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Brother Bewitched 42 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-08-02 04:00:04
Edited:
2024-08-31 18:14:01
Imported:
2026-06
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The Battle of Serren's Wedding Continues.

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Alexia

I present my apologies to the storyteller: finally, all characters act according to our expectations. There is no inconsistencies neither frustration. So I was wrong in my previous comment. Congratulations for that final twist that fooled me and kept the suspense running until the very end. It was also nice to hear Paternia and Actonia verbalizing their evil plans before being beaten. Also note than the issues I pointed out as the lack of people attending the wedding don't seem important at all: when the storytelling is running well, I just don't mind. It's like theater: when you are in the story, you accept that just one tree figures a forest and one soldier an army.

Alexia

.... I wrote that details don't matter when the story goes well but still, there is one thing... Before the story ends, is there any chance we see Asryna in more appropriate clothes that this anachronic XXst century maiden outfit? 🙂

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>145391865

I'm glad you liked the latest chapter! Just FYI, I was going to have a "crowd" shot like in the earlier scene you mentioned, but I ran into technical problems. I hoped that people would forgive that lack of detail. You will see Asryn is something other than the maid outfit. Will it be male clothes of female clothes? Stay tuned!

CJ

Any update on what turnabout 4 will be out?😊 xx

Alexia

I can't stop thinking to this story... This episode ended up on a nice cliffhanger... 🙂

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>145391534

The previous chapter was intended, as you see now, as a "false ending" which is a technique often used where it seems all is lost and then there is the real ending. I couldn't say that after the previous chapter, though I still wish I had made the false ending more dramatic.

Joseph c guillory

Sorry I haven't text in a while. Been preoccupied a great Chapter love conquers all. Thank you for making it. I'm not sure why. I could not access to site?but I can now After many attempts. Thank you for the great story.

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>147479784

I've been eagerly awaiting your comments! Thank you and I am glad you liked the chapter. Also, thanks for noting the theme. Some may find it corny, but I feel it fits very well, especially as Serren accepts his future as a maiden. Not sure why you couldn't log in, but I'm glad its working now!

Gemma

Great drama and even more amazing images of how beautiful Serren is as a bride