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[Melas] Chapter 67: Next Step (Taken down for KU) (Patreon)

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2020-10-06 22:43:50

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2026-06

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Taken down for KU

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Markus

The dialogues are fine. I wish I could write dialogues like that myself :p

2020-10-08 18:03

Personally, I feel like I need to work on my SoL/character interactions a bit more, but hearing that you like it reassures me! :D

2020-10-08 20:47

Faiir

Hobbit is copyrighted by Tolkien estate and I heard they go after people using it hard - you may want to use a different name for your halflings.

2020-10-17 08:53

Uhhh do you have any suggestions? My mind is drawing a blank right now, although that’s probably because it’s 2am

2020-10-17 08:54

Faiir

I think halfling's the only one I'd recognize. There are some suggestions here but I'm not sure if any are good https://www.reddit.com/r/worldbuilding/comments/71660s/alternate_names_for_halflings/?utm_source=amp&utm_medium=&utm_content=comments_view_all

2020-10-17 08:58

Faiir

Little folk sounds like fairies rather than halflings for me for example

2020-10-17 08:59

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