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Being that big and strong doesn't stop your heart from breaking..

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SupahDupahSu

Noah wasnt very supportive but she’s behaving horribly, hope this won’t continue like this. Btw did she stop eating for 2 days?

Jason White

She’ll turn this around and be better for it.😊

ShadowDoctrine

"Being that big and strong doesn't stop your heart from breaking"...Noah! You have a bad bedside manner! Thank goodness you're not a doctor. When any person is at their lowest point or you're dismissing their concerns, failing to listen to them. All that is being rude. Noah takes time to really listen. Use body language that communicates and shows you care. Eye contact if you get her to lie down and let her tell her story without interruption.

mingusdewdew

Her life is crumbling around her because of something she cant quite control. At least she still has her BFF beside her, the friend who has been her cheerleader since the beginning; even when she didn't get to be an Amazon like she hoped she never got jealous or held it against Maddy..... Now kiss 😋

Bill Vu

Wow, I feel horrible for the both of them. Maddy was so excited about her transformation and now it's all coming crashing down around her, and she absolutely needs some emotional support. At the same time I can see where Noah is coming from. Maybe I'm reading into it too much, but in the span of a few days his life's turned upside down too, and the woman he loves has basically become a whole different person who dwarfs him in every imaginable way. To make matters worse it seems to him her personality is changing too, she's quicker to anger and use force, not to mention using him like a toy. He's scared of her and his fears are confirmed when she strikes him. Holding back or not, that's a major line to cross. I'm really rooting for them to work things out, but I don't know how you come back from something like that. I'm pretty sure Maddy will rise like a phoenix from the ashes, but it's also everything else around her that I find compelling...one of the things I enjoy most about your stories, Robolord

Robolord

She will certainly rise like a very muscular phoenix from the ashes! I'm happy you're enjoying the story! Both Noah and Madison do make good points, and bad ones. Noah should not have taken such drastic measures right from the get go, but he needed time to think. Madison should not have responded so angry immediately shutting the door on any conversation. She might be muscular, but that doesn't mean she's a bigger person than she is in any other way.