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Brother Bewitched 26 (Patreon)

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2023-11-10 15:07:06
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2026-06
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Devin takes strategic action as he prepares to move against Pattenia, but will his choice doom Serren to a corseted life?

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Joe Blow78

Wow this just so awesome!!!!!

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>121893545

Thanks! This came about after a couple rewrites and reshoots, so I am happy to see the effort was appreciated it. Maybe I will post some of the out takes one of these days!

Joe Blow78

I love to see the rewrites and the reshoots

Neha Raj

nice chapter! unexpected, but glad devin was able to fight it off. look forward to next one. keep going taylor

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>121924188

Thanks, Neha. Brother Bewitched gets among the fewest views of anything I post, but the passion of the readers is so intense that keeps me going!

Alexia
>>121905177

Thank you Joe for requesting, thank you Taylor for delivering 🙂

Alexia

Very nice episode that solves smartly several problems I saw in the plot.

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>122007624

I had thought all along to show that Devin was protected, though at one point I thought I would show it as a flashback at some point when Actonia would try and fail to transform him. I also have an answer for the Actonia surveillance system, by the way! There are so many moving pieces that have to be accounted for, including now Asryn, but it is all coming toward a climax!

Alexia

Serren had his share of being teased in any possible way, and it's OK, but the poor girl didn't had many time to deepen her relationship with Devin. Or, more generally, to interact with 'real men' (Runtick doesn't count). However, girl/boy interactions matter to build feminity. The first flirting scene of King Jordain amongst the berry bushes is a nice example, if you remember of it.

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>122068360

Yes, in my desire to keep some elements from the original book I feel I let the story drift away from the relationships with the guys. It is my intention to move back to into that as we will see Serren making a decision on who to pick. How could he struggle between Devin and Asryn? You'll soon find out!

Joseph c guillory

Well that was a big Surprise the male ego pushed out the female ego I Wonder what will happen to him and what He is going To Do. To the mage. By the way have you read the story men who would be queen again Both of them what do you think of?

Joseph c guillory

Actually I mean an error its Barnes and noble nook and goodreads and kobo and fnac.com I found out so far.

Alexia
>>122007624

The easy and quick way the gender spell is casted, I have perceived it from the start as an issue. It made Paternia too much powerful and made impossible for any powerful male figure to emerge in the story. You solved this issue brilliantly. I didn't consider the spying system but you are right, this one had also to be balanced and it's nice if you had taken this in consideration.

Alexia
>>122007624

So we know have Devin as a powerful male character and it is nice because this is IMHO what was lacking from the original book version. Consider that in three big volumes, no guy was manly enough to make love to the beautiful Serenina. On this department, Asryn's failure is abyssal. He is nothing more than the Paternia's escort boy, and is not even aware of his shameful status, and not daring to love Seren. I don't know how he will behave in the upcoming episodes of the comic version,, but he didn't achieve anything great until this point... 🙂

Alexia
>>122007624

Still, I would insist how nice it is to have Devin resisting to the feminizing spell. Because immediately it raises suspicion toward Serren's maleness. OK, the spell had taken him by surprise, but still... If Devin could resist to the spell, why couldn't Seren do so? Could it be that some hidden part of him was ready to accept this transformation and maybe even to enjoy it? I am pretty sure that this is what Devin think now. And with that in mind, he is not likely to ever help the♀️and beautiful Serenina to come back to her former inappropriate male form... 🙂

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>122007624

Of course, in the book I had made the spell much more involved in that it required a group effort. That was a problem I created for myself in this one. Now, at least, Devin doesn't have to worry about it. I am always reluctant to go into any spoilers, but you're reading of Devin's psychology is correct!

Alexia
>>122007624

It's not my intention to push you to spoil anything. Consider my comments as the ones of a Role playing games player suputing what happens and what will happen during the course of a game. You are the game master and you are not expected to confirm the players' guessing. However, this kind of suputing is part of the game, IMO. It makes the whole thing more real. And I enjoy it