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Another page inked! Should have it coloured in a day or two. 

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Bloudin Ruo

Looks great and I'm excited to see this move forward! Just so many smiles from this page, I love it :3 I like how the dialogue worked out! References the impending actions between the two and sets the stage for Kyle's button explosion in panels #2 and #3. As for the art, what's there to say? Sexy bedroom eyes from a stallion, button-popping prospects, I think it sets the stage well for what's about to happen. Curious how Kyle gets out of his pants, though! I thought about maybe recommending some nodding action lines for the director, but the more I thought about it the less it seems applicable and relevant in the situation. The stallion knows from prior pages to keep going, and maybe the nodding would be redundant? I figured I'd bring it up but not as a recommendation, but just something to think about :P Can't wait! Keep up the good work!

Ztpia

aww that last panel, horse so happy :)