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Here's the first 2500 words of the new story, 'Firebrand', which follows Moralez and his companions as they try to solve an attempted murder of an ambassador from Jarilo.

 https://pastebin.com/DQiM4JCw

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Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I think that if Blackjack became any more relaxed, he would be dead,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Like a human,”

Snekguy

3000 word update, new content at 'As the three of them watched silently'

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at “Do you think that they had something to do with the assassination attempt?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'They reemerged from the bathroom'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Harry felt his companion stir'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Blackjack pushed a handful of his condiments to the center of the table,'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Holly emerged from the bathroom with a fresh shine to her carapace'

Snekguy

Had to do some IRL stuff today, but I should be able to resume updates as usual tomorrow.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Sidearms at the ready,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We have enough evidence to go on,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'They began to walk again'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Moralez heard a thud from behind him as Lorza slammed into an approaching Rask'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Is that where you met Boyd?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'In her imagination'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'His metal hands were so small'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I’m not sure this is a good idea,”

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at 'He tried to relax'

Zathas

The title's starting to make more sense now.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You know one thing for sure,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “If he wants to play cat and mouse, then I’m calling in the cats,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'The Chief led them through the winding tunnels'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You’ve seen the Bug?”

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at “Guess all we can do now is wait for our friend to wake up,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I feel...warmer,”

ItWasn7Me

So wouldn't cuddlebug be the most human creature we've seen a human diplomatic organ used on? Also is it a diplomatic organ if not used by someone in a trading/diplomacy role?

Snekguy

I had to do some IRL stuff today, so I only managed to get half an update done. I'll add it to tomorrow's update.

Snekguy

3000 word update, new content at 'He pulled down the rest of his uniform'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We’re doing this human style,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'He rose from his kneeling position'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Holly began to move'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “So...do you feel better now?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Please have the files sent to my associates,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Kelly tapped at his wrist'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'There were only two left'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'A red blip appeared on his visor'

Snekguy

I'm taking a bit of a day off today to reset my sleep schedule, been having some issues on that front the last few days. Normal updates will resume tomorrow (and also they'll be earlier!)

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Moralez returned to the hangar'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Vice Admiral Korbaz was the last to vote'

Snekguy

Final update, finished! New content at “Two new member species in one week,” Thanks for your patience with this one, guys. It took me 70 days, but I'm pretty pleased with the result. Now the editing process can begin. Next up, I'm going to work on something a little shorter.

Snekguy

The first 25,000 words are edited, from Chapters 1 to 4. There may be some disruptions to my editing schedule this weekend as I will have some family staying over.

Snekguy

Another 23,000 words edited, chapters 4 to 6.

Person Man

I really enjoyed this one, but I have one question: wasn't it implied in "Or Die Alone" that Kaisha was Lorza's roommate? When they're talking about old movies like "Balto", Lorza says: "I had a friend in Russia who would watch them endlessly. We shared a room while I was studying cartography as she was getting her doctorate. She pored over those things and I had the misfortune of overhearing much of it. She went on to become a doctor in the UNN I believe." Isn't she describing Kaisha? Yet in this story they're acting like they don't know each other, even in private (e.g. "peering up at the stranger"). Am I missing something?

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words edited, from chapters 6 to 8.

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words edited, from Chapter 8 to “What do you have on hand?”

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words edited from "What do you have on hand?" to Chapter 13.

Snekguy

The final 30,000 words are edited. It's not quite finished yet, I want to add an extra Boyd and Lorza scene, which I'll do over the next two or three days.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at [EDIT]. Starting the Boyd/Lorza scene now.

Snekguy

1500 word update, was a little busy today. New content at “We’re not on the job,”

Snekguy

1500 word update, new content at “No time for games,”. Finally finished! Editing is complete and the extra scene is finished, story is tagged and ready to go. I'll work on the Ebook tomorrow.