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[Salvos] 690. Envy (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

Published:
2024-05-19 16:51:36
Edited:
2025-10-15 15:34:37
Imported:
2026-06
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(Removed for KU)

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Danijel Turina

"I... have no opinion of Salvos as a person on her own.” - oh yes you do, yandere chan, you just hate the opinion you have. :)

Zuuuuuri

man he is denser than a black hole

Danijel Turina

Is Taburas an archdemon of envy? I always assumed it was lust, but if it's envy, boy does this have a potential for going south in a hurry.

Danijel Turina

She sobbed where stood -> where she stood

Danijel Turina

“And am I not reliable too?" - the first team you were with, and whom you backstabbed, would disagree.

Dragonmaster_42

Thanks for this chapter as well! I'm sure you are busy, but let me ask my open question from last chapter again: I'm curious what the difference is between the recent (longer) Edith/Mavos chapters and the current (shorter) Netherworld chapters? Is the latter harder to write? Do you feel like it's harder to get right? Or does it feel like more of a drag as you have a long term outlook you want to extend and there is just a lot of footwork to be done until then? From my own attempts of writing I know all of those, so I'm curious how it is for a much more experienced writer such as yourself, MelasD! Thanks in advance!

Dragonmaster_42

Let me address the elephant in the room based on our recent discussions: Haec His supposed trust in Salvos this chapter is nice but without actions to back up the talk, he'll only increase their estrangement and push Salvos further away imo. Salvos clearly wants him to support her.

Danijel Turina

It's interesting how Taburas seems to be the complete opposite of Salvos, in a sense that she presents her selfishly motivated actions as altruistic, while Salvos presents her altruistic actions as selfish.