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[Salvos] 139. The Hero (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

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2021-05-30 03:44:24
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2026-06
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(Removed for KU)

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luda305

Coffee ☕ --> werds?

luda305

🧃 ➡️📃❓

Noble Defect

I remember a time when he used to release a chapter almost everyday. Shame that those days are gone forever.

Nooooooooooool

What degree will you graduate with? Congratulations btw

AnonyGuy

The Cowardly Hero and The Reckless/Brave Demon

MelasDelta
>>60850804

Thank you! I had been doing pre Law since I was originally going to go to Law School, but I’m now going to become a full time writer!

Nobody

I'm here to support you because I like your story not because I want to see how you destroy yourself by thinking your a printing Maschine. So please relax, you are doing fine.

Richard McGowen Jr

What is Salvo's rate of emotional maturity? Is she capable of romantic attachments? It would seem unlikely since demons are spawned instead of born. It also begs the question what's the point of some of them having sex's? Another question is since salvos doesn't eat sleep or drink what exactly is her energy source? Does she need to breathe? Does she have internal organs at all? If not how can she truly be female? If she does have internal organs, then why? What purpose do they serve? Perhaps a better explanation as to what demons really are would help move the story along and provide explanations for what motivates salvos.

Ichigough
>>60868118

I personally don't see how any of that matters? So long as the author knows and uses it to influence how the characters act, it really doesn't need to be done as exposition...

Elle

Thanks for the chapter! Edith's character development has been really nice. It's very subtle, but you can tell that she's really coming into her own and her confidence is growing - and it feels very real and natural with the plot. She doesn't feel quite as 'main character' as Salvos or Daniel, but I'm really hoping that with this revelation of Daniel's we'll start to see him go through some development as well.

Elle

Also, I get that the wights are really smart and super tough to fight - but it seems like those two artifacts are so important that I'm surprised they hadn't been retrieved already. Is it really just that Daniels' hero stat makes him that much stronger? I'd think that a small army of 10 100+ leveled individuals could have also cleared it, unless Hoxle's divining skill is also just super rare? It feels a bit like our trio just accomplished something really big a bit too easily. Still a great read

MelasDelta
>>60900668

<3 for your other comment. And the only reason why Hoxle could divine where the Herald’s Brush is is due to Xidra finding the general location of it when Gexli kidnapped her. If it for Xidra, Hoxle wouldn’t be able to find it.

Venalitor

"However, it was certainly difficult due to how resilient they were, and how ." - Fragment? 'Star Forge'? Path of galactic conquest obtained.

lKutts

"My visioned fixed on the [Wights] befre us." There is a typo there.