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547 words written on Birthday Party today.

Not bad considering there has been NON-STOP noise and distractions and chaos ALL FUCKING DAY! :P

Happy with the intro though.

~Shadow~

Comments

J.T.

Love your intros.

Андрей Курылев

To be honest, the rating for the new story is surprisingly low. I am not a fan of threesome scenes, especially with an observer. However, the second part of the story was great and was written in your usual style, passionately and varied. Plus, there were some new details that were cool. Although I would have liked more angry conversations between the characters, it's clear that you're trying new things and experimenting. Keep it up!