Last update for B&D Ch 10 before finishing it (Patreon)

Hey $5 patrons, here's the final update for the next Bruce and Danny chapter. I just need to add a couple of more sentences and it should be ready for posting.

I only have one thing to ask about, and that's the title of the chapter "The Second Worst News of My Life." Do you think that's okay, it's mostly to foreshadow a future chapter later down the line that will be titled "The Worst News of My Life". I guess I'm mainly worried it's too long a title compared to the other chapters so far, but maybe I'm worrying over nothing. Let me know what you think anyway.