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Book 3 potential final artwork! One minor question (Patreon)

Published:
2021-02-09 02:42:17
Imported:
2026-06

Poll

Book 3 potential final artwork! One minor question

  • The sunburst is fine. 239
  • Make it a circle 7
  • 2021-02-09
  • 246 votes
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Content

Book 3 cover artwork! Yay!

Only thing I'm unsure of is how much I like the "Sunburst" around the circle.Technically, I did ask for it, but I didn't think my bad MS paint "straight spikes" would be taken so literally. 

Do I accept the artwork the way it is? Does it look good like that? Or do I just make it a circle?I really don't know, so I'm asking all of you!

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Comments

rintaun

I feel like I should switch my vote just to make that one person less lonely...

rintaun

For what it's worth though, I actually think the stylized sunburst works really, really well with the art style and subject

Reid Palmquist

In my opinion the sunbursts fit with the martial theme since they're reminiscent of swords. It has a good propaganda feel which is what the rangers seem to be going for with 'Sentinel Dawn' anyway. So it suits the context of the story. Of course, I still think chibi Elaine is the truest representation of Elaine and it wouldn't suit there. But here it does.

Jeff091

the sunburst is fine, i am a bit unsure of the area below her left armpit, the black oval looks a bit like an empty hole for an arm

Jesse

I don't really see a sunburst in that. It looks too chaotic for me, and think of 'sunburst' as stylized and symmetric. I'm .. relatively indifferent. I like the idea of the sunburst, I don't like that implementation?

Dragonkinn

burst is nicer. Is that your thought for the sunburst for the sentinel pin? For her being Dawn?

Thaabit Rivertree

To be honest, it's hard to tell without seeing the two versions side by side... I think the rays look kind of cool and keep it in the style of an ancient roman fresco, but maybe it would look cooler with empty space there (no rays) or shorter rays to be more symmetrical with the bottom half and in line with the 'dawn' meaning. Yeah I think shorter rays might be better cause that's more like dawn, but as it is it's not bad.

Arusalan

Generally looks cool, but it also looks like a giant golden virus in the back.

Alexey G

The sunburst looks good until one looks for details. So perhaps somehow improve it?

David Brims

I think if the Sunburst is a bit too dominant, instead of getting rid of it, ask for it to be faded a little bit. With just a little editing it will become less dominant in the picture. I think the sunburst works and would work better if faded into the background a tiny bit. The rays, I mean

Allie

The Starburst is better than a simple circle I think thematically. Currently a bit overdone, too sharp and long, sword theme, and too elongated for my tastes.

Sweet Serials

The only problem I can see, spoilers....