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Hey guys,

I've finished part 1 of Chapter 68, and it's gone through the first round of editing. I'll no doubt make a few more changes when I finish the entire chapter, but I thought you might like a sneak peak.

To give you fair warning, you know how I like to torture my editors with cliffhangers... ;-)

(I'll make a 'Paid Post' for the full chapter, this preview is free).

I hope you enjoy it!

Tefler

Comments

Muledrvr

Hope they have breakfast finished quickly.... 29 minutes for a blow job and a shower doesn't leave time for much lol

Brad D

Nice reference... is she a real girl or not

J Amadi

It'd be nice if the Invictus showed up and messed up Ms Lynton's well laid plans..

weird song

Faye could take over computer control of the kintark and traitor terran fleet and just shut down power to everything but life support.

Muledrvr

Ooh.... There's a thought.... Faye, with Irillith's teaching, being able to infiltrate "everybody's" ship computers at the same time..... Gotta LOVE that new server home she has LOL

Morningfrost

I really, really want Admiral Lynton's day ruined.

stanislaw zylinski

another great job,their are great writers but your a great story teller too...................

Nekronom

I’m grateful for your decision to post the part immediately. I can live with all cliffhangers because I do know that they are unavoidable. THX!

JCFenton

Not quite the heart-rending cliff like last time (thank God), but definitely excited for the rest of the chapter.

Z McCrocklin

I imagine Lynton's day will be ruined without John Blake being around. The Kintark are furious with the Terrans so I am thinking she'll be wiped out by the Kintark Forces first.

Don's Projects

It just keeps getting better. Wait, that's what the girls say! You can almost feel their anticipation as well wondering what is next in their amazing lives. Is that fear or excitement?

Don's Projects

Can John "inter-dick" Lyndon. Stealing a Matriarch?

Paladin

It is nice to post here and then get your biggest fans input. The astral scene in ch.67 was very good but then adding a greater 'epilog' to it in this chapter was awesome. It is interesting to see how adding Sakura increased John's powers or maybe it is just John learning how to tap into the power he already has. It was interesting to see the black goo dissolve with the crystal Alyssium, there should be some interesting theories. Now we have the biggest space battle so far in the story about to happen with the Invictus about to enter the arena. It would be interesting if Faye's increased powers could disable all the capital/command ships at once and then John comes in and gives the ultimatum for a truce or he overloads their cores. Of course a Nova Lance thru the biggest ship would reinforce the point. Even the Kintark is starting to see John as a man of honor.

xd

Evan