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Pinwheel Remastered (Patreon)

Published:
2019-01-11 22:24:18
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Here's the first 6000 words of Pinwheel Remastered. I hesitate to call this a re-edit, since it's been written from scratch using the original as a blueprint, and therefore features entirely new content. On a scene by scene basis, so far it has three times the content of the original.
https://pastebin.com/RpGyQmhE

This is the final hurdle before I can get my stuff on Amazon and I can start producing all-new stuff again. 

Comments

Anonymous

Read pinwheel before and liked it, That is te one that started me reading you stories, If it is getting better it will be amazing.

CMed

I can understand the idea of having to go back on a story. I am having to do a lot of work on my end with Under the Influence/sequel (Like for example on my end I am changing my original story to third person that was first person view). Take your time and don't push yourself too hard at once with this story as it is the most important one especially in trying to market an entire universe that is setting the groundwork up with this story alone. This story remains one of my favorites. :)

Snekguy

Another 5500 word update today. Also, one minor continuity change, I made it so that the Krell are sleeping in their bowls rather than on beds, as that makes more sense. New content at 'We continued through the facility'.

Snekguy

5000 word update, new content at 'The next time that I saw Raz'. I've also taken some steps to correct issues with the XMR design that have been brought up.

Snekguy

A little under 5000 words today, new content at 'When the sunlamps dimmed to simulate night'. I'm replacing the obstacle course scene with a new one to make it more relevant.

AnimeFem

This story brings me back to the days when I first found you on Literotica. Will the Uninvited series ever make a comeback one day in the future, maybe a new series perhaps. Honestly you're the first person to ever make me get excited about reading, even if the content may be be a little lewd..!

Snekguy

5500 words today, new content at 'Vasiliev leaned over the controls of the treadmill'

Snekguy
>>18930247

Glad you're enjoying it, AnimeFem! I'm having fun rewriting this one. I do have some tentative plans for a fifth entry in the Uninvited series eventually. I would like to go back and re-edit those eventually too.

Zathas

One thing that always bothered me about this story, line 374, Stanely starts chiding Raz about what friendship is, but the topic of friends or friendship was never brought up in that scene, so the whole thing just comes out of no where.

Snekguy

2500 word update, was a little busier than usual today. New content from Chapter 5.

Snekguy
>>18953678

That's brought about by how he notices her peering over at the Borealans on the other table. Think I should make that clearer though?

Snekguy

3500 words today, new content at 'I had guessed as much.' I'm adding a lot of new content to the sex scene.

Anonymous

Hey, Snekguy. There's something that's bothered me for awhile about Raz and I doubt there'll be a better time to go over it. She's supposed to be one of the biggest on the Pinwheel, but it says she's "only" 8ft tall and a lot of the main characters in later stories are close to nine. Did you change your mind on how big they can get, or is she still growing in "Pinwheel?" Big fan,looking forward to the new scenes.

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at 'She moved lower', this is all new stuff today.

Snekguy
>>19018626

Nine feet is uncommonly large, that's usually reserved for Patriarchs/Matriarchs. Raz is the daughter of a Patriarch, and she certainly has the potential to get that big, but even in this story she's described as being an inch or two taller than all of the other Borealans, which is still pretty massive. Hope you're enjoying the new edit!

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at 'As my tongue roamed higher'

Snekguy

3000 word update, new content at 'We lay together for a while'. Finally done with the sex scene, now I'll be tackling the Bug boarding action, which is probably going to need a full rewrite.

Snekguy

I was a little busier than usual today, and I had some issues rethinking the Pinwheel boarding scene. I'm back on track now, but I only wrote about half an update, so I'll tack that onto tomorrow's update and give you guys something more substantial to read.

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content from Chapter 6.

CMed
>>19151129

I have to applaud you going back and reworking one of your first stories. Going back and reworking my first story,woof man there was errors that I am correcting. I can understand having to go back and reworking things. I am nearing completion of remastering my Under the Influence with its sequel included in it. Altogether (original story and sequel) the story will be around the same length as Warrior of Silence. In about a week (around there) I should be done with it, and I will send it to you. After that I am taking a long break from writing Pinwheel stories to allow everyone to catch up. :)

Snekguy

3000 word update, new content at 'There was a lot of worried muttering as the trainees lined up in the corridor.'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Did you see how strong and fast those things were?”

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at “Get their weapons,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'We burst out onto the torus,'

CMed
>>19274267

Just to let you know the remastered Under the Influence story and sequel (together) have been sent to you. :)

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Everyone was accounted for'

Snekguy

1500 word update, new content at 'We threw ourselves into cover' Sorry for the late/small update, IRL dropped some grenades in my lap today, and I may have to do some health insurance/tax stuff tomorrow that could eat up a lot of time.

Sharktogonapus
>>19332488

Ugh government paper work sucks if you want some advice listen to video game music it's specifically designed to pump one up and keep the brain stimulated while not being distracting. It should make boring work go faster or at the very least feel like it is. Actually that's good advice for any boring task.

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at 'Before long, we were mopping up the last of them'

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at 'Before long, we were mopping up the last of them'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'I looked to Raz, dejected.'

AnimeFem

Daddy Snek has been working so hard for us lately 💕

Snekguy

A little under 2000 words today, new content at “I guess we should head back to the barracks and pack our stuff,”

Snekguy
>>19400226

Nearly done now, I just have to add in the final sex scene, then the epilogue, and then it's finished.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at "Something else was coursing through my veins too"

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'She applied a powerful suction'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'I lay my head in her bosom'

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at '“Why?” I chuckled.' FINISHED! The re-edit comes in at a total of 70,000 words, that's almost double the original. Now I have to begin the editing process, which shouldn't take more than a few days. After that, I have to add a few corrections to the Ebooks, and then I can get started on a new story!

CMed
>>19560801

Awesome. Nothing like a good face lift to a good story. It makes it better than ever before. :)

Snekguy

26,000 words are edited, from chapters one to five.

Snekguy

20,000 words edited today, from chapter five to 'We followed the Staff Sergeant for what felt like miles'.

CMed
>>19631779

Jackpot! I found an Ebook converter website that converted both Under the Influence Remastered (with sequel) and Warrior of Silence into Ebook format. I checked them both out and they look beautiful. I have sent both of the files to you (including the Google Doc links of them as well) in an email. Now it will be way more accessible to everyone. 'I hold my drumsticks and drop them to the floor.' :)

Snekguy

10,000 words today, got a little sidetracked sending emails. We should have a bunch more art on the way soon. Edited content from 'We followed the Staff Sergeant for what felt like miles' up to Chapter 8.

Snekguy

Finished! The Pastebin has been updated with the final version.