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Hey yall! First, check out this initial sketch for a really cool reimagining of Dent and Kestrel, from Aleksandra Alekseeva! If this turns out as well as I think it will, there will be more to come!

Second, and more importantly, a heads up about the next grouping of chapters, as there's going to be a writing split that may confuse people. On Friday, I will be dropping Chapter 9 v2 and Chapter 10 but each of them will be including a portion of the finished Chapter 9 v1 I dropped earlier this week, plus a lot more content. I didn't like the fight with Aria starting and largely wrapping in the same chapter, so the first half of v1 will form the first portion of v2, with another scene added after. The second half of v1 will form the first part of Chapter 10, with a much stronger ending and another scene after that.

As I'm writing this, I'm realizing that that second portion of Chapter 10 may be best as a shorter standalone chapter, which may result in 9 v2, 10, and 11 all at once on Friday... Which would be cool too since that means Public Release chapters start a little earlier than planned...

But yeah regardless: large drop of content happening next Friday, though it will seem at a glance like less than it is since Chapter 9 is being split to be part of the new 9 v2 and 10! Hope you guys enjoy!

(Oh and look forward to your first glimpse at the power of a Rook-Class User 😉)

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Dude the guy

She looks amazing,she’s like a fairy.

Al Parks

Now correct me if I'm wrong, Dent/Kestrel has four wings as I see depicted in art work, which is really cool 😎

Adept

You had me at rook-class! Can’t wait to get into the power-leveling to get stronger.

Lyn Shirley

The art is cool, but I’m looking forward to the chapters. The Wardee’s need words.

gratch42

Chapter 10 & 11… ooh would that mean a new *story so far* up to 11? That might remove some confusion on the wip, rough, v2 versioning for my slow brain. Wonder where the von Bor chapter or prologue ends up… Badass rocket fairy Dent… interesting.

Brandon King

Haha, Grammy about to do WORK on Firesong. B0 incoming for my boy Rei! Better yet, Von Bor's appearance ought to mark the end of Aria or anyone else, complaining about the Sponsorship. Get. Off. Rei's. Back. Yall are welcome.

Iron Akela

She’s the record holder with 5, 4 wings and a middle bit. So yeah that art is sweet if those wings are like the final version!

Iron Akela

I so hope we get to see the Ivory Shield take on Rei AND Aria! Ooooh and Dent! And Guest too (he’s gotta help Chancery!). She’s a living legend who’s been given a reason to BE the legend again. To pass on her way of thinking and fighting. To hone young ones into the ultimate fighting force! And if Rook class users are as powerful as I think, she’ll be packing like a gazillion family sized cans of whoop-arse she’s gonna open on Firesong!

Heather Herren

That sounds awesome!!! Hopefully we get to find out if Rei can scratch Lennon now with Temporal Step

Sam

Honestly though, von Bor doesn't have to use the power of a Rook Class to beat Firesong. That would be major overkill. What if we are getting a scene from the frontline of the war and see Rook Class General Laurent in action?

saynt

to be honest im more interested in seeing the groups reaction to being trained by the ivory shield then seeing the power of a rook class user

Shawn

Can we get another THE STORY SO FAR pdf?