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Hello everyone!

I've finished chapter 64, and here it is!

I hope you enjoy this one, and I'll be looking forward to reading your feedback. :-)

Tefler

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Phatsuo

Absolutely awesome as always. I'm already itching to read more. A wonderful author, and an awesome story. Keep up the amazing work.

Tefler

Great! I'm glad you guys enjoyed it. :-)

Tefler

It seems that the Patreon site gets huge amounts of traffic on the first of the month. I guess the servers get overloaded with all the pledge processing. I'll try and avoid posting chapters on the 1st in the future.

Anthony Kester

Another fantastic chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

rich ed

loved it as always, bring on the next few chapters

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

This one had it all. Tenderness, intrigue, political maneuvering, suspicion, trust building, manipulation. Even I am having to grudgingly kick your writing up another notch. You are better than Isomov ever was. And on par with Steven R. Donaldson and Tolkien.

RikcPaTT

Your writing skill is superb, always the highlight of my day when another chapter comes out

InspectorRaf

Very well done. I think we're all grateful that you're making an effort to be as prolific as you are.

Brian Griffin

Once again another edge of our seat ride. Thank you for sharing with us. As it's been said many times before we're all addicted and need our next fix 😜

Benj

Yes, I agree that our communal distress stems from the onset of waiting for your next installment. We fans are insatiable. That said, I did not expect the rescue mission or withdrawal twists. Might the Kirrix be planning an attack on earth? As for poor Mateo, I hope that he lives. Calara and Irillth are the only ones with family. I wonder what/who else they might find in the mines. Those lizards have regenerative powers so he might have sent political prisoners to suffer a fate worse than death in the mines. Lastly, I do not know how being a security guard is as amazing as the other girls powers. I look

Benj

Forward to reading more.

Don's Projects

Once again..surprises! I hope the combines stress of all of these different projects and performance needs don't lead to an equipment failure!

Paladin

Another great chapter! Wasn't expecting the twist with Mateo. Shipboard security is one thing but she could also help on away missions I wonder if Sakura would be a good sparing partner for John. We still have Yamamoto in the wings. Will he also teach Sakura? How much technique did she retain? Maybe even some sparing with the Maliri assasians/bodyguards to improve. I would love to see some sparing between Luna and John. It seemed to me, of all the lizards they fought so far only the Royal Guard had regenerative powers. I do have to agree with Ben C., a good chance for a twist depending on what else they find in the mines. Perhaps an ousted royal family. Chapter size was perfect for this section of the plot.

Mike Worgiss

Didn't Dana build a device to see the flows of power connecting John and the Girls. Seems this device would work on Gabrielle and who ever else was connected to the other Progenitor including any other traitor???

Mark Hall

This was awesome can't wait until the next one I almost feel sorry for them lizards

Jedi Khan

You just had to post this shortly before I had to go to work, didn't you? Couldn't read it at work, so read it after; it was a welcome respite from thoughts of work. Wasn't quite expecting Lynton to possibly be a thrall of the other Progenitor, but it makes sense considering how she was hiding her appearance. After PJ took out the Glowing Queen, that probably tipped of the other Progenitor via his matriarch that he now had competition. So he's probably ordered his thralls to either avoid contact with John or hide their appearance from him in order to not tip him off that they are thralls. Fat lot of good that did Admiral Lynton. Here's hoping she can be captured alive without a big fight.

Don's Projects

Saw a clerk in a store with champagne white hair and gray blue eyes. An intriguing look in her eyes. I so wanted to ask...heave yo read

Frank Ollis

I must admit, I'm hooked. I found this in SOL a few days ago and now I find myself eagerly awaiting the next chapter. This is as addictive as Mike Cropo's Wolves and Dragons of the Blood series!

Steve

Really liked it Tefler. I just realized today how this patreon thing is working out for you. I'm very happy for you! you've earned it and will continue to do so I am sure.

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

I am so looking forward to John and crew saving Calara's family. After that, though, and before they go hunting for the head assassin, they need to hack the specs for the singularity drivers while at Olympus for their awards and then high tail it to Maliri space to upgrade the Invictus. The assassin still has no clue about John, the girls, and the ship's capabilities.

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

This extra time would give Sakura time to develop and be part of the crew, provide some rest before gearing up for battle again, and relieve the Maliri women who need his attention. Also, anyone think Sakura would be able to help train Edrale's bodyguards?

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

So...John has to have sex with Sakura, Edreale, the three bodyguards, half a dozen Maliri techs...and all that probably in a day. Glad he can do that....would have killed me even when I was 18 and walking around with a constant woody....lol