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Three Square Meals - Chapter 137 (Patreon)

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2020-12-01 03:58:38
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2021-01-10 23:36:50
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*** EDITED -  FINAL (10th Jan) ***

Hey everyone!

Here's the latest chapter, I really hope you enjoy it.

I'm thinking about adding another scene, which I'll write tomorrow morning. As soon as it's completed, I'll add a note to the post confirming that it's been updated.

Cheers

Tefler

Comments

DeepSpace

Awesome thanks man and i hope you and yours have a great xmas!

Hugo

Thanks Tef!

Koa

Woot!

Hendrix Morton

Nice... Needed something new to read tonight! Thanks!

PRL

Woo hoo!

Taco1085

Thank you sir.

Tony

Yay!!! I didn’t even break my f5 key😝

Youkai-sama

YES! Pins and needles BE GONE! *dives into reading*

Raenon

Woo! Thanks Tefler!

Ryan Smith

Lol I got went to the bathroom and my phone dings😏. It's like going to the bathroom when you're waiting for your food to be brought out to you at a restaurant.

Braw

cheers mr

Evan

Thank you very much, Tefler! Sleep well!

GDay (FMS)

Thank you Tefler, your dedication is greatly appreciated.

Richard

When you say "latest" I keep seeing "last" and I get bummed for a second~

SomeYoungGuy

There goes the rest of my work day 🤦🏻‍♂️

a Norman knight

Thanks Tefler, looking forward to it! Take care, stay safe and get some rest.

Cignal

Thanks Tefler, get some sleep.

Forbsey

Nice Tefler, good to see you in the swing of things. Are you having an easier time writing now?

Gary Langenwalter

We're always up for another chapter :) Please get some sleep and stay well!

Jack

Thanks

Evan

Trivial typo, Tefler. The score of Maliri assembled before her let out a collect sigh of relief. I think that that should be collective sigh of relief, no?

Mjk154

THANK YOU TEFLER

Evan

Excellent chapter, Tefler! Thank you so much!

Arrowglass

Another incredible chapter!

RedB

Thanks very much.

Ryan Soar

Another well done chapter I feel at ease once again 😌

Grandizer

One typo I found, you spell lounges as longues in one place. I would copy and paste it, but my Word just decided I am no longer activated. :( Found it... Edraele glided over to the pair of chaise longues in the centre of the room.

Bp Hlpt

Many Thanks, Tefler!

Jeffrey Hoskins

John had already restored Sakura's virginity when she was finally healed. Because she asked him about it.

Brian Woods

So, questions answered...but mysteries still abound. Enjoyed the wind-down chapter, as it also seemingly sets up the next 2 or so for some Maliri machinations at Genthalas. Quite looking forward to it. Now, for my STUPID editing issues, I have to re-order my thoughts and again state that I love the relative introduction of a full Soulforge to the storyline, appearing as it has similar to Trankaran Star Forges, but with Ashanath overtones whereby psychic energy replaces more conventional approaches to ship building. It would also seem that Dana’s projectile distaste comes from an in-depth evaluation of the Spirit Divergence Chamber, and while I shudder at the implications therein, I also am curious as to the actual scientific process of the device, as in people go here, energy goes there, ship pops out over yonder. Should be an interesting look at the creative process...

Brian Woods

Not even gonna try to re-edit now, just a new post in full: I also like the way Sir Tefler has snuck in a new little tidbit for our future battle with the universe at stake. With hyper warp gates only able to be anchored to another of their kind, there are seemingly only three places Gahl’kalgor can possibly appear to cause a ruckus under the Shroud: Rahn’hagon’s gate from out beyond the Desolation of Vulkat, Mael’nerak’e gate in the Mists, and the mystery of Larn’kelnar’s gate that he would have needed to make his way here. Supposing that Larn did not use Rahn’s gate to travel the highways of the stars, and his torture of Rahn in search of that seems to support the idea...where did Larn leave his gate to travel here...and more importantly, will it possibly be possible that Xar’Aziuth knows how to get the code from Rahn to send Gahl out to Spider Space?!?!? And furthermore, what might that mean for recruiting the Vulkat Queen, defending Enclave space, and our future encounter with Drakkar Podqueens?!?!? Inquiring minds want to know!

Jim lynch

Loved it yet again. I’m so lucking forward to kicking brimorian asses when that finally happens .

a Norman knight

Outstanding Tefler! The hits just keep on coming! Cheers and Happy Holidays to you and your family!

Teun Segers

Thank you Tefler. Alyssa and John can truly progress into the next phase of their lives now.

David B

I am confused. Didn't John and his ladies decimate all the Brims? Didnt they destroy all the troops on the ground and all the ships in the sky - except for the ones they allowed the Kintarks to capture / destroy?

Tefler

Thanks for the comments everyone. I'm glad you guys enjoyed the chapter! I'll work on the last scene now and hopefully have it finished in a couple of hours.

Kounimal

Thanks for the new chapter Tefler, interesting teaser with Dana at the end. On another note, I know Tom Walker's a minor character, but I hope we can get a positive outcome for the guy.

someone somewhere

Take your time Tef :) Your work is always worth the wait! Twill be interesting to see where he seeds you have sown will grow and always fun to see what they become!

BrianM

Thanks for another great chapter, Mr. T, which I'll have to read a couple more times to get my head around all the details and how/where they tie into the rest of the story. I'm looking forward to getting the additional scene whenever you have it ready for us!

commatoes

Well, I have had my fix for a while at least. While avoiding spoilers, I know everyone that read the chapter already had their suspicions confirmed in gory detail. The transition from Dana to the last section was a nice touch. And it was more gruesome than I anticipated but the perfect amount of gruesome.

AzureReader

I’d be interested in seeing how many times John can reshape crystal alyssium now. Clearly they need an alternative to the Soul Forge and I’m wondering if the strength of reforging crystal alyssium comes from embedding a little positive psychic energy into the metal each reshaping - especially as it gets harder to reshape. If John can reshape it 50 times perhaps it will be as strong or stronger than the black metal.

AzureReader

There is still a lot of mystery about the power increase. Rachel asked a great question: “It seemed like you received a huge boost in power. Was that just because your mind was reunified or did the alteration make any difference too?” Then John went on to talk about the two changes but didn’t really answer Rachel’s question about where the power increase was coming from. Perhaps if your massaging the chapter you can have John add a couple of clarifying sentences. I was guessing that the dark thread connecting Progenitor link to thraws through control and dominion was going to be portrayed as a bottleneck for the much more powerful loving connection John has to his girls. But the connecting thread does not seem to be one of the two things that was entirely changed. Not clear about that though.

Mjk154

Thank you for all your hard work and dedication. Keep safe

Tefler

I've done an editing pass and added the final scene to the chapter. Please ignore the # note at the beginning. It's a possible scene addition I might add in for the eBook when I finally get this far. :)

Tefler

Just fixed another typo. Admiral Morgan hadn't risen from the dead... that should've been Admiral Kester. :)

BrianM

Thank you for the additional scene and an excellent round off to 137!

Steve

Fantastic, thank you sir. Really enjoyed John and Alyssa's date.

DeepSpace

Ok now that ended on a FAR better note,lol.

donald abbott

Just what this story needed, thank you for adding in the last scene.

Youkai-sama

Waaaaaaahh! Why can't I consume this story in dictionary-sized gulps? I can do it; put me in the game, Coach!

Arrowglass

Tefler...I want to just say thank you for taking the time to "get it right" as you continually do in penning each chapter of this epic entertainment extravaganza that is the TSM Universe!!! I know I can comfortably speak for myself and others in saying this evolving story is even more addicting than before!!!

David B

Awesome conclusion to this chapter Tefler. Yes, that last piece is a much better Chapter Pause, then the scene at the Soulforge.

Jewbear

So does the soulforge need the metal still or if you Chuck enough thralls in there will it creat the ship completely out of their energy?

AzureReader

Nice job. This chapter seemed to reward readers by leveraging 136 chapters of character and species development to tell the story from the most diverse set of perspectives I think we’ve seen from any chapter so far. In many ways the new John is a new character. I like how familiar characters were used to gently begin the character development.

Jeffrey Hoskins

Did anyone else notice that Lynette has placed more females in power positions in High Command? Admiral Sofia Esposito and Admiral Xiu Wu, to go along with Admiral Lina Van Den Broeck. I find that interesting.

Durindana

Excellent occupation with absolutely pages upon pages of roto-rootering the crew fanservice! Personally I’d have left off the concluding scene, and made the Soulforge reveal even nastier. We knew what it involved in broad strokes but I was waiting for black metal quenched in blood or something, to close out the chapter

Jeffrey Hoskins

Such a good chapter, issues resolved, story lines advanced and a new and renewed sense of purpose. Overall one of the best non action chapters yet. Finally back to Genthalas where the real work begins.

A Human

Thanks for the great chapter Tefler. This was one of the best in my opinion. You did a great job consolidating story lines for the final arcs. Things are really moving forward, and it's good to be back at Genthalas. One thing though, why did Maliri marines need to capture the fishy siege ships? Were there captives on them? Otherwise it's kinda like a terminator squad needlessly boarding a space hulk when they could just destroy it at a distance. Looking forward to the next installment, be well and focus on your real life priorities first as always!

Hans Eriksson

Where was the final scene? I have already read ≈ 60% so I wonder if can continue or if I should re-read something.

David Kepler

I always keep the original and the update, then do a redline comparison in Word...

Idaho Spud56

Thanks for all your hard work.

JoTaKuSan

This feels like the first chapter of the final book of the story. Great work!

John Jameson

Is it clear what has happened to Athena after Alyssa's struggles?

Mankey

After so long on character-and LONG-story development in recent chapters, this latest edition feels like the story is finally getting back on track again. It is most definitely the most rewarding (IMHO) for quite a while, and it feels the the story pace is finally picking up again. One major question that I do have though is this: when are we likely to see Books 5 and beyond on Kindle? I wish to support Tefler as much as I can and cannot wait to download the later chapters to my Kindle to enjoy at work at my leisure

Ferrum1

Well, can't say that I was really too interested in this chapter. Like a lot of them, it was easy to scroll through and not miss anything substantive. Sorry if that sounds harsh, but... fuck it. How many times do we need to see these blushing affirmations of love? How many times do we need whole chapters devoted to nothing more than everyone giving everyone hugs and kisses? There is, to my mind, such a thing as too much of a good thing. While it's certainly nice that we can see how much everyone cares for everyone, after awhile it gets old and tiresome. Because it happens so much, usually at least once per chapter, none of it holds any special meaning. For example, consider how special Faye's death was. All that time spent building her up, teasing the readers with the idea she might somehow become organic, and then she's ripped from the script in the most heinous fashion. It was gut-wrenching in large part because she was the only character ever to suffer such a fate. It wouldn't have held nearly the gravity if main characters were dying left and right. Similarly, we can look at John's growing relationship with his daughter. Watching her become self-aware, then getting the new chassis, then finally calling John "father".... all very powerful stuff because it's not done over and over and over. That character is almost never seen in the story, yet each scene she appears in is fairly solid and you are hoping for the best. The rest of the crew? Honestly, I'd have abandoned ship a long time ago just to get away from the constant needs of such a huge harem. Every chick wants something, needs something, etc. While there's no "jealousy" between them, there's still the expectation that John do things for them individually and spend time with them. Overall, it seems like there's a war to be fought, but it's always put off into the distance so we can sit there and watch everyone holding hands and singing kumbaya one more time.

Bp Hlpt

Thanks for posting, @Ferrum1, with proof that Tefler can't please everyone, (nor should he). If Tefler had left out 90% of the "affirmations of love" scenes, 90% of the sex scenes, 90% of John's "whining" about his insecurities [I admit I'd have liked Tefler to have cut out maybe 40% - 50% of those], if he had cut out 50% or more of the sub-plots, and if he had somehow left the crew size at six or seven girls, I'm sure that Tefler would have gotten much fewer complaints over the years, and the story might well have been finished by now. On the other hand, there are probably many folks that would have liked to have seen more sex and a larger crew, some that would have liked to have seen more "affirmations of love", more sub-plots and side trips by the Invictus, and maybe even a few that liked all of the whining [I don't know who, but...]. Everyone is entitled to their opinion, and thank you for expressing yours in such a well written manner. But bottom line, this is Tefler's story to write, a wonderfully complex one [it's easy to skip over the parts you don't like but you can't add in what's not there, except in your imagination], and I am very, VERY glad that it is not over yet and I hope it continues for many years to come.

Jeffrey Hoskins

The last two post are a perfect example of the type of discourse needed, respectful and concise. Not mean spirited at all.

Big Dude

I agree with Jeffrey Hoskins & BP Hlpt above. This is Tefler's tale and we pay him to write it. While we can criticize the plot engine and the enigma of John Blake, we keep asking for more. While some of the sex scenes care explicit and lengthy, it is still Tefler's story to tell. I think the story of love and sex will become clearer as Tefler explains how the black metal is formed as we saw Alyssa's going nuts reaction to the psychic echoes and now Dana's reaction to the black metal fabrication methodology.

Jeffrey Hoskins

All I want for the pagan holiday is peace on earth and chapters 128 and 129, okay I'll settle for 128.

Dominic Janning

Tefler u are doing great! I love this story and can't wait for more chapters!!

GBo

I thought this chapter was one of the best, finally putting to rest John's whinging & insecurities, of which we all, including the girls, have had enough. Tefler had always planned the guide to use these doubts against John in his confrontation, so Tef had to keep sowing these seeds throughout the story. I still enjoy the sex scenes, which got me reading this story in the first place – I never skip a word. Everyone should have guessed how the SOULforge must have worked – its right there in the name. Alyssa’s reaction to the dark metal’s essence through the psychic echoes was another huge clue. So it’s good to get that out in the open. It won’t be long until Dana figures out how Helene cracked the bed & it will be interesting how she/Tef create a Loveforge. I agree with Ferrum1 partially but this chapter shows John has turned the corner & will now be a more confident dude & should become more likeable. That whole doubt/guide story arc is finally put to bed. The Fat Tony & Perl sideline was a strange interlude, spending a lot of time developing nice characters but then writing them out – but maybe we haven’t heard the last of them, given that Lynette is visiting the Outer Rim soon. Tef’s too good to let that hang. And I suspect that Tony Walker’s story arc will bubble up nicely soon, to keep paying Tef’s bills. All in all, brilliant writing & imagination, Tefler – you will always keep me coming back for more. The way Dana can crack me up & then later in the same chapter you can have me a bit teary – awesome. Congrats!

Tefler

Thanks for the interesting feedback everyone! To answer the points made above: 1) John's guilt issues. I had John plagued by a guilty conscience to add some balance to his character. If he wandered around the galaxy mind controlling girls at a whim, then he'd seem like a real asshole. I wanted there to be real weight behind adding crewwomen and John's guilty conscience meant lots of introspection about the changes he made to their lives. 2) Too much sex and intimacy. That's a fair complaint. When you're writing month after month, it's hard to get an overall impression of the story compared to just reading the whole thing over a 2 week peried. 3) What was the point of Tamolith's scene. She'd been fed for the first time and just woke up (hence being thirsty). Tamolith would normally have killed the Sub-Prelate without a second thought, but the momentary flicker of emotion was her experiencing John's change to her connection. After that, she stayed her hand and just told him to get out. It was summarising her change in outlook for the future (because I probably won't be going back to her again until the epilogue). She'll also feature in the sequel. 4) Fat Tony, Kelli and Perl. The point of that subplot was to show a terrifying Kirrix invasion from a civilian point of view. It allowed me to show you what happened to Karron in a different way, rather than John and the girls just turning up and everyone had been abducted. Alyssa having previous history with Fat Tony tied into an ongoing character arc which was concluded in this chapter. Those three characters will feature in the sequel. I've included a number of other supporting characters in side stories, like Tashana's smuggler crew, Murphy the Terran fighter pilot, and the cruiser captains that warned of the Kintark invasion. I included them to add more depth to the universe and show some of the impact that John and his Lionesses have on a more personal level.

John Gregory

As always, this chapter is gripping. Would love to know though if the thralls sacrificed in the soulforge, do they go in under duress (kicking and screaming or at gun point), are they tricked in, similar to the Jews in the gas chambers during the haulicaust, where they were told they were going to get showered after their long train ride, or are the thralls so enthralled that they willingly sacrifice themselves?

GBo

Hey Tef, thanks for letting us know your future writing plans. My two cents is if you are writing a sequel, people will kind of have to have read TSM. Your writing deserves to be read by loads more people, not just us Patreons or on Lit or SOL. It is a shame you feel the need to write 80 or 90 pages of sexy sci-fi to be worthy of us subscribers to pay you a dollar or two a month. I’d be happy with more frequent, smaller fixes of TSM. Maybe your e-book publishers can give you more feedback on your net worth, but I reckon you’re selling yourself short. IMHO, you should write a mainstream novel & become the space opera equivalent of JK Rowling. Having said all that, I look forward to the end of every month, waiting for that email notification that you’ve published a new chapter – I hope it continues for a long time. Cheers & thanks again for your wonderful writing.

lee minter

I have a theory that they may be able to use those they deem as bad to fuel the Soulforge like the Brimors. I wouldn't think it would matter who got put in as long as it was a soul have creature.

ringill

Spotted a possible Brimorian sex change occurring ... Pausing by the comms officer, he tapped a clawed finger on her desk. “Any updates from our ground forces?” The Wave-squire held her hand to the device in her ear and sat bolt upright. “Nothing of importance to report, Shoal-Commander! Otherwise I would have relayed any messages,” she replied, her gills quivering with trepidation. # After acknowledging the orders with a nod, the comms officer turned back to his station to carry them out. A few moments later, he blurted out, “There’s no response from the border comms beacon! Our connection to Brimor is broken, Shoal-Commander!” # “Incoming hail, Shoal-Commander!” the comms officer called out in warning. “I knew the sight of all our guns would put them in a talkative mood,” Olbhugh chuckled, studying the unknown fleet with a smug grin as he recognised their posturing for what it was. He straightened in his chair. “Let’s hear what they have to say.” The Wave-squire shook her head. “No, not them... it’s Shoal-Commander Faogh, from Fleet Naiorrid.” So, one wonders if, under pressure, Brimorians morph into another sex state or, much less exciting, there are 2 comms officers. There is of course another possibility ...

SuperAzureReader

I think Dana may be the Soulforge for the or at least the key. All they need from the size of it is psychically infused metal which Dana has temporarily done before as well as John while have sex with a few girls

Evan

We know that Love - or at least, psychically enhanced and transmitted Love - can destroy the black metal. We now have a better idea as to why than we did before. The black metal of the Progenitor ships is truly imbued with power from agony, terror and other 'dark' emotions. It's no wonder, considering the fact that it's been sponsored by Xar'aziuth for ages. Is Helene going to be the Destruction of the Progenitor fleets? Does anyone else remember the "Make Love, Not War" signs of the 60's? I do hope that Tefler doesn't end the entire war with the Progenitors simply by having a grand orgy with the crew and Helene channeling and projecting all the love outwards. It might work, but it's so cliche. Save it for the final battle with Xar'aziuth! :-)

Don's Projects

An ancient Orgasmitron is discovered in the countryside of Great Britain, replicated and improve by Sparks. Every Maliri household is equipped with one. On command an entire system orgasms, dissolving the progenitor ships. Focused beam of course. Okay, my work here is done. Thank you.

Cornbread

OMG I step away for a few days and I come back to an 'Orgasmitron' device. Everybody step away from the computer 🖥

Jeffrey Hoskins

This has been on my mind for sometime but I believe Mael'nerak had already developed an alternative to the Soul Forge, the Star Forge. It struck me as odd that there were 5 Star Forges (I believe that was the number) in operation at one time. If Dana could examine them with advanced Progenitor, Kyth'faren knowledge she may be able to decipher them and build a fleet 5 times as fast. Just my opinion and observation.

AzureReader

Tefler - Perhaps after a visit to Mael’s throne world, which is sure to answer some questions but leave many unknowns, it would be an interesting read to have a summit of ‘experts’ to discover the mysteries of the black metal. The summit might include John, the leading Trankaran Forge Masters (who have a nearly magical relationship with metals and ores that could be explored), Niskera, and some of the girls with a strong relationship to the black metal, such as Dana, Alyssa, and Helene. John might start by telling the Trankarans the whole story starting with the Xyth’Faren, and how Xar created the Soul Forge and Progenitors. They would hear how black metal is reinforced with the souls of thrawls. And that black metal can be cleansed of souls (by Helene). Samples of black and cleansed white metals should be provided to the Forge Masters to work on - perhaps collaboratively with Dana as she has done with engineers from other empires. I’d love to hear some of the lore around Star Forges, partially because they seem magical. And to have a discussion about how Mael’ might have been trying to make a Soul Forge alternative later in his reign when he had a change of heart. Perhaps Mael discovered a black metal alternative the Star Forge can make... and this science needs to be rediscovered. Or perhaps Mael never could figure it out and John’s Xyth’faren knowledge or powers might finally be what is needed complete the Star Forge ‘experiment’. Xyth’faren psychic powers + Dana genius might play well against Forge Masters dropping their jaws as the forge produces the god of all white metals reinforced with John’s unlimited positive psychic power. This new white metal would be the basis for stronger ships and more powerful weapons than the progenitors could build. Can they figure it out in time? Will this be the basis for the ultimate Invictus upgrade? Can they ‘forge’ enough new white metal ships, weapons, and combat suits for the Malari? Can the Ashanath play a role in channeling John’s psychic power into Star Forges to answer what Mael’ was thinking when he created that species?

Big Dude

To the unnamed person above, I believe Helene is the key to the metal. Her enhancement power will be exponentially increased as she overworked herself. Remember in previous chapters John mentioned the girls get stronger when they exercise their powers. Well Helene went overboard protecting Alyssa from exploding. So now Helene should be real powerful.

Jeffrey Hoskins

I'm predicting 7 more days for an update and another 7 for the release date. Any takers?

Who Me

Nope - Cyberpunk is starting - won't see nothing new until next year! January 31, 2021

FOEAI

Hey Tef, thank you for laying out the groundwork for an exciting universe!

B S

I have been re watching SW- Mandalorian while waiting for the next chapter! It has restored my enjoyment of SW

Jedi Khan

I wonder if we'll be seeing 138 soon, or if Tefler has already been sucked into Cyberpunk?

Who Me

Guaranteed Cyberpunk! That's what he said 6 months ago. See you next year!

Lee Sherman

Kind of hoping that we get something by xmas, but yeah most likely next year.

Jeffrey Hoskins

With a wife and a family, plus the holidays coming up, walking away from a $7,000 pay check would be difficult for most. But we shall see. Obligations are a bitch.

Who Me

Probably have 2 chapters for January to help pay all the bills!

Steve Langford

You'all are seem to forgetting the money from Tefler's Book sales.

Mankey

Well I for one would add any new book to my Kindle as soon as it became available. It gives me a little frisson of amusement when I have a break at work, sitting down with the Kindle and smoking my pipe, that none of my work colleagues have the slightest idea of what I am reading.

life314159

Hi all - I've been enjoying the story as a Patron since a little after Battle of Terra. Honestly, given how the series has started, I think there is way too much complaint about "too much sex". You really can't take too much out, or even make it R-rated, since the basic premise is such a crazy kink. Tefler is doing a great job, for the most part. Just one example - Tefler doesn't give too much (usually) anatomical details. This is great - leave it up to the user to fantasize. Ok, the whole tentacle monster thing with Jade doesn't do much for me and too much fascination with pregnancy. And I'm glad John did not rescue any more half-starved, underdeveloped orphans from Karon - too close for comfort to child sex. Interestingly, everything in this epic work is about very serious topic, *except* the sex. When I started reading TSM, I expected a campy sex-adventure, but I got something completely different. The juxtaposition of the serious story-line and sex scene is refreshing and just works when you are reading a story about genocide and abuse on galactic scale. Why do you think so many people wanted John to do it with a dragon! So ... keep up the great work Tefler. Can we start a thread on people's favorite sex scenes?

Jeffrey Hoskins

I think we have reached the point where further speculation is at a dead end. We are at the point where we are waiting for the massive curveball or the meteor strike from outer space from Tefler. It will be epic and intensely interesting to see what the next few chapters bring from the creative mind of our master of suspense. To all, be safe and happy.

justarando

Hums: "All I want for Christmas is two chapters, two chapters, two chapters....."

Mapper

Tefler posted the first Chapter of TSM online (elsewhere) on 12-20-2015. It was the first story he had ever posted. I saw it online when Chapter 3 came out, went back to Chapter 1, and started reading. Five years and 137 chapters later, it is the work of a master. WOW. Congrats, Tef. It has been a great run. PS. Faye should be here to celebrate the anniversary.

tony

maybe next year tef will have 12 chapters ready and will release 1 for each of the 12 days of christmas

William Pitcher

Quick question -- If you represented a book publisher or tv/film company, how would you suggest changing TSM to make it suitable for mainstream audiences?

Frostfyre

I wouldn't. I would make a anime/hentai series out of it and not deviate from the story at all.

bigdawguw65 (edited)

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2026-09-07 11:00 Unfortunately the explicit sex , cum inflation etc. is too entwined with the whole rise in power that to try & gloss it over would rip the logical thread to shreds . I think that's why Tef has been saying there will be less sex & little 'space magic' in the sequel . He has realized his a terrific story teller & his characters & action scenes will make for a great novel for a wider audience than just we perverts . :-)
2020-12-16 11:44

John Jameson

Scriptwriters can do a lot to adapt a novel for the screen. I agree that it would be difficult to drop the role of cum as a psychic catalyst, but I think the cum inflation could be removed. Even if John has a quad, there is no reason why that should cause him to come in pints (does he have massive prostate and seminal vesicles as well?). I think the pregnancy/tummy fetish and the explicitness of the sex could be toned down substantially as a result. Would that be enough to make it mainstream?

Scott Maxwell

Is anyone else having problems reading this chapter? I can download it but then can read it.

SuperAzureReader

Ok so I have a theory about the black thread that was in the bond. I always wondered what would happen to activated thralls if their progenitor died before them. We know they respond violently to thralls of another progenitor so we can assume any that were still on the ships would be killed. But what about the ones at home? They likely wouldn't be able to be claimed by another progenitor so how would you get rid of them to have a clean slate? The black thread makes them hysterical with grief and either kill themselves or die from grief. I feel this is likely otherwise the thread would serve no purpose. Also feel like John is about to find this out the hard way with Galkehnor(or however you spell it). Someone might have already said this. And maybe it was obvious to everyone else. I don't know just putting my thoughts out

Steve Langford

How about Soul Forge having a black thread in it's make-up, if it was removed; would it make safe? Just a thought!

Grimlakin

The draining en masse is terrifying. Sadly it's life force taken during extreme pain and torture. It's not like they survive the experience. Though noted the change when exposed to super love is interesting the base life force is still there.

Michael56Smith

I guesstimate that it as been at least 9 to 10 storyline months since John's 40th birthday, maybe longer. Will the girls and or Queen Edreale throw him a party? Or maybe declare a Maliri wide holiday in the protector's name! And what do you get a Progenitor who has everything?

Michael56Smith

Is John's 41st birthday due soon? The girls will likely throw him a party/orgy, non-exploding variety hopefully! Will the Maliri declare a empire wide holiday? And what do you get for a Progenitor that has pretty much everything? (Oops, sorry for the repeat, I mistakenly thought the 1st one got deleted). TTFN

Sean Garrison

Hey, Tef. Hope your family is well. Just want to throw something out there. If Alyssa is a Kyth'faren woman, doesn't that mean John should breed her constantly like he'll be doing the Nymphs to bring the species back from the brink of extinction? Cause that would be SO hot!

Sean Garrison

P.S. Did Rahn accidentaly make John the Kyth'faren messiah or was it deliberate? Also, hope third time's the charm and they can at least carry a civil conversation the next time Jessica reaches out to the Invictus.

Christoph Freye

Merry X-MASS! Maybe we will get an present?

Tallman51466

MERRY CHRISTMAS to Tefler and all the Telfler fans out there.

Jim lynch

Merry Christmas people hope your all safe and well and we’re all good boys n girls this year. Ha ha I’m hoping for an extra Pezzie from tefler tonight.

DaveC

Merry Christmas to Tefler and all the TSM addicts out there

Poniatowski

Merry Christmas to Tefler and everyone

Metheus108

Merry Christmas Teflon Nation!

Mjk154

joy to the world

Jim lynch

Come on tefler give your people a gift lol

Sushant Bhartiya

Tefler nation: While reading some Starwars comicses today, I was like, Man, we should have this saga also in Comics format! I would pay whatever it would cost when anything would come on this from Tefler!

Erik Hanson

I always thought this saga would be an amazing anime

TF4EVA

sorry but if the neigh sayers want to wait on literotica, amazon and other spaces for the complete chapter let them. Go forth there peoples and let us who don't care as long as we get our monthly fix and moan at our levels of anticipation (tongue in check mostly) stay here on patreon. Did the addition add much value - some but if I didn't have the added I still would have been happy at where it finished before the edit. I'm enjoying the story however it comes....

Michael56Smith

I am curious if there is a connection between Onyxium and the Progenitors planet buster. Those socially immature demi-gods sure seem to enjoy blowing up perfectly good gaia class worlds,.. could their ravenous need for the black metal be a consolation prize to the loss of livable planets? And is planetary destruction their way of creating this wonderous metal? Murderous bastards! TTFN

Bp Hlpt

Chapter 137 Alyssa breathed deep them exhaled as she nodded, Alyssa breathed deep then exhaled as she nodded, Tsking in irritation, Valeria turned to address the other the last pair of thralls. Tsking in irritation, Valeria turned to address the last pair of thralls.