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Chapter 714: Council Chamber

"Right here?" Derek asked. "Right now? Just like that?"

"Why not?" Dave questioned. "Should I contact my father and tell him first so my family can hold a celebration for my achievements?" He rubbed his chin, then said, "Hmm… that may not be a bad idea. Father would never expect me to do something like that—neither would my brother. If I do… I wonder how long they would spend waiting for the surprise before they realize there isn't one."

"How much of what you do is predicated on how your family is going to react?" Derek couldn't help but ask.

"Not nearly enough," Dave said. "But you're right, this is about me, not them. There is no point in letting them know about any of it. They'll find out as soon as it happens, anyway. Since finding out that I Transcended all that time ago and that I accepted control over a system, my family has been keeping tabs on me—which is why my father knew about the invasion as soon as it was over."

"I see," Derek replied. "So then, what's the plan?"

"The plan? Well…" Dave held both of his hands out on the table, then he said, "Take my hand… both of you."

"Uh… okay?" Derek replied with a shrug, then placed his hand on Dave's.

"Kay!" Silvi's voice rang from her communication crystal, then she placed one of her paws on top of Dave's hand.

"Okay, I'm putting some trust in the two of you. Try not to cause a commotion," Dave said as he channeled mana through his hands and to Derek's and Silvi's. "Accept the notification when you receive it."

"A notification?" Derek asked, but Dave didn't even bother to answer. Instead, Derek's question was answered a moment later when the notification arrived.

…

You have been invited to [Davenresh Council] and have been offered a guest seat.

Accept invitation?

Note: Upon acceptance, your consciousness will be moved to the Council Chamber—leaving your body in an unprotected state. Please confirm that you are in a safe area before proceeding.

…

"This is a safe area?" Derek asked, even though he already knew what the answer was going to be.

"Of course it is," Dave said. "First, we are in Origin City, so we have the safety of the Origin System protecting us. It is the reason so many Transcendents live in the city—especially the ones who accepted control of a system. Otherwise, it would be hard to prepare an area that was 100% safe.

"Second, the area that I have prepared is as safe as one could get without the Origin System's protection. Out of everyone, my father may be able to break in after some time, but it wouldn't be easy. His earth affinity and skills are still a little more powerful than my own," Dave explained. "Finally, Hollis is right outside and would be able to warn me if needed."

"Okay, good," Derek said. "I just wanted to make sure."

"Which is always smart," Dave said. "It's good that you don't just up and trust anyone completely—not even me, and not even your best of friends. Always have a bit of curiosity and skepticism in your head. It will save your life."

"Will do," Derek said. "Now tell me about the guest seat."

"I'm glad you asked," Dave said. "Now that you are physically here with me, I am able to use a loophole and allow you to experience and learn some information that the Origin System doesn't particularly allow Transcendents to speak on outside of other Transcendents or a select group. My… retinue is a group that is allowed by the Origin System to learn such information. We have discussed just about as much about the rewards here as the system will allow."

"This isn't going to mess anything up, is it?" Derek asked. "You're not tricking me into becoming one of those seats like you've asked me to before, are you?"

"Of course not," Dave said. "It is a temporary guest position. They are supposed to be used to allow a prospect to gain some experience and to let the user in control see if the person is the right fit for the position. Of course, that's not how they are used, really. They are mostly used by Transcendents to allow their children to get a feel for everything. I was just over a century old when my father brought me into his Council Chamber for the first time."

"I see…" Derek said. "So it's completely safe?"

"It is safer for you than it is for me, actually," Dave replied. "Because usually, I require a specific oath for someone to enter my Council Chamber, but, as I said before, I am trusting the two of you. I will warn you, though, if you accept, I, and only I, will be able to see a clearer picture of your stats and skills. More of a summary, though, not the full sheet."

"Hmm…" Derek muttered. Finally, he shrugged. "You haven't given me a reason not to trust you. You've been a bit secretive, but that is understandable since you actually have to be with the Origin System monitoring what you say. So… why not? Am I good to accept the notification now?"

"Ready whenever you are," Dave said.

Derek took a deep breath, then focused on the notification again and agreed. Immediately, his eyes fell shut, and suddenly, he was hit by an intense wave of vertigo, and it felt like he was falling.

***

When Derek's head stopped spinning, he opened his eyes to examine his surroundings. In the center of the room, there was a massive table with a map displayed on it. Derek looked down at it, and after staring at it for a moment, he realized that it was a full map of the planet that he controlled. He looked over and saw Cydaria clearly labeled, along with Indria and Indaria.

Looks like the map is kept updated, Derek thought. Otherwise, instead of having Indaria on the map, it would have Astrus instead. He couldn't help but wonder if it was something that was automatically updated as events happened in the world, or if someone had to manually adjust and update things. If it were the first way, it would make things much easier. But if it were the second, that meant someone would need to be watching over everything at all times.

After giving the map one more good look, Derek raised his head and continued to look around. He noticed a light pressure fall onto his shoulder as he did and smiled when he glanced at Silvi. She hadn't had to accept any prompt like Derek had since they were still soul-bonded companions. When Derek accepted and his consciousness was sent inside, so too was Silvi's. She just needed Dave's help to get there.

"You made it… good," Dave's voice suddenly rang out from the side.

"It looks that way," Derek said. "Is this the same place that you brought me all those other times?" he asked.

"In a way," Dave said. "Before, I would bring you to an empty room made specifically so I could interact with specific beings that belonged to my system. In all my time doing this, I have only brought a few people inside—including you."

"I guess I should feel honored, then?" Derek asked.

"You may choose to feel however you wish," Dave said. "It is usually a good thing for the user I bring in, though, as it usually means that they have impressed or surprised me in some way."

"Gotcha," Derek said. "So, you can tell me more in here than you could back at your place?"

"No, not exactly," Dave replied.

"Then… why?" Derek asked, slightly confused.

"Well, since you are not part of my system's authority or a high Ascendant or Transcendent, I am limited in the things that I may tell you, as you know," Dave said.

"Yeah, I get that much," Derek replied.

"However," Dave said with a grin, "with the loophole that I mentioned earlier, I do not have to tell you anything more. In fact, I can just allow the Origin System and the Davenresh System to show you instead."

"What do you mean by that?" Derek asked.

"What I mean is…" Dave's smile grew wider. "It is not my fault if I accept all my rewards for my system with a system screen visible to all who may be in my Council Chamber, and someone who is not part of my council happens to see the information. That is on the Origin System for not covering up the information."

"Oh… I see," Derek said.

"And if you somehow find out about certain things because of the Origin System's failure to keep the information secret, then that will allow others to discuss those certain things with you," Dave said. "Do you understand?"

"Yeah, I think so," Derek said. "So, if there is something that you can't speak to me about, but I learn about it on my own because it happens before my eyes, then you won't be punished by the Origin System for talking to me about it later."

"Exactly!" Dave said. "It's the method that my father has used for millennia to introduce those he deems worthy to this part of being a Transcendent. So, once you know the main information, the Origin System will not see fit to punish me for clarifying certain matters."

"He showed me by doing the same thing!" a female voice that Derek had heard before sounded out from behind him. When he turned to look, he saw Aestra sitting in a throne-like seat close to the center seat.

"Oh, Aestra," Dave said. "You made it."

"Of course I made it," Aestra said. "I wasn't about to miss something like this. I benefit from it too, you know?"

"Of course," Dave said. "You all will."

"Uhem… Master Davenresh," another voice that Derek had heard before spoke up. Then a familiar elf stepped out of the darkness and into the light.

"Ah… you're… Sereph?" Derek asked when he recognized the man, and Aestra scoffed at his appearance.

"Yes, Sereph?" Dave replied.

"Are you certain that an outsider should be allowed in here during this important time?" Sereph asked. "If he had agreed to become a seat on your council, it would be one thing. But for a mere Mythical-ranked system user who is not even level 300 yet to be allowed in here…"

"Are you questioning my decision again?" Dave asked.

"Of course he is," Aestra chimed in. "The glorified pencil-pusher is always questioning your decisions. It has honestly become a bit annoying."

"I will have you know, Aestra," Sereph took a step toward the woman and continued, "I have done more for my master inside here than any of you other seats on the council."

"No, you haven't," Aestra replied with a shrug.

"And what have you done? Might I ask?" Sereph looked at her smugly.

"I have a very, very high affinity for lightning that I bring to Master Davenresh's system," Aestra replied. "You… have an affinity for dirt. You bring nothing to the table, as Master Davenresh already brings an earth affinity with him. You are here for paperwork and to do the tasks that the other members don't want to do. You are a grunt, nothing more."

"Aestra, that's enough," Dave said.

"It's not, though," Aestra said. "You will soon have to find another lightning user to take my place, as I will reach Transcendence sooner rather than later. Which means that I will no longer be here to address your secretary's concerns—such as why Mr. Hunt should be in here."

"Secretary? You…" Sereph started, but held his tongue and instead asked, "Why do you believe such a person should be allowed in here?"

"Because it isn't up to us. If Master Davenresh thinks he should be, then he should be," Aestra replied. "But if you would like my opinion, then it is because I met Mr. Hunt out in the real world in Origin City, and he has impressed me. So much so that I wouldn't mind requesting him as a member of my own council once I need one."

"Oh? Someone impressed our Aestra?" another voice sounded from within the room. When Derek turned to look, he saw that there were two more people waiting in their seats.

"Yes, Relic," another feminine voice responded. "If our own Miss Aestra has been impressed, then color me intrigued."

"Nice of you to join us, Relic… Kairi," Aestra said. "Especially you, Relic. You haven't joined us for a meeting in centuries."

"A little bird told me that we were about to see something quite historic," a small man hopped from his chair and then walked over. When he came into the light, Derek saw a dwarf that looked as if he had been chiseled from marble.

"Derek, meet Relic. Relic, meet Derek," Dave introduced. "Relic is the reason that we have a large number of blacksmiths appearing throughout my system."

"I see," Derek said. "You're going to have to tell me exactly how that works."

"We will later," Dave said. "Just know that his affinity for smithing and specific crafting is very high."

"And I am the reason that there are plenty of water mages to put out all the flames when those crafts go wild," a beautiful, dark blue woman with long, flowing aqua-blue hair said.

"Kairi, meet Derek. Derek, meet Kairi," Dave introduced.

Derek couldn't take his eyes off the woman. She was unlike any species he had ever seen. That, and the fact that her hair actually looked like flowing water.

"It's a pleasure to meet the two of you," Derek said. "I take it you are both high Ascendants?"

"Of course," they both replied.

"Most people wouldn't have the audacity to join Master Davenresh unless they were high-Ascendant or had some special affinity," Aestra replied. Then she looked at Sereph with a sneer. "But there are some…"

"That's enough," Dave said. "I will give the others ten more minutes to arrive. If they aren't here by then, we will get started without them. Either way, they will be rewarded."

A/N: Well... now I have to find out where the skunk is coming into my yard at. smh... I thought it sprayed my dog through the fence, but I saw it in my yard the night before last when I took my dog out. (Because I no longer just leave the doggie door open at night for obvious reasons.)

And yes, as some of you have pointed out, there have been a number of hints at system ascension and stuff throughout the series--it's just that we are only now getting the real specifics. But it's also understandable if those hints were missed, as we are almost at like... 2,000,000 words into the story.

Also, I have a spinal MRI coming up in a couple weeks because my legs go weak and numb when I sit or bend a certain way and because my mother, sister, and my dad have had cysts or cancer on their spines, so my doctor wants to check just in case there's something hereditary going on. Wish me luck. Might as well get all this bullshit over with in 2026 since it's already been beating my ass all year so I can go into 2027 with a lead hopefully. XD

Hope everyone has a fun and safe weekend!

Comments

Jordan

Tyftc hope you doctor’s appointment goes well.

Shazbaz

Wait a second... is our intrepid hero going to get his own system in like five more books?

Josh Kubo

Hope you solve your skunk problem. I’ve had the same problem in my yard for a couple years. I keep thinking I’ve tracked down where he could possibly hide, just to find out it was empty thank God -a trashcan lid wouldn’t make much of a shield when I poked the area - yes yikes. He hasn’t gotten my dog in about three years but every once in a while, something scares it or it just feels like it and sprays the yard and when I open the door, oh boy, can I smell it. Hope you figure out what’s going on with your legs. And thanks for the chapter.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Good luck with the skunk, and your MRI.

SunriseCV

Haha. Yeah. I walked around my yard at about dusk last night when I got a whiff of it, the whole time thinking, “what the hell would I do in my house shoes and only my phone in my hand?”

John

Anyone else think that Sereph is going to eventually leak info on Derek to the Void Emperor?

Kyle Davis

Hope the legs going weak is just a pinched nerve! I’ve had that before and it sucks. Also. Why make us waittttt for the damn rewards until next week

Iron Akela

Ah now we’re getting to some juicy stuff :o)

Doorda

That's basically a given... He's been jealous for ages

Stoney

TFTC! > "Okay, good," Derek said. "I just wanted to make sure." I mean this is excessive. How cautious is he becoming? The amount of discussion about how safe origin city is already renders this question moot, not to mention he's literally with Dave so it calls into question his trust in Dave. It's so...out of place. Unless I'm mistaken, there's no real cause either e.g. he wasn't suddenly lured into a trap by a friend/confidante. It's definitely rubbing me the wrong way. > "Which is always smart," Dave said. "It's good that you don't just up and trust anyone completely—not even me, and not even your best of friends. Always have a bit of curiosity and skepticism in your head. It will save your life." Except it entirely ignores the context. Also, he's trusting Dave and Dave's the one that did the invite so the question is actually stupid and precautions don't matter if you're asking the person who sets the trap if it's safe. > "Will do," Derek said. "Now tell me about the guest seat." >"I'm glad you asked," Dave said. I feel like this whole bit would come off better if Dave first explained the guest seat, that they're in a safe area etc. Currently the set up is like "Accept the notification" but don't accept it and we'll discuss and then accept. It feels both clunky and makes the char's come off as kind of dumb. > "This isn't going to mess anything up, is it?" Derek asked. "You're not tricking me into becoming one of those seats like you've asked me to before, are you?" > "Of course not," Dave said. "It is a temporary guest position The skepticism simply doesn't make sense. First the prompt itself says guest, Second words mean things and guest is self evident. I might be wrong but there's been 0 evidence of system prompts lying or being manipulated. It's like Derek just straight up distrusts Dave which is nuts considering everything and really undercuts any notion that he thinks Dave is a friend or is trustworthy. Again, this could be offset by discussing this first > "I see…" Derek said. "So it's completely safe?" Have I just not been paying attention? The constant need for reassurance from Derek is weird. At this point it feels like you're just making filler. Which is weird because this whole thing could be re-jigged so Derek doesn't come across as a fragile, timid person that can't make a decision unless there's constant, multiple reassurances. System ascension just doesn't seem that important like maybe eventually Derek will use the info but it really isn't that relevant. It's like people who play games blind Vs people who use guides. A bit more serious than that but still I'm not too happy with the constant cliffs, but idk if it's because I'm really invested in this or if it's just a general tiredness or if I'm just seeing it across the multiple stories that I'm reading. It definitely becomes a non-issue once published and it makes sense to have. I just wanna complain XD

SunriseCV

Dude… just… wow. Um… it’s because he’s with Dave who is the person who has reassured him through the series and is the only person who could be considered a mentor. He is also in a new place. Remember how many questions he asked Thomas when he got to a new place? But became bold and such once he realized he was already considered strong in the area? He doesn’t have that here. He knows he’s nothing but an ant to many. And then in Origin City, so many of those that he would be an ant to are there. And he has reassurances that Origin City is safe. But he’s never been there or seen how or why that is. Seeing is believing—even if you trust someone. And Derek is responsible for all his people, so he’s obviously going to be even more cautious with them.

ABTelford

Great chapter! Fun banter…which I’m thinking might lead the insecure secretary guy into betraying Derek’s secret in the future. Heh. Speculating is fun. And I’m sorry about the skunk and the MRI…bring earplugs. I hope all’s well with you and it’s just a pinched nerve.

SunriseCV

But tbh, it may be better on you to read the full novels if you’re feeling this way about everything. If you enjoy the story, but it’s not matching your pace. It’s also a lot cheaper with KU and all that. Haha But it does feel like the chapter is being read strictly to critique, rather than being read for entertainment. Comments like that—even if I know you’re trying to come off as critical but helpful—don’t help anyone and tend to do more harm than good. Because, well, I’ve been in the MC’s head now for the better part of six years and his personality is really just a heightened form of my own—minus all the anxiety.

Makix217

If it's your standard striped skunk, they go after cat food fairly quickly. I've live trapped and removed quite a few from my mother's yard that way. Relocated 6 in one year a while back... Anywho, thanks for the chapter and good luck with the imaging. Hopefully it reveals an inexpensive and pain-free solution.

Arrogant Savant

At this point the whole thing is a test of character, I have little doubt Seraph was treated like a god in the Davenresh A system but as he met more and more people better than him he developed an inferiority complex.

SunriseCV

I may check into live trapping, actually. I figured that’s what pest control would do if I called them, anyway.

Ben

Why? Just why? I can't even... Hope the Dr. visit goes well.

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter. Hope test goes well.

Havics Child

My guess, no. Maybe around book 25-30 if the series goes that far at all, its a transcendent thing.

eric holman

Good luck with the MRI I have one in December for my brain and spinal cord. Thankfully my new hospital has one of the really high tech ones so the whole thing takes like an hour max where 5 years ago it would take 3+ hours.

Josh Kubo

How do you keep the skunk from spraying when you trap it? Cause I have barn cats, so cat food is a thing I can do. I just don’t wanna smell like one or my truck while removing it. Thanks if you comment.

Doorda

I think he might get on a management team in 4-5 books

Stoney

It just seems like all of the progress since Thomas is entirely undercut. idk how he considers Dave a mentor when he flat out doesn't believe him. I'm not reading to critique but when it goes from confident to...timid? for practically no reason it's worth saying. He wasn't anywhere near as cautious with Sheen where it would actually have made sense. He also wasn't anywhere near as cautious with Aestra either. I also think it's valid when the change is this abrupt. The pacing is only 'bad' since we're right on the edge of a big reveal. But fair point. I'll just not critique since it's not welcome. EDIT: Or rather, the way I give critique. Which is entirely different to not wanting critiques.

John goode

I’m really enjoying the story. The only thing I’d like to say is it seems like it takes so so many ch to get anything done. It feels like some chs we barely get anything done. Again really enjoying the story.

Makix217

I usually have the trap in a contractor trash bag, large and extra durable. That way you can approach and move the trap without them seeing you. I've also used a 55 gal drum to keep them from seeing me if they've really torn up the bag.

Makix217

Yeah, also be sure to check with your local DNR / Game Warden / Conservation Officer. They may have guidelines on where you can or cannot release them. Or tips on trapping.

Josh Kubo

Thanks. I just remembered my mom tried to catch a bunch of baby skunks once. Because she said “ they were so cute and all alone” We of course, all laughed our asses off, but the shirt she threw on them and the carpet in the back of her van would not give up the smell- for years.