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Chapter 673: Velari

Rook looked at Derek, then at his son, then back again before his face changed to one of understanding, and he said, "Ah... yes, that makes perfect sense now." He nodded. "If Hall Master Sheen has evaluated you so highly, then it is only natural that bringing a possible future powerhouse into the clan as a friend or ally would increase Alex's rankings by so much."

"I should have realized that sooner. And please, do not let that fact sour your opinion of our clan. We do value our interpersonal relationships, but in the System Universe, strength is valued more than anything. So, yes, I can understand if the rankings change and that badge makes you feel more like a valuable object than a person, but I hope you don't hold that against us," Rook explained.

"It's fine by me," Derek replied with a shrug. "I'm wearing it more as a deterrent so I don't get interrogated by every person who passes me since I'm obviously not part of the Loomis Clan."

"That is as healthy a way as any to use the badge and what it represents," Rook said. After that, things went quiet for a short while before Rook frowned and asked Derek, "I, of course, will not ask you about your affinity or your power, but may I ask, are you human?"

Fuck...Derek thought. Why wouldn't he wonder that? His branch is the one that does all the studying and research, after all. I bet the hall master wondered the same thing but didn't have as much curiosity as Rook does. Derek quickly glanced around and saw that Tanya was staring intently at him, and Alex was fidgeting in his seat. After a moment of hesitation, Derek chuckled.

"You caught me," he said.

"I caught you?" Rook widened his eyes. "So, you are saying... you are not human?"

"I... am human," Derek replied. He wasn't technically lying. He was a Void Human now, but that was not the direction he had planned on going. So far, Dave's advice hasn't led me wrong. He told me to 'get rid of' anyone I fight, which I did with Nikolai, so hopefully... "But I am also part Velari."

"Velari?" Rook looked Derek up and down, then smiled and nodded. "Now that I can see. The eyes are a dead giveaway. I can also tell that your hair has the slightest tint to it, as well." He squinted his eyes, then nodded. "Though, I do not see the horns, which would suggest that you are at most half-Velari?" He reached up and rubbed at the top front of his head, where Derek assumed the horns would have been.

"Damn," Derek said as he stared at the man, dumbfounded. He then looked at Alex. "So you aren't the best in your branch when it comes to worldly knowledge, then?"

"Alex is certainly quite adept, but I have many centuries more experience than my son does—even if he studies harder than I ever have," Rook said as he looked at his son with a smile. Turning his head back to Derek, he said, "It has been some time since I have spoken to a Velari—or even a half-Velari. Most Velari live on the other side of the Origin System."

"That makes sense," Derek replied. "My mother was human, and I was raised around them." Derek rubbed his head, going off of what Rook had said. "Not having horns made it easier to fit in, but also a bit disappointing."

"Disappointing?" Rook asked.

"Well, yeah," Derek replied. "Who doesn't think those horns are cool?"

"Hahaha," Rook slapped his leg while laughing. "Velari horns certainly are cool. And although I do not know your affinity, I can see how not having the horns of a Velari would be disappointing for a half-Velari. They do make control over manipulation skills so much easier."

"That's true," Derek replied. "But easier doesn't always mean better." He thought about demonstrating a Spatial Collapse or Spatial Rend in front of the man to show that he had a space affinity, but figured it would be best not to offer up that information yet. It would make it more believable if it wasn't given freely. He only had the three spatial skills, after all—unless he counted Time Prison, which could be considered as such, along with the time affinity. But a skill that combined time and space was much too close to void for him to be comfortable showing to just anyone.

"You are not wrong," Rook said with a nod. Finally, he sat back in his chair and looked at Tanya. "Tanya, why don't you take Mr. Hunt to get settled while Alex and I catch up?"

"Of course, Father," Tanya said, and then stood. "If you will follow me," she told Derek, then headed towards the door.

"It was nice meeting you, Rook," Derek said after standing. He liked the man, so he offered him a small bow. "And please, stop with the Mr. Hunt... call me Derek."

"Very well," Rook said with a smile.

Derek then looked at Alex, who was still sitting there nervously. He sent telepathically, 'Feel free to tell him anything that I spoke about with the hall master. Just be careful with anything else.'

'I will do my best,' Alex replied without turning his head.

"Come find me when you're finished, Alex," Derek said out loud.

"I will," Alex said.

"Okay, Tanya," Derek looked at the woman who was standing next to the door. "Let's go. Show me around."

"Ugh," Tanya said, stretching her arms after the door closed behind them. "It's so stifling to sit in a meeting with Father and act all proper because we have a guest."

"So the two of you aren't like that all the time when you're with Rook?" Derek asked.

"Of course not," Tanya said. "He is our father, and all of us have a good relationship with him. Some relationships are better than others, but all are good. We just can't act all casual around a guest wearing that badge—well, Father probably wouldn't mind it now that he's met you, but not during initial introductions."

"I see," Derek replied. "Well, your father seems like a pretty good guy—at least from that short visit. Then again, I didn't think I'd like you at first with the way you acted around your brother at the beginning."

"I fought hard for that ranking—I still fight hard every day for that ranking. Of course, I'm envious of him. What kind of stupid luck does he have to survive a betrayal, then show up to the clan with someone that Hall Master Sheen deems worthy of a Tier III VIP Badge?"

"Why don't you head out and go make a powerful friend? Seemed pretty easy for your brother," Derek replied with a laugh.

"If only it were that easy," Tanya rolled her eyes. "Besides, I would rather get there with my own skills and hard work than rely on the power or rank of someone else. That's a fast way to the top, but an even faster way to the bottom."

"I can't argue against that," Derek replied. "Now, where are we going?"

"I don't know," Tanya said with a shrug. "Where do you want to go? What do you want to see? With that badge there, I can't think of many places Father would consider off-limits to you—at least not on our estate."

"That's neat," Derek replied as he glanced at the badge again. "Uh... I really don't know what I want to see. How about you just show me what you think is cool, and we go from there?"

"Okay," Tanya replied. "We do have a pretty 'cool' library."

"Then we can add that to the list," Derek replied.

After that, Tanya led Derek through the estate, showing him everything. Obviously, the most astounding thing about the entire place was the massive library that they wandered through. The inside was much larger than the entire building that it was in—showing that there was some kind of spatial manipulation at play in the room.

It was also interesting to note that although there was a lot of information available on their devices and screens, the people in the Origin System—or at least the Spindle Branch of the Loomis Clan—preferred physical books. Derek wanted to ask if there was a reason or if the Origin System limited information that could be obtained or found digitally, but it would have been an odd question for someone who they thought was from the Origin System to ask.

As they left the library, Derek turned and took one more look at it and sighed, "It really is a nice library. How many books, scrolls, and things do you think are in there?"

"Off the top of my head?" Tanya asked. She stopped walking and pondered. "Including books, maps, manuscripts, and everything else? I don't know, probably over 75 million items. We only have things that the librarians and clan members deem important, so it's not the biggest library."

"It's not the biggest library?" Derek asked. "It's the biggest library I've ever been inside."

"Really?" Tanya asked. "That's surprising. There are much bigger public libraries around. Sure, most of the information you can get in them is garbage since it's all public, and all the single-use scrolls and books are in private collections, but there are libraries in certain cities with billions of books."

Wish I knew how big the Library of Congress was back on Earth. That would give me something to compare it to at least... my fault for not caring about any of that stuff in school, I guess. Football was much more fun, Derek thought. "Well..." he said. "I'm not much of a reader or researcher. I'm more of a get-out-and-doer."

"Obviously," Tanya said.

"What is that supposed to mean?"

"You don't get to where you are at your level by researching and reading," Tanya said. "You get to where Alex is by doing that. So, obviously, you are a 'doer.'"

"Oh, yeah... exactly," Derek replied. "What about you?"

"I'm a bit of both," Tanya said as she took Derek through a hallway. "I don't research my affinity and skills nearly as much as Alex does, but I do much more than most people. And I'm quite a bit more combat-focused than my siblings, as well."

"How many siblings do you have, anyway?" Derek asked.

"Thirteen," Tanya replied. "Father hasn't had nearly as many children as most of the other branch heads."

"That... isn't a lot?" Derek asked. Actually... with how long people live, I guess the virility and fertility problems that elves and stronger people have probably have easy solutions in the Origin System—nothing like how it was back in the Davenresh System.

"Not at all," Tanya replied as they turned a corner. So far, the entire building had been both old and modern. It was as if the clan preferred the aesthetic of older-looking stone structures, but with more technological or modern furniture and objects for the inside. "One of my uncles has 37 children. The youngest is only five years old this year... the oldest is my father's age."

"That... sounds about right, actually," Derek replied.

"Okay, that's about it for all the 'cool' places inside the estate. Overall, our estate is one of the more basic ones—with the library being the most important part. I'm sure Alex will be around soon enough to go do whatever mysterious thing with the Amber Tyrant's amber goo he didn't want me to know about. This is the 'VIP' guest room. Go in  and do what you like. Rest... whatever," Tanya said as she placed her hand on the wall by the door, and they heard a click. "And no, you don't have to worry about any spying or anything like that. We wouldn't dare do such a thing to someone with that badge."

"Oh... I wasn't," Derek said. "But thanks for the assurance. And thanks for the tour."

"Once you're inside, you can attune the room to you so you can enter and exit as you wish," she said as she turned around. "If you need anything, there are servants, or you can ask one of them to find me."

"Okay, sounds good," Derek replied as he walked inside. He watched Tanya walk away, then pulled the door closed. He then put his hand on the designated spot on the wall by the door. It scanned his hand, then gave him options. He chose to 'lock' the door. Then he turned and looked at the room.

It was nice. There was a comfortable-looking bed, along with a desk with a holo screen that he didn't have the first clue how to use. There was also another door leading to what Derek expected to be a bathroom. I hope there's a shower. Even if not, I still have a portable one, he thought.

Finally, he sighed and sat on the bed. He wanted to pass out right then and there. It had been a long time since he had good sleep on a bed—or anywhere, actually. However, before that, he had something to do. "Let's see what all that fighting before we teleported did for me."

A/N: Have a good weekend! Thanks for reading!

Comments

AB

Gotta say I’ve been with this story since the beginning. The spark seems to be fizzling out. I just feel that we get non stop filler and mediocre and redundant commentary for 80 percent of every chapter now. Hopefully we start progressing again but it might be time to take a pause.

SunriseCV

Alright. You have to do what you have to do. Thanks for being here for so long, though. Like I said, I always try to write what I enjoy, and these are the chapters I enjoy writing the most. I see this same message about every arc and every book. Then I see ones that love it, too.

Kevin

Thanks for the chapter. It’s a perfect time to bring out all the gang and have them stretch a bit. Also a bathroom to freshen everyone up.

Corwin Amber

Unlike AB, my only issue is I wish that you supported paying by the year. I find I care less about a filler chapter hear and there when I've already paid for the year. Mentally seems to matter to me a lot less. Might just be me though.

SunriseCV

I can understand that. I always wonder about that though because I never know when something is going to happen. Like with my dad, sure, those were the first two weeks I’ve ever ‘taken off,’ but I would never want someone to pay for a year, then something happen and I’m out for months or more.

Jake Rands

Just so you know, I completely disagree. I still love the story! Thank you for sharing it with us.

Aaron Jackson

I don’t mind the slow buildup in the new universe. I am enjoying the story quality and eagerly waiting for new posts. Keep up the good work.

SunriseCV

It’s all good. Everyone has their tastes and opinions.

Corwin Amber

The only thing I can think to say to that is 'Shit Happens'. Can't plan for everything. And anyone that pays for a year should know that they are paying for the author's vacations/unforeseen situations. For instance I know one author gives '10-20% off' if you buy yearly instead of monthly. Means if you are taking 1-2 months off a year then it all evens out in the end. And if something truly catastrophic happens, then I refer back to my original response of shit happens :)

MistuhBogan

I actually love these chapters myself. The only part that kills me is the pacing we get them in. I definitely don't want you working yourself to death, but I sit around and haunt my own patreon every Tuesday and Thursday at about this time waiting for it to hit. Id love a chapter to read every night before bed if I could.

Corwin Amber

Depends on how much he is playing with time in his space. Might be better to remain in there rather than have others find out about them before he gets them safely to the city Dave told him to go to.

DC

I am also enjoying the world building in the recent chapters. I will usually wait until I have 8-10 chapters built up before I binge read them but I have been reading them as soon as they are posted lately.

Makix217

Thanks for the chapter. Hope you get to enjoy your weekend as well! Looking forward to see what the gains are!

Walter Kimberly

F*** that guy. Filler? This is the beginning of a new system, new world. This is how you know things play out. Derek has to watch his p’s and q’s with the void emperor guy, but he hopefully found a family that will help him if not strong enough to back him. So from all off us AB C you later

Walter Kimberly

I’m almost pissed over these comments. One guy talking about a yearly subscription another guy talking about filler. Subscription guy I’m broke half the time and have to wait for a good check to resubscribe. Filler guy would you consider the dumb ass rabbit attacking Derek for two chapters filler? There are a thousand points like this in every book. Jace’s annoying ass was the person who actually saved a lot of Derek’s personal shit from his cabin. You never know what you read today says more than you can possibly imagine

Amathew2

I support and have supported in the past many different creators. Several like yours are monthly and I happily pay when you are as consistent as well yourself. A couple of others I stopped supporting as they stopped producing for longer and longer periods of time. I fully understand life and sometimes writers block happen and I try to be supportive through the down times. However when one goes months without producing anything and gives little or no updates I have to withdraw my monetary support. I still follow them anticipating their return to productivity but there are other creators out there I could give that money to. I say all this because I understand your point but please understand that given the circumstances of your “vacation” and how transparent and respectful you were to your followers, I would choose the support you over someone that just takes the monthly payments and doesn’t at least give an explanation or update of their work.

granndfunk

The area may be warded in a way that detects new arrivals. Might be better that he wait. Which is why Derek won't wait.

granndfunk

For Derek - and our - information, the Library of Congress has about 173 million items

Drake Hawkins

I like the buildup for this new book, however I really hope there is more to this book than just making it to origin city being the entire book. I hope we get some training arc and fight scenes.

AB

I appreciate the response and the honesty. I also want to say that a large part of sticking with you is because you’re reliable. You’ve built a level loyalty by always following through with what you say.

Corwin Amber

I agree with everything you just said. I would only add one thing, which is a yearly choice is just that. A Choice. The monthly option still remains. And ultimately it is the choice of the person paying to choose what they prefer, whether that is monthly or yearly if both options exist.

Perren D'Wolff

I see where he is coming from but don't quite agree. In the release format of a couple chapters a week it can feel dry and stretched at time..... But when you read the whole book on release it's about perfect with a great flow.

J W

New system new exposition. How else will Derek learn the ins and outs without chapters like these? I guess you can just introduce a literal talking head instead but people wont like that either. I may not like every chapter myself but I also know I dont have the patience or ability to write a story but I sure like to read them. A true escape into someone else's mind and an escape from my own for a few mins is worth every penny.

ABTelford

Thanks for the chapter! I enjoyed the ad-lib “I wish I had horns!” From Derek, that had me grinning! Nice lie!

ABTelford

I completely agree. When put into book format the ebb and flow of action is quite well balanced! I personally crave more emotional depth but there’s nothing wrong with a fun romp of adventure.

R. Maxwell Steele

I think I actually like the filler. What kills the Interest is repetitiveness. 3 chapters in a row of telling the story to the hallmaster and then the sister and then the dad. Then a visit to a library not to read anything but instead to talk about the same stuff for a fourth time. All of these are actually well written little interactions. But could be broken up with actually doing things. Balancing the telling with some showing. Also the library had me pumped, but then they just glance at it. It would have been cool to read about entropy and have Derek flip to a chapter where it intersects with space and another where it intersects with time. Cross referencing it with actual books on the Void. Getting a few insights on his path and the path he's pretending at without being super conspicuous. Just can't fathom going to a library and not reading anything. It's like going to restaurant look around and not eat.

Schneeente

I can understand the sentiment (criticism of slow pace etc) but the reason for that (in my opinion) is not that sunrise changed his pace or got lazy, it has to do with the fact that we only get one chapter every couple of days. There were "slower" paces in the past, quite frequently tbh, but if you can quickly read through them they don't bother anyone or are even positive.

Josh Kubo

I’m always looking forward to seeing the next chapter… except for the Thursday chapters. Because it’s 4 whole days before the next one. So it’s kind of a rush to see the Tuesday chapter because I know that there’ll be another one on Thursday. . . But then I know it’ll be Four. more. days. Maaannn. I’m of course reading other stuff all week long, and happy to dump it when I get the notification of a new chapter. It’s over way too soon, and I’m stuck reading more ’Not Really OP’ stuff’ and giving PO’d reviews for leading me on. I’ve said before that I like the slice of life stuff, as long as there’s NO getting his ass kicked, and needing to ‘Level up’ to try again. I just could never understand why an author would hate their main character so much to give him or her no life, no friends, no rest, no fun, and then beat the crap out of them, and expect them to get back up and do it again. I actually really appreciate when the system favors our main character over everybody else - aw, just a little unfairly - too bad so sad for everybody else. I don’t need realism in a fantasy story. Believable / shmaleivable. I’m already suspending disbelief because it’s a FANTASY. Everything else is just part of the story. Superhero status check. Stronger than everyone, Check. Advances faster than everyone, Check. They can tell people or not - sometimes it’s fun to listen to the crazy reactions when people find out. You don’t send the JV team after the Super Bowl winners. I understand the need for Derek to build up to it. Everybody looking at him like he’s already a rockstar, he needs to downplay that before he gets his butt handed to him. When he is surrounded by people who are supposed to be his peers or even slightly above his level, and he pulls off something that he shouldn’t be able to do at his level, that’s the kinda thing I like about Derek. And then he just scratches the back of his neck and says aw shucks, twernt nothing. Thanks for the chapter.

Yaldabaoth

Oh, huh. Did not know that 🤔. Thats very damn cool, thank you 😎🤙