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*** EDITED - FINAL VERSION ***

Hey everyone,

I've done some editing for chapter 136 (mostly typos) and merged the two halves together. Here's the combined and edited version.

Cheers

Tefler

Comments

Kris

Saw this pop up and got excited thinking it was a new chapter... Hope all is well

SGU29

Thanks Tefler. Take your time and stay safe & healthy

McNik

Great! Will there also be a combined chapter 135? Or did I just miss it?

Bp Hlpt

Thanks, Tefler! I hope you and your family are doing well, my friend.

Evilebob

Damnit...I shouldn't have re-read 136 again this week. If only I knew this was coming.

Mac of Alden

Thank you so much, and there is still time for the start of the next chapter to appear as well, maybe :)

Bob Laughner

Thanks, Tef! Great cliffhanger. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Mapper

Thank you. Probably your best chapter since #100 (my all-time favorite). At many times in this saga, I have concluded it is a work of pure genius. And then you top yourself. You have at least a three-volume trilogy with a major publisher here after a little rewriting to tone down the sex for the popular market. Think Dune. Chapters 136 (and 135) were a brilliant resolution to the big event we all knew was coming, and at least to me contained enough resolutions while at the same time surprising and delighting.

Mapper

Oh yeah, when you turn this into the three-volume best seller, please have an editor do most of the work on the conversion so that you can devote yourself to the writing of the sequel(s), prequel, and new tales about some of the supporting cast immediately after finishing the full 3SM.

dakota downey

Got my Hope up for a new chapter I know this one was hard on you but you keep getting better. Out of curiosity how far are you on the next chapter

thomas rodrian

Thanks Tefler. Can you do the same with 135?

GDay (FMS)

Thank you Tefler we really appreciate all of your hard work. I hope that all is safe and well in your world.

Mjk154

thanks Tefler keep safe

ringill

Just having a re-read to flow nicely into the new chapter and spotted this, They dug through the bags of rubbish, finding lots of stinking mess but nothing else from the electronics store... until Alyssa pulled out a bag from the bottle of the pile. Shouldn't that be bottom of the pile?

ByzFan

Holy crap awesome chapter thank you!

Bp Hlpt

Chapter 136 A swirling barrier formed in front of John, blocking his charge and bring him skidding to a halt, A swirling barrier formed in front of John, blocking his charge and bringing him skidding to a halt, -or- A swirling barrier formed in front of John, blocked his charge, and brought him skidding to a halt, just as the undulating appendages lashing out to strike his hex barrier from a dozen different directions at once. just as the undulating appendages lashed out to strike his hex barrier from a dozen different directions at once. -or- just as the undulating appendages began lashing out to strike his hex barrier from a dozen different directions at once. on one condition...” She flicked a glanced at Neysa, then back to him. on one condition...” She flicked a glance at Neysa, then back to him. The bright lights from the bars and shops made the places looking so exciting, The bright lights from the bars and shops made the places look so exciting, they hugged again to show there was no hard feelings. they hugged again to show there were no hard feelings. forming a sequence of runes that didn’t appear on the Kyth’faren runic alphabet. forming a sequence of runes that didn’t appear in the Kyth’faren runic alphabet.