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Everything is subject to change of course, But i'd like your feedback on how it is currently.

One thing i am a lil iffy on is the name. Like i really do like the name but its the case of "would you go to an inn thats advertising broken beds". Im most likely gonna keep it unless i come across a better name.

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_ Nutay _

I think this is a really good rough draft, I like the name of the story (kinda funny). I am curious on the monster will be tho and what they will look like.

Robert Murray

To be fair, Bella isn't going to this inn out of choice, it sounds like she's going out of necessity. It could be called anything and I imagine she'd still go there since she's tired/it's the only inn.

Coot27

Whatever monster lady it is, She will be BIG. like "cannot sleep in the bed" big. Giant of a woman

Coot27

After a long ,bumpy and exhasting caravan ride, the choice between going to the closest inn or another one on the other side of town is an easy decision to make.

Robert Murray

Exactly! You see the vision 😎

Mars Project

Does said monster lady also have similar equipment to Bella? Or is going to be pure female? Also any ideas on what kind of monster lady? Like is it more monster than lady? Or is it more humanoid? Also why monster lady? Why not some warrior milf? Maybe a half-orc?

Coot27

Purely female. No idea what species the lady is going to be but def humanoid. Large enough to where they need to crouch though a door. The idea of a giant warrior milf or a half (or full) orc is there but thats all up in the air at this point.

Crash

Im guessing this ia a resort town, out in the middle of nowhere(part of the appeal) and 40gs is a many times higher than a normal overnight room at an inn due to this "free fuck" that comes with the room,which is why bella briefly winces at the price but the fatigue overwhelms her normally stingy attitude.

Kunshu_104

Warrior milf sounds hot af not gonna lie

Coot27

Bella is completely unaware that the room came with a "hostess". She just wants some place to sleep and yeah 40 gold is a good bit.

Crash

So im suggesting instead of town, have it be like one of those resorts out in the middle of nowhere instead of a town, so she has no where else to go. And rename broken bed inn to something more haute, yet lewd. Like "Morning wood lodge" or "The Sword and Chalice"

Coot27

Oooohhh. i Love those names. and yeha maybe an inn just out in the middle of no where. i did get this idea while playing oblivion remaster and the game has PLENTY of those

Crash

Yeah(im playing it too) and since its out of government oversight, no need for her to sign a waiver to consent to getting locked in a room and get forced to get laid all night.

Crash

Also how is the sex scene gonna go when bella is exhausted enough to not give a fuck about room prices?

Snoodle

I'll admit, I'd personally prefer she be hung like a horse, but I'm just happy any time we get more Bella!

vanagandr

I always liked names that play on the words or circumstances like the shove it inn or the Only inn. 40 gold seems Hella high for a room though. That's Tiber septim hotel prices.

Coot27

SOmething something, repeat business

Coot27

Really surprised when someone bursts into her room in the middle of the night, but accepts that its going to happen.

Coot27

Only inn is nice, but a bit too on the nose for my liking. and if you think thats alot, wait until i make the animation explaining how much an iron bar costs (it's 80 coins)

Coot27

Who knows when ill get around to the project, plenty of others to do before hand

vanagandr

To be fair, my opinion is irrelevant anyway. I'm not going to watch this one. I'm only here for futa face fuckery™️