August Monthly Painting - WIP (Patreon)

Looks like we've got a pretty clear winner in the votes, y'all wanted to see " A femboy, already caught on a guy's knot, is rewarded with an orgasm from his mistress. "So here's what I came up with! I thought it would be fun if she was just barely touching him, letting the knot do most of the work but just giving him that tiniest push over the edge with a single finger.Patreon can be a bit iffy when it comes to posting bondagey stuff, but I'm hoping the very very mild nature of the bondage and the text prevent this from seeming too close to NC. Just a mistress rewarding a sub for a job well done!Actually, that's one of the reasons I'm taking the risk on posting this one- I could use some help refining the text. I'm not a writer, and I can't really get quite the feeling I want here. I'm aiming for that sort of kind but slightly condescending tone a dom might use when speaking to their sub, and I think I'm getting that effect, but the "enjoy your reward' bubble falls a bit flat in my opinion. I need some way of saying the same thing but with better... words? I don't have the best words. D:Open for opinions on improving both bubbles, I'm all ears! Or, maybe you think the picture would be better without any text at all? Let me know! Failing that, I'd also just love to hear what you think of the picture! I'm pretty excited, I think this is gonna be a good one, and I hope y'all feel the same way. :D