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MelasDelta

The reason why I put all these chaps out as fast as I could is because is my birthday on monday! Don't want to work on my birthday. Happy birthday me! I'll be 21! Yay!

Devil

Happy birthday dood

Melting Sky

Neither are really in the wrong, at least not morally. Although she should generally be a bit more wary and careful, Salvos lacks the experience needed to understand that even if they are still standing, abandoned buildings can be more dangerous and lacking in structural integrity than they might appear. Daniel knows Salvos is inexperienced, but can hardly be expected to walk around warning her about every possible mistake she could make. Sometimes bad luck just happens and people make honest mistakes. You can't really blame Daniel for getting upset given the situation and it's not like he was particularly nasty about it, He backed down and calmed himself almost immediately when he realized Salvos really didn't seem to know this place could come down on top of their heads just by leaning on a wall.

Sorry

Salvos is a cute little baby and she can't ever be wrong. Plus, princess.

Flying Goat

Pretty sure the wall was in the wrong here, for being so weak, and getting anywhere near Salvos.

J

"We crested {to} the top" - no need for the "to" here. Only other issue was a type of fucking as "fuckign" when Daniel was cursing.

Venalitor

"I’m not old enough to be called a Miss all the time by a child like you." - But 'miss', while for an unmarried woman, does imply youth. Edit: "Uh oh, Salvos did an oopsie. She hasn't done one in a while (I think). The last time she did one was when she made the Iron Champion idiots angry!" - In what way is that an oopsie? That was wonderful.