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[Salvos] 205. Date (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

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2021-09-11 06:32:29
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2026-06
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(Removed for KU)

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David Brims

IMO, this chapter works pretty well. It gives the impression that Salvos maybe isn't quite ready for romantic love, and successfully conveys that to Nolan as well (given he seems to grasp her naivete). Which might mean he still has some hope if he keeps hanging around Salvos long enough as a friend. I like the impression Salvos gives, and I think Nolan's characterization is also pretty impressive here.

Mantiqore

I like it. Works pretty well to put an end to this while leaving things open for the future if needed.

Firinen

Their relationship would have never worked. Just his description of her?! Salvos sophisticated? Ha! She can be wehen she wants but otherwise she is so often simple and blunt in how she acts.

Aclys
>>67620502

His description seemed pretty spot on, just not in the ways noble folk and the like think of it.

Aclys

Thanks for the chappie, I do love how Salvos Seems like someone who never put skill points into her diplomacy/persuasion skill, then manages to roll 20 when it matters. Of course I guess in game terms she really has not had cause/chance to learn these social things before, not the way humans do and like.. Yeah, she's five years old, only a couple of those years being in the human realm to boot. Considering that I'd say she's quite the savant.

Knight Axel

Ah the big oof of the friendzone. Well done!

Zageron

it good. makes me want salvos to eventually figure out love and to have a panic attack ahahaha

Richard McGowen Jr

I would love it if saffron found out that salvos is 5 years old

Turtle Galacticus

In the end, Salvos being Salvos is still the best. Honesty is always better when you talk between rational persons

DANTE

after all of this my opinion is that Saffron is not really helping in social interaction since her prospective and what she think is important is too different from Salvos

Tarodan

I thought both the chapter and the date went pretty well. Salvos really has come a long way, hasn't she?

Viedu

I realy like this chapter, I also found it funny how Salvos handled the situation (and inadvertedly exposed her intentions to gros him out). :D

Hawkan Hawks

10/10 for him making them feed her a buglike creature xD If that is not efford I do not know what is.

Артём Усенко

Don't worry, it's great! The date scene was funny and the talk after very touching.

Frostbutt

She should've tried the shrimp, they're like ocean bugs.

Lemon juice 1206

I didn't see the sea food coming. I mean, crabs are kinda big sea spiders right? What a coincidence xD

Lestaron

It was a really nice and funny chapter. I would love to see more of Salvos struggeling with romantic stuff and maybe even fall in love (or have a crush) later on in the story

Ivactheseeker

I think it was written really well. Good job!

Joshua Little

Salvos did great, being herself seems to work for her. Thanks for the chapter.

Lon

Well, that was a harder chapter for me to read. Was felling so much cringe from Salvos asking for bugs and feeling pity for Nolan. But I did it!! I think Nolan is saying the truth, as an adventurer having flings is more common for him, and like what is happening with Salvos rumors are only that rumors.

Ethan Flohr

She's basically making it so she can essentially become whatever race she wants, right? Which means eventually she might develop empathy, love, guilt and such. Hopefully only the love part

Ethan Flohr
>>67629781

Why would she have a panic attack, if she can eventually love she'd still be some kinda demon of pride