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mightguyishot

Edith/Daniel POV are better off being interluds. At this point they wouldn't be essential to the story n take screen time away from new character POV that will be relevant to the current plotline. Example headmasters, teachers, fellow students, HAEC?? Unless you plan on reintroducing them to the plot again (which I wouldn't advice, it would feel like a filler episode) I would keep them separate from the story. To be honest their story with salvos came to a natural end, so they really wouldn't offer anything new. It would be much better for salvos to grow n develop new friends that can grow with her. And Edith/Daniel can pop in and out of her life for nostalgia sake.

luda305

Salvos is also scheming.

Joe

Neato, thanks for the chapter

MelasDelta

Yeah that’s what I was thinking. I just worry that people will get mad at me if I make them interludes.

Turtle Galacticus

Scheming Salvos is a terrifying Salvos. I do not fear the stupid giant, but I do fear the rocket-firing 6-armed demoness.

Grumlen

She's a genius at playing the fool.