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Stu Fox

This is fun: you've got the weighted triangle with Judy at fore apex -- perfect for her being the main character. Nick should be where Skye is, due to his importance in the story. Nick's legs look like a rooster's legs: too thin and the armor doesn't come across right. Judy's skirt could use some wind-rustle to add a sense of dynamics to the pic, especially as the other characters have blowing capes. Also, what era and place is this supposed to be taking place in? You have an Edo-era Japanese castle, a Middle Ages Europe catapult, and telephone poles (?) across the bridge in the background.

Link6432 (alex)

Hey I didn't write the story, hehehe🤣, the "telephone poles" are actually posts of "crucifixion" I need to draw the bodies if the author allows me, if he doesn't want then they will have to have only flags... I agree with the dynamism of the skirt, I've been thinking about it, but it hasn't given me time... On Nick's legs, well, there's not much I can do, it's his legs in a pants fit for combat