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S.EXpedition (Patreon)

Published:
2023-10-19 05:00:02
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2026-06
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Deita

I get it's the whole theme of the comic is just fucking, but Jack went from caring about what's going on around him to just "pussy". Kinda annoying, since you can really see it's just a main focus on Tia, which I can see causing a rift in the future.

ebluberry

Let's see how you write the story then. What would you like jack to do?

Deita

It's not about what I want Jack to do. I'm saying that Jack used to at least show a semblance of care about what was going on around him. That last scene, Jack was more focused on plowing Tia instead of getting through the challenges, as if they were an afterthought. It's your story, write it however you want. I just have opinions and there's no need to pull the "let's see how you do it" card when there's critique. I also said it seems like it's going to cause a rift between Jack and Rea with how much he just focuses on fucking her sister instead of anything else. They've barely had moments together in recent scenes, with the most recent being the tub. Pair that with Tia's jealousy and it feels like they're just going to wind up in a war over what to do about Jack, all the while he's probably slamming someone new in the background.

ebluberry

When I pulled the "let's see how you do it" card, I wanna see how to deal with this, how would you do it in this case, well. About that, I'm writing in a way that Jack has more feelings towards Tia compared to Rea, and you are right, it's going to cause a rift. I know Jack's a dick but it's like you met someone you're more compatible with. Tia is his favorite girl right now...also this is a harem story.

Doppler12

Jack almost always cares more about sex than what’s going on around him, it’s always been that way, so I don’t see a problem with it - it helps facilitate those situations arising.

Deita

I wouldn't even call it "more compatible". Tia is just dick hungry and has been jealous of Rea since the jump, but she's never been interested in Jack's personality nor his insatiable lust. It's just compatibility with the only dick she's ever had. Personally, I have no idea how I'd go about it. I'm not a writer, but as I said, they were just in a labyrinth. They had no idea what was in store for them or what would be on the other side, but they just fucked. Now, we just got done with that, and he's trying again with Rea. I'm not saying that a porn comic that's about fucking shouldn't have it, but this comic also has story. I think a small portion of story building after a fuckfest scene would be a welcome addition.

The8lackMamba

I love how you are writing the story an characters. An I can see the ridge being of Tea and Rae I just hope that when that happens that they can patch it up because if I'm being honest the three of them is damn perfect almost they make each other better than when the story began. Theyd make a great trouple lol