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AN: This chapter is a bit shorter and experimental. Supposed to try and show a bit of a timeskip as well! If it doesn't hit the mark, just remember we're returning to the regularly scheduled MC next chapter!

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It was a dark and stormy night. The tempest raged outside, thunder rattling the blinds as Fenrir gripped another shot glass of cheap whisky with his mouth, tipping it back. The liquor trickled down his throat as he crunched the glass, adding a sharp sting to the burn. The stench of smoke hung heavy in his room, clouding the air.

Business was bad. There was no stack of unpaid rent notices on a desk, no final warning that the arcanite would be cut off, but Fenrir Stormrider, Private Wyvern hadn’t gotten a client in months.

Maybe it was time to close up shop. Maybe the world had moved past the need for a private wyvern. Time passed, eras changed, and Fenrir hadn’t changed with them.

It certainly had nothing to do with his office being in a dorm, nor with only a half-dozen people who had access.

The door to his office slammed open at the same time as a crack of lightning, and Fenrir was momentarily blinded by the light.

A dame stood in his door. Pretty, with burning wings and an attitude to match. Usually all her feathers were in order, but right now, she was a flaming mess, practically sobbing into her mango juice. A little birdie, here to dish.

“Brrrrpt?”

She had a case. It stank, but a case was a case, and it wasn’t like Fenrir had clients beating down the door. Her cookies were as tasty as anyone’s.

Someone had thrown up in the dorm hallway, and Auri wanted Fenrir to get to the bottom of who’d done it, and if anyone was going to get ill from it. Not the most glamorous of cases, but the glamorous ones never came to him. Those went to the watch, all pretty and shiny. No, the dark, dirty underside of the School was where Fenrir lurked.

Fenrir put on his hat, and left his office. He took an experimental sniff of the air.

Ah yes. Students. Iona and Elaine had crammed two beds into one room, moving the desk and chair to another. They were enjoying themselves, finding small comfort in each other’s arms as the world fell apart. Skye and Reinhard were out, attempting to better themselves in spite of the bleak prospects that awaited them all off the island.

Fenrir roamed the dingy hallways of the School dorms, walking on his wings and legs, tail lashing behind him. He could fly now, but the hallways were closing in on him, becoming too narrow to easily fly in. The rain could be heard even from here, the gale winds wild and fierce. His nose went to the ground, sniffing and tracing back to the scene of the crime.

It didn’t take him long to find it. Someone had spewed chunks all over the entrance to the dorm, students stepping over it with barely a look of disgust. Typical. Too small for the fuzz to handle, and nobody would pay them off to investigate.

Fenrir gingerly sniffed the… contents… trying to work out who it could’ve been by.

The stench of half-digested booze made him reel, but it should be expected at the School. Nobody could face the cruel realities of life sober.

There were meats and grains, and some brown lumpy things mixed in with the rest.

“Fenrir! No! Bad wyvern!” Iona yelled from behind him.

It had been a setup! The dame had framed Fenrir for the crime! She’d brought the heat onto him. Fenrir didn’t know why, but that was unimportant at this moment. The important part was to escape, before the hired goon could practice for her chiropractic degree.

Fenrir fled through the door, spreading his wings into the storm and letting the gale lift him up. The goon vanished into the mist below.

Fenrir chewed over the pieces of the puzzle, as lightning struck him time and time again.

Who wanted to throw up in the entrance of the dorms? Who benefited from such a senseless act? There was always someone who benefited, gems making a wonderful clink as they changed hands.

Why frame Fenrir? Well, that was an easy one. Only Fenrir’s landlady would miss him when he was gone, and even then the only thing she’d miss was an eviction lawsuit.

There were no answers to be found up here in the clouds. Fenrir dove down, looking for one of the seedy bars that School students were known to set up. Illicit, but a few greased palms had the cops looking the other way.

The place didn’t even have a name.

Fenrir prowled his way to the bar, only for the bouncer to block his way.

“Dude, we’ve told you, you’re not allowed in.”

Fenrir growled at the bouncer, making an elegant argument why he should be permitted. It was different this time.

“No.” The bouncer crossed his arms.

Fenrir narrowed his eyes, but left.

They were in on it as well.

How deep did this conspiracy run? Who else was in on it?

What was it all for?

Well, the perpetrator always returned to the scene of the crime, and that was where Fenrir was heading to next. The heat should be off by now.

Fenrir fought against the winds, landing by his dorm.

Gone!

The cleaners had come! All evidence of the crime had been removed! Whatever dastardly deed they had wanted to accomplish had been done! Fenrir was too late to stop them!

It was time to admit defeat. It was time to face the music, and call in the big guns.

Head hung low, Fenrir dragged himself back to his office.

“Hey Fenrir, you ok? Auri explained it wasn’t you, I’m not mad.” Iona asked him.

Fenrir hesitated, then curled up on Iona’s lap. It was a good spot, with good scratches.

More hands joined in as Elaine sat down next to Iona, the brunette’s hands joining with the blonde’s to get in all the right spots.

Fenrir settled in, growling contentedly. He sniffed the air, Auri’s baking, and his pay, smelling heavenly, mixed in with just the slightest hint of old booze and meat.

His eyes flew open, and he shook off his adoring fans. Stretching his wings, he hop-glided to the hallway, put his nose to the floor, and started to trace the scent.

It took him three steps to end at a door. A door he knew all too well.

Varuna!

The unicorn had done it!

It didn’t answer the why, but the redheaded dame hadn’t asked for a why. She’d just wanted a who. Speaking of, the dame was here now, with the sweet, sweet sound of cookies rattling around.

“Brrrpt?”“Varuna.” Fenrir growled back, barely managing to force the word out.

“BRrrrrpt!”

Fenrir couldn’t believe it either, but who knew what motivated the unicorn.

The case was closed. It wasn’t as closed as he’d like it, but it was the rare case that stitched itself up all neat and tidy. A few loose ends wouldn’t hurt anyone, and more importantly, he’d gotten paid. Paid in the only currency that mattered. Tasty, tasty cookies.

Another successful day for Fenrir Stormrider, Private Wyvern.

Comments

Nate El

Omg epic!

Julie

First! TFTC!

matt

sweet. damn, barely missed first :D I was off reading about madoka gayness lmfao. Selkie - I quite enjoyed Fenrir imagining he was a Noir Detective. Just missing a line about Auri's flaming red dress :D

Ben

I thought this was fun

Jeppe Fiig

didnt quite fill my daily need for btdem

Random Information

In the style of Tracer Bullet, professional snoop (Calvin and Hobbes)?

Dallin Blackburn

I'd never have imagined a wyvern being the star of a black and white old time detective movie. But it was definitely worth the read

BluEarth

Not bad per se just disappointing

Cormac

"It was a dark and stormy night." Selkie... I'm not angry, I'm just... disappointed. For shame.

luda305

It was fun. Please don't do it again.

Tatiana

That was interesting, like a classic detective movie. Still wish to read more of the main story though, it's too good, just anxious for more. The tournament is going to be quite interesting too.

Viria

Not a fan at all. I was eagerly waiting for more Iona x Elaine butterflies today. This should have been a side story / bonus for the higher tiers.

Sesharan

I guess this is at least something of an insight into Fenrir’s intelligence level?

Alex E

I was very confused for a bit but I find it hilarious, and Fenrir shall forever be a bit chuuni in my head now xD

TroubleFait

This is delightfully senseless.

Jason Hardman

It's fun and all, but I've no idea why Fenrir would have adopted this persona? Has Iona been reading him cheesy detective novels (assuming those even exist in this world)?

Matt

Would prefer more of the MC content to this, but I also think that it would make a good addition to side story bonus content. The psychological effect of, 'it's release day, time to read... what is this' is hard to work against for me. It's hard to take chapters like this seriously, because they're intentionally comedic and have an untrustworthy narrator. So if you do a time skip, I'd prefer to see some reference to it with one of the... more normal characters :D

Kris Boxall

I liked Detective Fenrir :D

elijah pickett

That was impressively silly and cute. And apparently she does enough similar things the bouncer knows her well!

Konner Morris

I enjoy genre shifts in. Books, I wouldn't mind other individuals like anyone from Remos from having a different perspective and as a result a different tone. So long as it adds something you deem 'important'. For example Fenrir mentions that the 'world down there is dangerous.' This might actually be a clue that Fenrir has noticed some inexplicable concern from Iona and knows that there's some actual legitimate conflict brewing. Maybe Night is starting to make moves and that's spread to the school?

fennek

This chapter was not for me. It felt just stupid, the setup with the detective thing kinda jarring. But that's just me, i don't have to like all interludes.

Thomas Payne

Very cute, undercurrent that there are problems in the world

Jams

Loved this chapter. I think this is a fun way to give personality to a character we haven't spent a lot of time with. What Fenrir imagines himself as is insightful while still being silly and fun.

Captdeth

This was fucking awesome

julian

In quite enjoyed this one

Joshua Taylor

I found it hilarious, but wouldn't want to see these type of chapters too often.

Elaine

good chappie and good fenrir

Buzz1089

I loved it. Really showed the mix of intelligence and childishness in Fenrir.

matt

Prediction time - I guessing that the timeskip is a year or so later, and we get Artemis back, telling Elaine they found Night. She immediately decides to go see him/the phoenixes (summer vacation?) She's done her upgrades and picked her "for real" third class, and they set off. Status Page. End of book 8.

Imp

Okay, that was adorbs

Psy

Just needs a few sentences at the front of Elaine telling the companions bedtime stories and Dick Tracy being his favorites to make it fit the world a bit better.

AntiClimax she her

I'm torn. On the one hand, it was quite enjoyable to read and gives some insight into Fenrir--and I think that it's great to try new experimental stuff. On the other hand, it doesn't feel like much was done to advance the story here, apart from showing that Auri has gotten good at making cookies, Elaine and Iona have moved in with each other, and that Fenrir apparently has an alcohol problem. I think that I would have appreciated it more if it was either just bonus material, or that the story was advanced more. Of course it's possible that something significant to the narrative did happen, but I missed it. Perhaps I'll have a different opinion Wednesday.

Travis Brown

I think it would make more sense if Fenrir was playing ranger or sentinel. I don’t see an earth noir detective being anything he would be exposed to. It also felt hollow, the time skip could be just one day from the last chapter, it doesn’t take long to move a bed and we don’t know what fenrirs been up to during school to this point. We only see him in the dorm room with Iona. I’d have preferred him and Auri sneaking out, him in his classes, or a time lapse of him learning lightning from inside of the storms with Auri panicking that he’s all wet.

Pocket Rikimaru Thanatos

Fenrir gave me a good chuckle, and I was wondering what his thoughts were like, so a successful little interlude.

Nick O'Roonling

It kinda reminded me of the Babe page in every issue of Jack of Fables.

PrometheusDarkflame

I’m conflicted. On one hand, this was a cute little side story, on the other, it felt short and like nothing advanced in the story. Maybe this should have been an bonus chapter, not a Monday post. Hmm, at least it was cute.

NethanielShade

I’m personally not a fan of constant POV changes. One every 10-20 chapters, sure. Or when showing another POV gives the reader important info that the MC might not know yet. Basically, when it serves the story. But it feels like recently it’s been very common. I’m invested in Elaine. She is the main character since the beginning. I care about her story. Everyone else is a side character.

Prent

I wonder, what exactly is Varuna's evil plan?

Argentorum

Private wyvern extraordinaire!

Arg

Well this was a waste, would have rather had Selkie take the day off and not get my hopes up.

A B

Omg I'm dyin' here

Aclys

I very much enjoyed the chapter... It feels a little 4th wall-smashy with how come the junior wyvern is thinking like a 60's detective novel... But it is adorable, hilarious and certainly brightened my day.

Darkdragon

I was so confused at the start with fenrir somehow drinking whisky but it was a funny chapter

usa1ph

I enjoyed this chapter was fun to read.

war doggle

The reason he is banned from the school bar isn't because he is a wyvern it is because he eats the shot glasses.

Eliezer

That sure was an unexpected genre shift.

Pratish Sungum

I like change in PoV as long as it is used in moderation. For the change in genre, not a fan.

Thenais

didn't expect this

Michael Rivertree

I was very surprised but I really Iike the private detective slant for Fenrir. It was well done in my opinion

Gopard

 Thanks for the chapter!