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David Brims

Suggestion: 'Mors had said that she shouldn’t expect the people in these cities to behave in weird manners.' --- This should either be 'should' instead of 'shouldn't' or 'normal' instead of 'weird'. As written it's a double negative.

Beeees!

Thonk gud

Lon

Welp, better than almost dying and putting the little gang in peril. Chapter was nice, I enjoyed it.