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Some people just sparkle.

They can't replace the sun, though, so eat your vitamins.


I am absolutely terrible at pacing dialogue from my scripts into panels. Always ending up adding tons or deleting full paragraphs. And sometimes the art in a panel requires different phrasing.

Have to admit it's kinda fun, though... But it's a creative process that takes a bit too long at times.

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ArcBlue117

So far, I think your dialogue is pretty good, though. Also, put Angel with her sparkling in the doctor's room. The shining light helps people get their energy in the morning. I am sure there will be an arrangement that could benefit all involved.

Inujimma (edited)

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2026-11-03 05:00 If only I could be so grossly incandescent... (she's just too cute <3)
2017-11-24 06:39 If only I could be so grossly incandescent... (she's just too cute <3)

If only I could be so grossly incandescent... (she's just too cute <3)

Bianca (edited)

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2026-11-03 05:00 Ah! She emits light and blinds people....now I HAVE to hire her~ XD but yeah, crafting dialog is just as much of an art imo, there's this natural birth, rhythm, and death to conversation that can be tricky especially when factoring in the voice of a character. I dunno what your scripts look like, or how much you add or cut, but the end result is great, so +10!! :3
2017-11-24 16:09

Fran Love

Their faces are getting cuter and cuter aaaaaaa~

Sphinc

Are they taking vitamins or taking antibiotics to work with alien artifacts?

hushabyevalley

Vitamins. :3 They live underground 24/7, so there's no sun for healthy living.

Mason Dunne

UNLIMITED SHINY MOE, WE MUST HARNESS IT FOR GOOD!

Gavrial

"Cheers for giving it your all....aye" Sorry the Canadian in me couldn't resist reading it that way lol. I know it's been out for a while but love the script and the characters can't wait for the comic