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Birds of Prey Remastered (Patreon)

Published:
2019-04-16 22:51:32
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Here's the first 25,000 words of the 'Birds of Prey' re-edit, from Chapter 1 to Chapter 4.

Bi:  https://pastebin.com/GsBZHTex
Het:  https://pastebin.com/QrxC8L6Y

This one doesn't need any rewrites, it's mostly just punctuation errors and typos to clean up. I'll be making the Wiki entry for the Valbarans as I go, too, and then I'll make it into a shiny new Retail Ebook for you guys to own once it's finished.

Comments

Stefan Heeskens

I figured this one wouldnt take much changing. Outta all of the stories you've written, this was definitely the one where your writing chops shined trough the most. It shows as much in the buildup, the payoff and in the way that the characters where fleshed out better, even the 'side-characters'! Can't wait for part two!

CMed

I loved this story. Its giving me ideas for a flock to write about too. I wanted to throw this question out there, do you have some good recommendations for names for some Valbarans? :)

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words are edited, chapters 4 to 8.

Snekguy
>>21836068

Glad you enjoyed it, Stefan. I am eagerly awaiting the day when I can start work on the sequel.

Snekguy
>>21839894

I made the Valbaran names by taking various Nahuatl (Aztec) words and splitting them into segments, then re-combining them into names with three sections. I'll be working on the Wiki page for the Valbarans soon, so that should contain any information that you need.

Sharktogonapus

I've been working on some writing ideas I wanted to write a friendship between an Urgath and a Valabran flock but again I'm waiting for betleguesians to join the coalition also I've had something bad happen in my personal life. Writing is hard when grieving anyway. Hopefully you'll see me in fanworks again soon.

Snekguy

Another 25,000 words, chapters 8 to 12. There's been a bit of an issue, the guy who usually does the titling for my covers is no longer available, so I'm trying to find a new graphic artist who knows their way around photoshop. Worst case scenario, I might have to learn to do it myself. It won't delay the editing, but it may delay the release of the Retail Ebook somewhat.

CMed
>>21902601

I was actually going to ask you on that as well. I have Oouna doing artwork for me and I might be right behind you in needing someone to do some titling for a cover. I have a Photo Explosion Deluxe program that has some text options on it (not the same as Photoshop but it still has some abilities). I am going to be tinkering around with it to see if I can create some titling of my own. Might be able to help you out on that.

John May

My favorite story from you so far. Although it is kind of even with “Return to Krell” for my favorite....so maybe it’s my second favorite. Anyway, KEEP IT UP!

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words, from chapter 12 to 14.

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words today, from chapter 14 to 16. Just to the Hetero version today, as this is where the two versions diverge quite significantly.

rocks217

would love to see a part 2 to Date With a Drifter down the line

CMed
>>21964399

One thing nice with werewolves is that there are plenty more of them out there. Mythical wise have you seen how many different types exist in different cultures? How many of them are the friendly sexy beast women?

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words, the Hetero version is finished. All I need to do now is finish up the divergent scenes in the Bi version, and then I can make the Ebook. I've hired someone to work on the titling for the cover, so we'll see how that goes.

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words of the Bi version are edited, although I'm holding off uploading it tonight because I'd like to run some checks to make sure that everything is correct and that all of the edits are reflected in both versions. All I have left to do now is edit the last two scenes that feature Yaotl after the sex scene, and then it will be finished. I'm still having some issues getting the cover titled, so the Retail release may be delayed a little.

Snekguy

Finished! Both versions are updated with all of the new edits, and we also managed to get the book cover titled, so I'll be making the Retail Ebook for Birds of Prey tomorrow. As always, please let me know if you spot anything that I missed.

Snekguy

I'll be remaking the free version of this Ebook too, probably tomorrow. I really need to take a day or two to bring everything up to parity, I need to reupload all of the edited stories to Literotica, StoriesOnline, and FurAffinity, then I need to remake all 15 of the free Ebooks, then replace all of the links to said Ebooks on the aforementioned websites.

CMed
>>22044407

Phew, man talk about keeping yourself busy. :)