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[Salvos] 394. Responsibility and Consequence (Removed for KU) (Patreon)

Published:
2022-06-29 02:08:26
Imported:
2026-06
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(Removed for KU)

Comments

David Brims

Enjoying your story. It's wonderful! I hope you have more fun writing it.

Matthew Brubacher

I also found salvos from royal road, a website that is somewhat notorious for people writing essays about why they are dropping novels or complaining. This novel falls into many groups those people complain about like multiple viewpoints, moderate breaks in the action. Keep up the good work!!! I'm here because the novel is unique and very well written. Thank you so much for the work so far.

Elle

It is so good! Please don’t let a few loud voices overshadow how many of us are really loving this story. Thanks for writing it

Sean Hibbitt

I love the story melasD! There's character building, the characters all seem unique and with depth. I feel like I'm almost on the adventure along side them!

Maury

the last section would probably be a little bit more spicy if there was a bit more body language

Melting Sky

Why in the name of all that is holy would you bother reading let alone responding to random internet morons? Seriously, if some gibbering homeless guy staggered up to you in his tin foil hat and started screeching at you about your fashion sense would you pay them any mind? These people who are screeching into the void at you are the internet equivalent of ranting homeless nutjobs. It is a fool's errand to pay them any mind. (My apologies to the mentally ill homeless population for equating them with these internet dimwits and trolls.)

Lemon juice 1206

This pink snake say : Ignore them, ruining your day is their only goal, so let's not satisfy it and hit the mute button OwO

Jake Conway

Screw the haters, I enjoy the story

Remus

good chappie, no complaints here, and not because you said something

Lon

That is a good conclusion that you reached melasD, proud of you. Now moving to the chapter, cockroaches just don't die huh. Jake is still alive and kicking, when the Demons invade and lay waste in this meeting can Jake be like the first target? Peris can go together too, fucking politic prince. How the dude is a level 150 warrior is beyond me. Not mad at author, just don't like the character. Hope both die in a pyre or something.