out subscribestar.
2020-08-02 16:19

Immer

Why do I get the impression that Tamoliths brood was killed off just so she could join the Harem? Just as I was starting to like those feisty dragons. Damn...

steve angel

Tefler, I am in awe of your abilities. Like everyone else I always want more. but I could not imagine anyone producing more quality material then you do! I am please that you continue to produce this wonderful story. don't worry about those who complain about timing. they would complain if you wrote 3 chapters a month. and you do since other writers have 8k word chapters! thank you!!!!! and have a wonderful year!!! PS. ask Patreon to add a donate button. I think you would be surprised at how much you would get extra each month.

Bp Hlpt

Chapter 134 “Where in the depths is he?!” the Shoal Master raged, grinding in his teeth in fury “Where in the depths is he?!” the Shoal Master raged, grinding his teeth in fury After watching the Nymph rest on the flagstones floor, After watching the Nymph rest on the flagstone floor, -or- After watching the Nymph rest on the floor's flagstones, Tamolith’s pupil dilated in surprise as her tastebuds Tamolith’s pupils dilated in surprise as her tastebuds -- needs to match [then those amber orbs glazed over]