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AN: I've decided to split the difference on the paperback question. I'm going to find a secondary distribution channel to continue the 'old' paperbacks, while funneling the 'new' paperbacks to Amazon ONCE THEY ARE READY. They're not ready yet, so nothing's coming out yet. It'll be quite some time until spine art, etc. is ready.

AND WE ARE BACK! Early chapter because I can, because you've all waited so patiently. The rest of this week's chapters will be at their normal time.

I've had this scene in my head for a long, LONG time, and it felt so good to finally get it out on paper.

===========================Nearly 75 years after the events at the Phoenix Peaks

Lossamiel had [Sworn Vengeance] on the [Slavers] of Urwa.

At first she’d been meticulous. Kept a list of those responsible for kidnapping her, passing her around before slapping her in chains and silks and putting her on an auction block. A list that included the [Auctioneers], the buyers, the suppliers, and the hated Emir Eabd.

Being a [Slave], branded and forced to dance, wasn’t the end of the world. It was bad, but it was nothing.

Pain and raw emotion were a currency, an entertainment, and Lossamiel, along with the other slaves, had been occasionally tortured for the night’s amusement, surrounded by laughing and jeering elves. 

Then there were the pits…

When the freshness and novelty of Lossamiel had started to wear out, the [Emir] and the rest had dug deeply for new entertainments.

Lossamiel could still hear her scream as tiny feet kicked helplessly, inches above engraved marble. Every detail was carved into her mind, from how her wrists broke against the manacles, to the exact pattern of the shirt’s weave, to the choking gurgles. The horn-nubs that hadn’t even revealed the antler’s shape. The carefully timed cruelty to let her go just too late to do anything, the laughs as the party went on around her sobbing over her daughter’s death.

That was when she had [Sworn Vengeance], and didn’t care who she hit in her quest. 

All of Urwa was rotten, and needed to be purged. Everyone involved was either a [Slaver] and deserved to die, a citizen who helped and profited off the system and was complicit, or a slave themselves who would die to see their [Slavers] killed with them.

Freedom came one day. She’d been sold to a less-careful master who was fine with ‘refuse’ from the Emir, a cheap bargain for ‘high quality goods’. He wasn’t quite as good with chain lengths and skills, and Lossamiel had been able to dance close enough to wrap her chains around his neck and choke him out.

An orgy of violence had followed, Lossamiel venting her anger on the slavers closest to her before calming down and thinking.

Lossamiel had planned. It was a shame for the mortals whose lives would be too short to benefit from her move, it was torture for the remaining slaves, but it was better to do this right than to have a short-lived and futile rebellion.

The first thing she studied were the locations of all the [Emirs] and [Sultans]. How they operated, what the entire slave network looked like. What her targets were and where.

The information was freely available, and cost Lossamiel practically nothing. Simply the city toll to enter a city with a library, and she was set.

The next project was harder.

The general shape was easy and bandied about, but the details, the specifics, were restricted to the point of practically being banned.

The Guardians, and how they operated.

Lossamiel had spent two decades piecing together a loose theory of how they worked from various stories and tales, but even then most of them handled Guardians appearing after an attack. There were no solid records of how they intervened on channeled or highly prepared attacks. Simply the rare passage in a restricted book going ‘Sentinel Queen and The Nightmare were seen conversing on such and such date.’

Guardians were people too, and for all Lossamiel knew, it was a social call between two old Immortals, and had nothing to do with prepared attacks. 

She managed to develop a theory anyway, and she’d find out how accurate it was.

The third was studying the Divine Decrees and dimensional magic. This was by far the most expensive undertaking, needing to pay for an apprenticeship to a senior [Mage] who knew how it worked, and didn’t like competition too much. Creating portals was difficult, but doable, but creating portals that didn’t rip the fabric of space, simply pushed it around?

Quite a bit harder. If it stopped the gods from simply smiting her and preventing her revenge, it was all worth it.

It took a few more years to get her skills to a comfortable spot and plot the best course of action, but once it was done, the elf took off high into the sky, past the clouds, past where there was any air. Lossamiel carefully aimed her portals at each other, making sure they were aimed at the infinite expanse of deep space, past the horizon of Pallos.

She’d contemplated aiming them at the ocean, but the threat of a tsunami would probably be enough to summon the Guardians too early. No, aiming them away from anyone was best to stay unnoticed and undetected.

Then she dropped her steel balls into the portals, a dozen skills playing with each other. Aiming, survival, making sure the attack penetrated properly. Reading currents and playing with mass. They fell through, only to reappear a few feet away in the exit portal, ‘above’ the original one.

Speedy thing went in, speedy thing came out, and Lossamiel’s steel balls rapidly accelerated in minutes to terrifying speeds.

She wasn’t aiming for simply terrifying.

Minutes.

Hours.

Days.

Years.

Decades.

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Shera, The Dreamer, swam slowly through the depths of the ocean. She was a leedsichthys, one of the titans of the depths, but not quite the largest. Blue whales, krakens, and leviathans were larger. She’d been mistaken for a leviathan often enough, and most creatures knew to avoid tangling with her.

A shark took a curious nibble, and she simply redirected the currents to place him in her mouth, biting down with a satisfying crunch of breaking cartilage. She returned her attention to the ripples in the world.

Shera was a Guardian, and one of the gifts bestowed upon her was to see ripples, for lack of a better word. Focal points where disaster loomed. There were all sorts of qualities to the ripples, from frequency, to intensity, to color, flavor, and more. 

Nearly every living creature gave off ripples, and the vast majority were ignored. It was almost easier to see the unusual ripples in the sea of ordinary ones, and intervention was a judgment call.

An infrequent ripple came from the coastline, tasting of fish, colored blue and being small and rare. Some [Mermaid] trying to conjure enough water to drown the world, no doubt, but lacking in the skills and coordination to succeed. Maybe there’d be a few millimeters change in the ocean’s level, nothing that the tides wouldn’t wash out. 

Now, if King Nereus were trying to organize the merfolk en masse to drown the landfolk, perhaps as retaliation for his daughter being butchered and eaten by orcs for the Immortality her body provided, that could create a much larger ripple, one Shera would need to investigate and nip out before the world was flooded and drowned. Again.

A hungry set of pitch-black ripples was coming from a shelf in the ocean, and the intensity and frequency was finally large enough to stir Shera to action. With a few flips of her mighty tail, she sped through the depths, arriving at a chasm where a leviathan had been felled by a single ingested Vorler egg. It had hatched on the inside, poisoned the leviathan to death, then had feasted on the body, wildly reproducing over generations. The ancient monster was now bones, and a massive swarm of Vorlers threatened to overrun life in this corner of the ocean.

Shera preempted all that by crushing them to death with the weight of the deepest depths of the ocean, magnified a dozen times. It was like the hand of a god had come down on them, and Shera made sure not a single tiny egg would survive.

Perhaps it was time to dream again, to imagine the vast endless impossibilities that her Mirror element could then give rise to.

Then one of the endless far-off ripples dramatically changed in frequency and intensity. It had been building up for years and years, but at such a low level that it was ignored. It was suddenly at such a high level that every Guardian would intervene, and Shera immediately moved, leaving devastating currents in her wake, reshaping parts of the world, moving directly towards the ripples.

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Up on the lazily spinning moon, obscured by mirages that had lasted for tens of thousands of years, a single sprout defied all the odds to burst from the ground, unfurling leaves into an impossibly hostile environment.

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Lossamiel shifted the portals a hair, pointing them from a harmless location to populated city centers. She launched her attack with a single word, knowing she would die moments later.

But her revenge would be complete.

“[Moonfall].”

Comments

znoW

THANK YOU FOR THE FIX!1!1!1

rizen

So I was correct that it's a relativistic weapon haha. That's going to be overkill.

Daniel

Oh the cliff... How I've missed the.

Joss

And thus the first stone was thrown.

It’s_Bleau

This is the person that they flew by when traveling to the moon isn’t it… damn.

Necrotyr

I wonder what the mango tree sprouting on the moon has to do with anything, other than it being a bloody miracle :O

ZephaZeph

And thus the immortal wars begin with the vengeance of the enslaved. The guardians can do nothing, it'll be too quick. And life will grow on the moon. So many wonders and battles and life loss will be seen. This is so hype.

Centinel

I really am not sure I like this chapter. Dunno the last few bigger arcs seemed all kind of negative. Sure the moon landing was nice, but before that the war arc was the last longer and bigger arc. And now we have maybe again a great catastrophe with mich death. It feels like the story gets darker and .moving more into gromdark territory the longer it lasts. Granted I have no idea if that plan of her will work or if the guardians will intervene fast enough so I will have to see, but still I'm torn as if now.

Andrew

Thank you!

Daniel S

Oh hey we passed her on the way to the moon right? Dang what a Chekov's gun. Probably should have seen that coming. I'd love to see the math on the kinetic force potential of those steel balls. Though I suppose we are about to find out unless the Guardians can stop them all.

Todor

What are the odds that Urwa has abolished slavery in the meantime?

Elliote Elanor

If this doesnt erase like 2 continents then idk

Kaito

Is it monday where you are from? In Europe It's still sunday

Kaito

*uck... I actually wanted to wait for the audiobook, but reading through the comments makes me want to read all the other chapters straight away 😂

Lijwent

So we have a steel ball (m=1000g for easy computation) An acceperation of of 9.81m/s^2 No friction because of space, nothing lost because of portals A time of one decade = 60x60x24x365x10 seconds Impact energy is E=1/2 x v^2 x m v=1/2 x a x t E=1.19x10^21 Joules = 230'000 Megatons of TNT or about 4000x the tsar Bomba, but still way less than the impact that killed the dinausaurs (which is itself like 300 millions time bigger than the tsar Bomba) Still way overkill for a city (And who knows what the effect of the skills may have on it...)

Michael Maor

Great chapter, but makes me wonder why the god that introduced Elaine to this world bothered to remove information from her mind if this was allowed through...

ManKyYen

So I just looked up the relativistic formulas for constant acceleration over time and kinetic energy of relativistic objects. Because basic Newtonian physics won't work with something like this. Assuming the gravity of Pallos is almost like Earth's (10 m/s² to make the math simpler) and we have a little steel ball of 1 kg mass accelerated over just 30 years we get a total kinetic energy of 2.679 Petajoules. Or about 30.451 times the energy of the "Fat Man" atomic bomb that was dropped on Nagasaki during WW2.

Hauke Sattler

Now my math: !!! Corrected to due a missing factor !!! Assuming the Gravity of Pallos is similar to earth. So that steel ball is gaining 9,81 m/s of speed for every second it is been accelerated. She was talking about decades of acceleration. Plural. So at least 20 years. Assuming the pallos year is as long as an average earth year. 20*365,24*24*60*60 = 631.134.720 seconds. v=a*t = 9,81 * 631134720 = 6.191.431.603 m/s equals to 13.849.838.053 miles per hour. That's would be more than 20 times the speed of light!!! If my math is right, it would only need 353 days 16 hours 51 minutes and 24 seconds to reach the speed of light.

Adurna

Great kick-off to the Immortal War!

Virduckia

Hehe, portal reference

Katherine

That isn’t a nuclear blast anymore, that’s a planet cracker.

Rainnyth

Rods from the gods, fantasy style. Fuck yeah. *Eagerly* awaiting what's coming next. We are so fucking back.

TreeReader

Any chance you could share the size of the iron orbs and how many dexades? Could be fun to calculate blast energy based on accelerating only with gravity for that long.

Bosparan

Thanks for the awesome chapter. Looks like the next volume starts with a bang! ^^

Olly

We've got a lot of people calculating the energy of the balls, but not a lot talking about what kind of defenses they are going to encounter. It says the portal shifted their aim rather than moving. So we are launching the balls from orbital height to the surface of Pallos, not opening a portal at the targeted cities. So any defenses that interfere with portals are irrelevant, just those that stop high-speed physical objects. I'm also going to assume this elf has focused her entire build on making this attack, so probably several supporting skills that can be used to handwave why the balls don't disintegrate or go off course. (Gotta remember to Shift+Enter for new lines.) From the previous discussion on shields from Artemis, it sounds like most shields would attempt to stop or redirect a launched object, not erase it like Elaine's [Event Horizon] would. They would be fighting against the object's kinetic energy, which lots of commenters have calculated would be substantial. [Event Horizon] is optimal for exactly this kind of attack to such a degree that it's silly. Other shields probably won't be sidestepping the attack that way. While Lossamiel has been building up this attack for decades, city shields probably don't have comparable methods to build up defensive power to the same level: they will slow down the bullets until the arcanite or elvenoid powering them is exhausted, then the bullet will impact with its remaining energy. Some cities may have tricks to deflect, but whatever it is has to be either automatic or reflexive; there won't be time for much else. Of course, a city with a portal that redirects incoming objects would also be an effective shield someone else could have invented. It would have to be a very high level classer, but it's the exact trick Lossamiel has been using, so there are probably a few individuals who would be capable of it. Whether they are prepared to do so is another matter.

TeaGeek

I’m very glad we got to see what that one portal-user was up to

RandomPerson

Just tried to calculate the speed in a with the relativistic formula, the this ball will go practically at the speed of light

Aoinfinity

You see, this is why you do not systematically torture people in a System with extreme destructive potential and binding, empowering vows. *Because this will eventually happen.* That is all.

NethanielShade

XKCD’s baseball at the speed of light, but instead of a baseball it’s multiple steel balls, which have much much more mass, and thus energy. That’s probably somewhere on the order of several tsar bombas. Or a supervolcano. Or a small meteor.

Benjamin Olson

There is a giant assumption that the target is specific areas on Pallos. Think about the name of the skill used.... What if the target is one or both of the Moons with the intention of them breaking apart and the pieces faliing to Pallos. The metal balls would not be affected by any atmosphere to slow them down or burn them up. Just straight rail cannons at near speed of light to the surface of celestial objects that are already within the gravitational pull of the planet.

Shaun McDonough

I remember commenting that the title "moonfall" was ominous as hell back when it was a chapter header! Who knew it would turn out by right in this way 🤣

phantom

And this is one of the big reasons slavery doesn't work. Eventually you get someone so mistreated that they seek revenge to any length. and some eventually will get mistreated. Slavery is simply too easy to exploit.

Gremlin Jack

The elf's infinite acceleration trick is clearly not perfectly efficient, otherwise it would have taken her about a year to get up to relativistic speeds.

Markus

If we assume that Elaine and Iona wasn't stupid enough to not tell anyone about this elf preparing a incredibly dangerous attack. And that it still was allowed to go off. That means that getting into orbit is hard enough that Night can't do it easily or that it is incredibly hard to find a single elf in orbit.

phantom

They didn't know the immortal was building the attack up for so long.

Charles

Probably was running into issues with atmosphere, even at the edge of space. More probably some thaumaturgical reason. Most probably narrative license.

DireGoat

Space is very big and there is no form of divination magic in the series. Even that close to the planet the amount of area they would have to check is enormous. Add to that the fact that there are probably only at most a few dozen immortals who have skills optimized for space flight most of which are probably non combat focused and the odds of finding and stopping them in time are almost nothing.

Alex Lyons

Some rough math a tungsten baseball equals about 50lbs, 1/3 the speed of light is over 300 million fps, at the speed mentioned the force imparted from one ball would be slightly in excess of 22 megaton tnt.

Raivshard

Is that about the speed that they would hit before running into hard relativistic time dilation / acceleration issues?

Dragonkinn

Steel ball would vaporize on contrast with the atmosphere. Should have it be a magical element that would be unheatable or something bullshity to get around physics

Chloe

Tyftc