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[Salvos] 62. Bounty Hunters + Poll: Should I Changed the Last Chapter? (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

Published:
2021-02-02 21:16:23
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2026-06
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[Salvos] 62. Bounty Hunters + Poll: Should I Changed the Last Chapter?

  • Yes, you should change the last chapter. 5
  • No, you should not change the last chapter. 43
  • 2021-02-02
  • —2021-02-03
  • 48 votes
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(Removed for KU)

Comments

Zhaliora

I voted no but if anything make some minor edits to make it flow a little bit better. But no need to rewrite the entire thing in my opinion.

MelasDelta
>>52776197

Could you possibly point out which part felt the most awkward to you so I can edit it to flow better?

Njordt

"The Devil had been right" That's a rare sentence :)

J

"And{ }pounced on him from behind" - Add "I" in there "so much {of} a scream" - "as"

Melting Sky

I didn't really see any serious issues with the last chapter. My only advice would be that if you don't have an in story reason for "The Devil" to be the same one from the Earthly Abrahamic religions, you will probably get less blow back about it if you use a more obscure demonic entity from a less recent religion. "The Devil" comes with a LOT of preexisting religious symbolism and connotations connected to it. My guess is since Earth is a part of this shared multiverse, then you have a serious plot based reason for bringing a demon from our myths into this setting and the religious connotations are actually important to the story. If that's the case then roll with it, but be careful since religion is one of those things people can be very touchy about.