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Yesterday I posted one of my favorite audios I have created all on my own (the idea and everything else). This audio does have spoilers for the one posted yesterday, because it's the original version. 

I started this in December, and I was going to post it on January 1st, but I wanted to spend more time on it to make sure it was perfect. I really didn't want to rush it. This is what I had originally, and I wasn't happy with it. I made a lot of changes to the plot and the characters in the final version. This original version was going to be NSFW, but I realized it would take a lot of work to get to that point, and I didn't know if it was worth it since it seemed like I could produce a better audio if I had more time. I feel like this version is too technical (all the academic talk, which is all legit and interesting), too boring (I think I really needed my enemy in space with me and on this journey), and it just doesn't work. BUT something I like more about this one than the other one is that the explanation for where she ended up is much smoother, organic, and more suspenseful than in the final version. Overall though, the final version is far superior, I think. 

This audio is incomplete. Once I realized there wasn't any hope for it, I quit the story. 

Comments

Georgio

Aye I'm glad my comment about the final version of this audio gave you the confidence to put up the original version. I personally enjoyed the technical, scientific terms. You can never have enough details. I can hear where you made the improvements too from the final version especially before the enemy showed up on her ship. I'm so glad you didn't drop this audio because i love your storytelling. So thanks for sharing Empress 😊🙏🏽🖤👑 I wish i was hanging with her in that cool ship. Have a great weekend!

MischievousShad

I like the way this story was going. I really think both story lines could have worked out pretty similar as to how things got to where they were. Such a great story that I was kind of disappointed when it ended as I wanted to know what happened next!! Thanks for sharing!!!