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Hey everyone!

Here's the second half of chapter 143. I hope you enjoy it!

Tefler

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Cignal

Thanks Tefler.

Mad Jonah

That was awesome! Thanks Tefler!

Grimlakin

Now to wait for the combined

CJ Mora

Wow! What an amazing chapter, Tefler! I hate the wait, but love the read!! Absolutely epic! (Or, as my kid says, "Bussin' bussin'!!") I hope all is well with your family, and that your house is finally fixed. 🙂

Evan

Thank you, Tefler!

Skycrane

Your killing us with these cliffhangers

TF007

You made my weekend 😁 the only thing better would be 144 part 1 tomorrow 😁

Evan

Tefler, my only concern is when the pull was occurring from Dana’s efforts, how did that impact the others who were nearby, but not very close to her? Yes, I’m being vague on purpose so as to avoid spoilers for those who haven’t read it, yet, but I’m sure you know what and whom I’m referring to.

TF4EVA

AWESOME!!

Cjmd224

Everyone is going God-mode these days, damn what a chapter

TF007

Everyone went Super Saiyan God mode!!!!!! When John used his kamehameha and destroyed everything was great!!!🤣🤣🤣😜😜😜. Oh wait wrong story 😁. But real talk, when he said “Fatality” and channeled his inner Mortal Kombat it was great 😁.

Taco1085

OMG, best one yet of so many. love every twist and turn...

Braw

cheers mr

AzureReader

Very exciting chapter. Part of the stress is that they don’t know what the device is - does it power the mists or the shroud? Taking down the mists might not be bad, but the shroud is the only thing shielding them from Xar’s awareness. Destroying stuff and asking questions later is risky, especially since everything they destroy could be useful to them. Hopefully the worst is over, but they need to get the planet on their side instead of continuing this battle to the death.

Arrowglass

Totally awesome!!!!! WOW!!!!! Suspense...excitement... awe are all present and I could not wait to see what happened next. Well worth the wait, another Tefler Triumph setting us up for more!!! Thanks!!!

Michael56Smith

.36: THANK YOU TEFLER!!! ,.. That was so Awesome! ,.. Happy Halloween! ,.. and more please! when you can,.. drooling for more,.. ;-) TTFN

palisade

One of the best chapters among this current arc. Can't wait for more

Troy Roudebush

Yes thankyou so !!! great save!!cant wait for more

Kostas Koroneos

Oh my God!! Thank you Tefler!!! I can not imagine how you write so spectacularly. I can't help but wish this could be made into a movie or a series. Warmest regards from Athens, Greece.

TF007

It sucks that I have to wait a couple days before I can post an observation that I noticed in this chapter 😢😩. Trying to be good and not say any spoilers until people have a chance to read full chapter.

Str8NotNarrow

The lights in the surrounding city block starting.... Should be started...

David B

WOW! Simply awesome. One of the best so far

Medrosak

Can you reposed a combined doc Tef?

Bp Hlpt

Thanks, Tefler!

Bigfoot

Damn that was good! Very exciting and ranks up there with chapter 100 as the pinacle of this book.

Youkai-sama

Pft! Now you see what happens when you take on the super secret dungeon BEFORE you level-grind?

Skycrane

Hey Tefler can you combine all the chapters into one? One of my other writers here does that in his newest book when he writes a new chapter

Mick Peaper

Brilliant chapter, and it still leaves all the unfinished arcs for more reading next year. Loved it

TF007

Located Edit- when John is opening robot for Dana you use “ join” when it should probably have been “joint “.

Zachary Hoover

Wait so Alyssa can open (portals) now?way cool

TF007

So we have proof now that Johns 20 shaped rune sword is much stronger than 35 shaped armor. So the added runes for the ancient sword used in its construction makes it much stronger. Plus each time he has fully used its power he has let loose with his emotions and embraced his inner fury. First time was on Arcadia after Fayes death and he drained Rachel’s shield to destroy the Larn projection on the piece of metal. The Second time is in this chapter 😁. I believe to fully harness the rune sword it will require him to lose control of all his emotions and fully embrace his destructive nature 🤔

bjcreek

You've written a lot of really good chapters. This was one of the best! Thanks!

Teun Segers

I like how this fight was in many ways similar to the one in the Nexus research base. It's the same foe, this instance is just the much more capable version. The battle ends somewhat like this one: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EgqqfV7cyQY

Taco1085

Mr. Tefler is on Spoilers channel at discord now

Colin Wilson

I loved Ch 155, especially the ending. Did anybody get there without a tear in their eye? That said, I'm sure the responses so far are enough of a *hint* that pre-charging has to stop. Tefler, when I raised my tier to $25 for two chapters I had hoped that it would encourage enough people to do the same to get you out of the hole I could see you were digging for yourself. Either my effort was a flop or you just chose to keep digging. Either way, you are now seeing the result. And its not good (says Captain Obvious). The good news is that it sounds like you are saying you have *lots* of material already written for Ch. 156 and 157? Great! I would humbly (and hopefully) suggest you metaphorically stop digging and start writing.