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Sharlene steps up to the plate, and she's got something to prove.

Below you can see my first attempt with Sharlene's undressing sequence, and the subsequent changes. While the initial panels were fine, I felt this sequence would be better served with a single more dynamic shot. I think the change helped. I'm still a little hesitant with how tiny Marvin and Billy are in the 5th panel, but I wanted to show the distance between the characters before setting up the next sequence. Wish me luck!