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The_Heist

Good to see your posting chaps again! Also a little feedback I feel there's too many pov's and it's slowing down the story. Like she's been trying to build a gu house for like 10 chaps now. just let her succeed or fail but let her get to it yk?

FanHarem

Hmm, she already has a gu house but formation is a very deep subject. Just giving stuff related to formation path to bai shou when everyone around her knows about her needs feels iffy and lackluster. But there's going to be more action in a couple of chapts and the plot rolls forward alongside it, introducing a few more... boing characters ✨️

caeven

having a Gu Immortal as a granny really is a hit to miss. they either teach you about anal sex by demonstration or do their absolute best to ruin your life.