Rory v0.9! Proofreading wanted! (Patreon)

Hello!

Here's a 4K render of the last Rory version! I think i'm satisfied with her look, from now on there will be only technical fixes i guess.. 

Let's get to the point, I need some proofreading of the 1st episode script before asking for a VA. If you have been patron for more than 2 months and you master the english language feel free to hit me in DM, all help is greatly appreciated (because my english sucks, i think you know that)!