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[Salvos] 172. Cosmic Compression (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

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2021-07-28 02:42:37
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2026-06
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(Removed for KU)

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Jonathan

Either the Demon is coming back, or Lily finally managed to communicate with her people. They are going to rescue her and/or they want to kill Salvos for having that class. And ... First?

Robert

Well that's a pretty ominous cliffhanger. Overall I thought the chapter came together really well. Little grammar mistake, Salvos is picking up and throwing multiple balls: "I picked up two at a time, running off and throwing it into the sky. The [Locust Vurats] that went chasing after it never came back." --> "I picked up two at a time, running off and throwing them into the sky. The [Locust Vurats] that went chasing after them never came back."