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Boom, fixed it, and Viv's hair! Let us know what you guys all think!

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Darren Dyke

I love seeing the cads!!

Sam Mason

Rei's frame is much more in line with what was in my head here. Nice job!

Zack Newcomb

Looks amazing!! Absolutely Love it!!!

DatGuyBidu

Beast mode rei was also great tho

Raymond Lenihan

It looks great, although I had a mental image of the scars being much more concentric around his arms, like circles almost, interesting to see them like this.

Francis

Love love love love. Exactly fits with how Rei is described in my opinion

Corwin

Looks fabulous

Darren Dyke

I had visualized them more linear. Like Naruto Sage of Six path mode with the black lines.

Marz

That looks sick!!

RudyB

Loving this cleaned up, colorized version.

Francis

Would love to see an illustration of the first date sometime. It was my absolute favorite chapter!

DatGuyBidu

Also shouldn't the scars be more length wise along the muscle fibers? I think the body would ossify along the muscle fibers

John Defoor

Looking great!! Keep it up!!

Francis

Except the hair! I nearly forgot it is supposed to be in a ponytail

Carolyne

I am going with it being artistic licence rather than medical realism. or medicine is just that much better.

Carolyne

I love the grouping and style. I also, LOVE the size perspective this was really well done. Thank you for sharing.

Kyo

Bruh, Catcher is bigger than Grant there

Holly

Hi, so...um... I'm new to this genre of artwork. Way beyond my ability - I mean the reflection in the metal! Amazing! Incredible talent. So many great details! ....so awkward topic - is it part of the genre artwork to make all of the males Kens and the females Barbies (if you know what I mean)?

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2026-09-06 19:00 I like that there is artwork being made. Not a big fan of this. Faces are weird. Arms are disproportionate. That said - its free so! yay!
2022-03-30 11:36

Preston Elder

Yeah, you're right - the guys should have some kind of bulge, and the girls would likely have less prominent breasts due to their level of physical fitness/activity (when you're pushing your body to eliminate almost all body fat, the breasts are often a big casualty).

Cora

Yeah the faces are odd. Viv's face is fine as it's in a pretty even shadow, but the way the light is hitting Catcher and Aria is off. Not to mention, Rei's face is way too feminine. Its the angle of the jaw, as well as the ear shape. If the jaw was a touch less angled and the ear a bit more squared instead of elfin, then Rei would look much moreasculine

Indrek Kelder

I have thought how their bodies might look like in terms of muscle type and i thought gymnasts might be the type - very lean in terms of fat, yet high functional strength and endurance. Some fighters are similar to gymnasts but there are more variations - some being lean in lighter classes, some have higher fat % etc. Gumnasts are more uniform imho. And in this fantasy world they should be somewhat genetically engineered and very selected specimens, so extreme fitness. This picture is quite good in these terms, except they probably should have more prominent trapezius muscles - current upper body looks little unbalanced imho, considering how they use their bodies.

Darren Dyke

Is this when catcher and rei fought?

Lyn Shirley

Use the hair from the mat. Viv’s hair is perfectly curly not simply wavy.