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Log Daniels

I’m first to witness salvos’ glory

Log Daniels

I finished and I realized I hate you with a passion. How could you do such s as horrendous thing, Cliffhanger Writer!

Jachin Nelson

Wow Salvos being asked on a date, didn't see that coming

Michael Gordon

She's finally going to get the worldly mystic class. I was afraid she would pass it up. Also, her going on a date will be hilarious lol

Log Daniels

Think of the dude’s thoughts at the sight of her disgust when she eats food. I can see that being taken the wrong way

Turtle Galacticus

This is some very interesting information we got! I like the explanation we got for the sleep schedule: though it may seem cheaty to be able to "dodge" sleep, she didn't have an inherent need for it in the first place. Also, the class-choosing discussion was very clear and understandable, and (I think) very logical, as when you're a high level space magician it's a given you can learn different kinds of space magics (while a race would tailor your body to a specific shape/element). Thanks for the chapter!

kyle stanton

Oh i can't wait to see what class she picks, I hope it is world mystic of the nexus but all i really want is to see what skills she gets and what the others she hasn't picked would evolve into.

Elle

love the explanation for sleep - everyone just needed to trust that you had a plan! also wanted to say that I'm really enjoying seeing this other side of Salvos where she isn't caught up in her relationship with Daniel and Edith. You can tell that she's getting more mature, but we also get to see how she would do things while left on her own. I think you've done a good job of keeping her core 'salvos-ness' while also exploring these other facets of her personality

Kane Carmichael

so, succubi were sex demons then, id be wondering about that, thought it may of been somekind of misconception, from daniel and edith. like they were sexy demons but not sex demons.

Anonymous

Hmm. I can see a somewhat disapproved of fanfic where salvos decides to “test out” the succubi option she was given last advancement rather than her current species…