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[Thera] 1.03 (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

Published:
2022-06-08 05:56:52
Imported:
2026-06
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(Removed for KU)

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Cold_Fischl

This is a good chapter. To have us learn about the dungeon both through the main character’s experience and simultaneously have us know more than them by using the school approach is a great use of perspective. Well done.

Cold_Fischl
>>85413770

overall great quality, nothing to complain about aside length, but thats always a problem no matter how much you put into a chapter imo. 10/11

David Brims
>>85413770

8/10 chapter, nothing tremendously exciting, but informative, engaging, and it gives good context for why she'd be drawn to the dungeon and why she'd eventually choose to stay there for a while.

Vector
>>85413770

Great, only one small nitpick, a turtle curling up into a ball? Maybe come up with a better phrase?

Captdeth

Thera Thera Thera. Ya

Lon

Was a nice chapter. I like the part of the two big creatures fighting and the Jellyfish almost hading Thera as a snack.