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Chapter 1 of Born Unbound!

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Bye

Born Unbound is a great story. Aubrey has to be free. How can one with super strength realized the need to change, cooperate, and peaceful coexistence?

ElGrandeCaulk

Oof, she seems to have a short temper and likes to resort to violence. I wonder if being sent to a remote island would work ¯⁠\⁠_⁠(⁠ツ⁠)⁠_⁠/⁠¯. An island could backfire if all she did was go to the island and do nothing but workout/train and harbor resentment 😬

Matbat359 Matbat359

Love the story so far. I hope you can make a short story about yandere girl. Would love to see yandere Amazon maybe so thing like the movie obsession.

Andrea

It’s a difficult situation. Is her father wrong? No, but he’s not right either: locking her up isn’t the answer. Is her mother offering to pay for the damage? If so, she’ll never learn her lesson that way. Unfortunately, I think she’ll have to figure it out on her own. She’ll make a mess of things, she’ll face setbacks, but in the end she’ll find her own path and her place in the world. I just hope that along the way she doesn’t do things she’ll regret… too much.

Stealthwolfssl

Learn job skill's at a young age, then putting it to work, that how she will learn pain and other thing's. ^_^ the work force.

Bye

Agreed!

Chris

Theory time: I think Aubrey's dad is better than he seems. He doesn't seem to be afraid of Aubrey, he still seems to be in her life, even if their relationship is distant. He seems to have left when Aubrey was young, he mentions an incident at age 3 where he was thrown through a wall. Him not dying was a miracle, so I think the reason he left wasn't to protect himself, but to protect Aubrey. Because even though Aubrey has never felt physical pain, I think her parents were well aware that she was still young, and nothing would scar her more than accidentally killing her own dad at a young age. They decided it was better for Aubrey to have a distant father than none at all. But that's just a theory, can't wait to see it be totally wrong lol

amazonlover

Finally, we get to see Katheryn again. I love this story so far, and I think it has great highlights and a sense of innovation compared to traditional muscle-girl stories! Actually, compared to Aubrey, I like Katheryn a bit more. She is a relatively mature mother figure with a strong sense of realistic texture; she doesn't abuse her power, she properly disciplines her children, and she doesn't take sides.

Kurogane335

Damn. You're delivering a masterpiece here ! Definitely gonna add it to my list of inspirations for a story now xD

polar bear

What if aubrey put on her mothers necklace? What would happen?

Robolord

Who knows? We might find out...