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[Salvos] 87. Cultist Scheme (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

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2021-03-05 12:53:32
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2026-06
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(Removed for KU)

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J

"Navigating through these overlapping rows of houses{ }exacerbated" - need a "was" inside the {}. Also "front {}f his head" - missing an "o". Finally, "an addition{} (+2) bonus to my" - "addition" to "additional"

Melting Sky

Seriously, why are you still writing chapters during finals? You should focus on your exams.

Melting Sky

There are quite a few errors in this chapter, but the one correction I think really needs to be made most is in this phrase. "to the front f his head." To fix the typo and make it parse better you might want to change it to "into his face."