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Helpless, Serren hopes someone can save him. Who will step forward? Times of crisis show true character.

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Taylor Galen Kadee

I have been building to this scene for several chapters now, and I am very excited to share it all with you. Please share your thoughts! Like and comment. I always enjoying hearing from all of you!

Alexia

Yo have delivered a nice variation on the "save the brand new princess" pattern. You have covered this pattern very successfully inthe past on text only format. Now you score in the comic category. It tastes different, and it's fine. Picture are OK. Still dark on my phone, but I don't mind so much when the story is good.

Taylor Galen Kadee

Yes. I do enjoy putting former men into these classically feminine situations. I spent a lot of time tweaking Serrens facial expression for maximum damsel in distress vibes. Will keep trying to solve the pictures

Alexia

Now that you're mentioning it, Seren's facial expressions are well done. So are his moves and stances. That is probably why the sequence works so well. Also, it's a good idea to have dressed him in a white dress for this scene.

Taylor Galen Kadee

Why thank you! It's really fun for me to put him in those stances, too! As I imagine it, he doesn't fully realize the way he's holding his arms, his wrists, but everyone else notices.

Joseph c guillory

Good chapter shocking development that seren went to the knight and not his friend like a damsel in distress

Taylor Galen Kadee

Glad you liked it. The story is diverging from the books with a different set of conflicts for Serren. However, there are still some scenes from the original book coming. Hopefully it will continue to be fun.