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Hey everyone!

I sketched this out a few months ago, to give to a friend of mine who does 3D modelling. He's mocking up a model of the Invictus for me, so I hope I'll have a professionally rendered version to show you soon.

Tefler

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Dan Ferguson

did he finish ch123 yet? said he had more scenes

BigWooSon

Sooo, this is the before pic? Will you have an after pic for the completed ProGen refit?

Terra_Lupis

Then according to these rough sketches Alyssa in her early days forgot about Pythagoras' Theorem when calculating how far she could hear John's thoughts.

Roy Lewis

Just wondering if it's possible to get one of those 3d models my father would love one

ringill

That's excellent thanks for posing it There is a slight issue with the description in chapter 7 but a lot of parsecs have passed over the hull since then.

Jedi Khan

Looks like a variation of the Venator-class Star Destroyer from Star Wars (the Republic warships seen at the start of Episode 3).

xd

100 m high wow I didn't expect that.

Terra_Lupis

Is it weird that I imagined something different. The reason I bring this up is that on second or third visit back to Olympus (Jade's first visit), Jade has a flashback when looking out at the Invictus and the flashback is of a collector master who had a Terran Shark. Now based on that slight description, I envisioned the 'wings/fins' and the command deck being further to the middle and the 'wings/fins' angling down slightly.

Morningfrost

I like it Tefler! Also, I'd second Roy Lewis' question, and see if there wouldn't be some way to purchase a 3D model. ~Morningfrost

bigdawguw65 (edited)

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2026-09-07 11:00 I have a seemingly dumb question for any & all , why does the fire control have to be in a tower externally located making it so vulnerable ? We seen in many of the Space Battles so far of them being knocked out , rendering the ship noting more than a sitting target ? Is it because of the shields or armor? Is it some sort of antenna ? Just seems to be foolish to have such a important piece of your tech hung out with a big bulls eye on it . Thanks for any enlightenment .
2017-04-15 18:19

Brad D

I have to wonder why bridges are not in the center of ships. We aren't looking out windows... As Legion says in Mass Effect 2, those are just structural weaknesses.

Brad D

I was reading through the last chapter on SOL and had a thought. How are they going to tell Tashana and Irillith apart? Will they always wear red and blue? Ear ring (magnetic maybe) on the left vs right ear? What trouble will they get into impersonating each other?

bigdawguw65 (edited)

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2026-09-07 11:00 Brad...not only twins but mentally linked twins also linked to that little minx Aylssa , the mind boggles at what they might come up with . Also throw in a shape shifting Jade & sexy mom & Tefler could have the basis for another series while they rest of the girls relax & have their babies .
2017-04-17 13:49

7OO Tnega Terces

I'm glad the Invictus got stretched out, this one looks way to fat and stubby. And like a duck's head. Makes me think of the cartoon, 'Duck Tales'...