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[Salvos] 109. Big and Scary Demon (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

Published:
2021-04-01 18:31:30
Imported:
2026-06
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(Removed for KU)

Comments

Lars Nieuwenhuis

It fits really well, lots of information, but clear and concisely written. Nice!

MelasDelta
>>56859062

Whew. Honestly, this chapter took longer than one of my usual chapters because, uh, I had to keep deleting scenes I added for no reason. Poor Daniel lost half his screen time XD

Turtle Galacticus

I would also say that this chapter goes to the point, and I think that's great. While I do enjoy reading long and slow proceedings, sometimes you "know" what's gonna happen and you just want it to happen instead of dragging on and on.

Lictor Magnus

I liked the pacing. Especially since Salvos has been thinking about it bothering her for some time, so there was a nice build up to her actually saying it out loud.

Alteron

Nice pace in a nice chapter

Moosh7

I agree with everyone else on the pacing of this chapter being good. Regarding future chapters, for me it depends on how interesting I find what's happening. If it's a big climactic battle, some very important (to the plot) conversation, or something just especially entertaining I probably wouldn't mind it being stretched a bit. Right now they're just going from point A to point B, and you're introducing a character we haven't been made to care a lot about yet, so it makes sense to keep things zippy!

Wolfclaw

I'm confused since when has edithe not been human

MelasDelta
>>56996850

Could you point out which part of the text says that? It must have been a typo, because Edithe is most certainly a Human.