Hot Shit High Ch.2, Page 51(revision) (Patreon)

So I went to bed last night wondering why the sequence above felt a little off to me. Originally I wanted to draw Sharlene in a full backflip sequence, but when I tried this it didn't read well since the action needed to move leftward (away from Billy). Billy facing away from Sharlene on the page layout wasn't helping either. Instead, I decided to rearrange the panel positioning. Now we have Sharlene leaping up into a spotlight in the very first panel. After she slides her undies off we cut to Billy, reacting to her call. This leaves a little more transition space between the panels for Sharlene to strike her pose. Additionally I feel like these changes make the reading experience smoother from the previous page to this one.

I don't usually like making edits in post, but in this case I feel a bit better about this page, even though it didn't quite live up to the idea in my head... but what ever does, really?